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Shayar
Jun 6, 2007 2:02:47 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jun 6, 2007 2:02:47 GMT 5
Shayar
Shohrat ka nahi saudai shayar Daulat bhi nahi iska nishaanaa Bus bhatkay hai dil dil ki mehfil k mil jayay koi chehra-e-daanaa
Umr apni tehzeeb ko day jaataa hai shayar JazboN ko neeNd say jagaa laataa hai shayar
Safar-e-shayar kaho ya naam laylo tanhai ka k itna dishwaar hai jeena laal-e-khudai ka
Afkaar iskay aadmi kay bhoolay huay ahsaas JunooN iska mehw-eneeNd main say jaagoN ki talaash
Nahi pehchaany pawaazaiN iski daur-e-zamaanaa iska Dariya-e-haazir main hai shayr ik safinaa-e-fardaa
Tasleem-e-shayar hai gar aadmiyat ko pa jay aadmi Muaaf gunaah sub hoNgay gar muhabbat ko pa jay aadmi.
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Shayar
Jun 6, 2007 6:24:05 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 6, 2007 6:24:05 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Brijinder sahib
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Shayar
Jun 8, 2007 22:48:19 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 8, 2007 22:48:19 GMT 5
bohat khoob janab achi nazm hy thanx razi
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Shayar
Jun 9, 2007 1:19:29 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jun 9, 2007 1:19:29 GMT 5
I am thankful to u bot for the kind words.This brings out the difference between a craftsman n an artist,as i understand.
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Shayar
Jun 9, 2007 1:34:37 GMT 5
Post by muzafarmohsin on Jun 9, 2007 1:34:37 GMT 5
bohat khoob....very nice
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Shayar
Jun 11, 2007 1:04:47 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jun 11, 2007 1:04:47 GMT 5
Thanx a lot
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Shayar
Jun 18, 2007 2:23:50 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on Jun 18, 2007 2:23:50 GMT 5
umdaa ,... daad ke phooL aapki nazR ,...
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Shayar
Jul 5, 2007 1:42:35 GMT 5
Post by brijinder on Jul 5, 2007 1:42:35 GMT 5
I am really sorry for replying late.Am thankful for your kind words.
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