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Post by dnangrani on Apr 19, 2011 23:09:05 GMT 5
Pahli baar is manch par ghazal post kar rahi hoon. yeh manch mere liye ek den rahi hai jahan aakar main bahut kuch seekh paati hoon. Aae bhi yahi hoga isi Ummed se..
Gazal:
Mere khuda kuch aisa kar, Dil se mitaade teeragi "jalte rahen deepak sada, Qayam rahe ye raushni"
Ye shairi kya cheez hai? alfaaz ki jaadoogari Tere liye aavaaragi, mere liye deevangee!
Gurbat ke ghar mein dosto! faaqe abhi tak haiN vahi Haalaat gar yoon hi raheN, kaise mitegi bhukmari
Le kar udaasi aankh men, chupchaap baithe bazam meiN Aaya gaya koi nahi, muddat se jheli khamushi
Girte rahe, uthate rahe, khud se sada ladte rahe Is zindagi ki jung mein, haare kabhi jeete kabhi
Jalta raha kis aag men, jaane chaman sham-o-sahar Samajhega koi baagabaan ki kya kabhi lacharagi
Jaani hui vo raah thi, pahachaan ka vo mod tha Ik doosare ke vaaste phir kyon the ham tum ajanabi?
Aaine men yoon muskura kar dekhna kya jurm tha Haasil mujhe kyouN fir hui Devi teri narazagi..98 Devi Nangrani
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Post by Ghazalsara on Apr 23, 2011 18:22:58 GMT 5
kia khoob likha hay ,maza aa gya
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 24, 2011 14:16:22 GMT 5
devi g aap ki ghazal hamaysha k saath riwayat k aahang main hy boht khoobsoorat andaz hay .. daad qabool kijiay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 26, 2011 15:33:15 GMT 5
Devi ji intehaiee umdagi say aik khoob soorat nigarish ataa ki hai aap nay. Daad qabooliay.
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Post by dnangrani on May 2, 2011 14:12:01 GMT 5
Razi saheb evam Atif ji aapka bahut bahut dhanyawaad is mehifil mein mujhe saheek karne ke liye. apne prayason ko pesh karne ka yeh manch bahut hi protsahjanak hai Devi nangrani
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