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Post by brijinder on Jun 3, 2007 2:28:31 GMT 5
Sharing with you an old nazm.If you find traces of arrogance in it ,which was also the confidence in the new visions of the time,plz excuse as the expression of youth.
TalkhiaN-3
Tujhay aayaa na jo falak choonay ka andaaz Gunaah banaa di gayeeN parvaazaiN meri Ab mera qasoor hai kya teray ahsaas ki ghurbat Jo dabaatay ho bulaNd aawaazin meri
Jab tu mehfiloN maiN ho mast phirta tha Karti thi meri umr tanhaaioN maiN riyaaz Jab tu lagaa rahaa tha beparwaa kehkehay Samajh rahaa thaa main khyaaloN kay andaaz
MaiNnay ik ahud pay jiya hai zeest ka lamha lamha Tunay tab jisay junooN ka naam diya ZameeN jisko samajh na paayee AasmaaN nay uska ahatraam kiya
Teray rutboN ki nahiN ab koi kashish baqi Samjhay to yeh bhi hai ik kamaal-e-fun mera Jo bus riwaayutoN maiN dhal kar kay banay NahiN ab woh mouzoo-e-sukhan mera
MaiN to khaaboN kay geet banaauNga Aur wusa_t-e-afkaar say sajauNga Tujh maiN himmat ho to aa jaanaa Varnaa akaylay hi gungunaauNga --------------------------------------
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 3, 2007 5:41:24 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob
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Post by muzafarmohsin on Jun 8, 2007 23:20:46 GMT 5
bohat acha qalaam
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Post by brijinder on Jun 11, 2007 1:04:27 GMT 5
I am thankful to both of u for the kind words.
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Post by kanwal on Jun 18, 2007 2:27:04 GMT 5
wahh ,... bohat khoob ,... daad e guL aapke liye ,...
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Post by brijinder on Jul 5, 2007 1:43:30 GMT 5
Once again I am really very sorry for replying so late.Thanx a ton for the appreciation.
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