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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 29, 2008 19:04:07 GMT 5
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zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 30, 2008 11:57:11 GMT 5
Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
bohat shukria Rafi saheb is khubsoorat ghazal ko share kerney ka
Khaksar
Qamar
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zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Sept 30, 2008 15:09:35 GMT 5
Salam Rafi sahib ,
Bahut Khoobsorat Ghazal share ki hai appne ......
Daad qabool farmaeay.....
Sada Khush raheay..........
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Post by naheedv on Sept 30, 2008 21:34:27 GMT 5
Rafi saahab, buhat shukriya Saeed kee ghazal post karne kaa.
Saeed, ghazal buhat achootee hai aur mujhey zeyaadah iss liye bhee pasaNd aayi hai ke ye mere mizaaj se buhat mutaabaqat rakhti hai. ghazal ke tamaam she'r hi be.had rawaaN davaaN haiN. ye aakhiri 2 she'r tau kyaa hee khoob hain, waaH
Haan tire ba'd jee rahe haiN hum ye bhee tau hosla hamaaraa hai
apne eemaan se bataa mujh ko kyaa mire bin tiraa guzaara hai
iss umdah kaavish par daad haazir hai. zor.e.qalam aur zeyaadah!
shukriya Naheed
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Post by saeedsaeed on Oct 1, 2008 0:40:15 GMT 5
aoa naheed shaiba rafi shaib zehrab sb zaki sahib thanks ap ny ghazal pasand farmaye aur apni qeemati raye sy nawaza, jab koye es trah tasra karta hy ,meyre kalam par tu meyre hosly mein eezafa hota hy
again thanks mubashir
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Oct 1, 2008 8:38:21 GMT 5
saeed sahab
taza khayalat per mabni ye ghazal acchi lagi.ghasoosan phaila panchvan aur satvan shair bohot acchay lagay.dad hazir hay
dr zagham abidi
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Post by saeedsaeed on Oct 1, 2008 13:56:49 GMT 5
aoa zagham ap ny apni qeymati raye sy nawaza aur ghazla ko psand kiya
par agar ap tafseealn tabsra karty ghazal par to zeyda aacha lagat? bahar hall
thanks
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 3, 2008 14:40:04 GMT 5
boht achi ghazal hy chotti behr main achay mazameen taraashay hain wah wah saeed isi tara apna safar jaari rakho
raftgan neend jo urraatay hain yeh mri maut ka ishra hy
aap ki salaamti k liay boht see duaain thanx razi
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Post by saeedsaeed on Oct 3, 2008 16:54:25 GMT 5
aoa razi shiab aik bat ap sy share karna chahta hon, jab main ny ye ghzal rafi shaib ko es forum par paster karny k liye dii thy tu tab sy hy ap ki qeemati comments ka intezar karny lga tha, because i know k ap hy mujhy aur ghazal ko samajh sakeen gain
aur ALLAH ka shukar hy k ap ny es ghazal ko pasand kiya aur dadd sy nawaza, bus ap duwa kiya karain , INSHAHALLAH main ap ko es si bhi acchy ghazlain keh kar sunawoon ga
again hosla afzaye ka shukriya
take care remember me in yours kind prayers ap ka mubashir saeed
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roshy
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by roshy on Nov 12, 2008 18:40:40 GMT 5
hello its nice to see very nice appriciating comments on ur gazal , its really nice gazal wishing a very bright future as a poet bye
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Post by saeedsaeed on Nov 12, 2008 21:59:30 GMT 5
salam roshy thanks for appreciating my ghazal and praying for my nest future as a apoet, plz pray for me and also for my poetry i will share such poetic things which will be amazings.INSHAHALLAH TAKE CARE BYE
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 7, 2009 20:22:58 GMT 5
Wah kamal ki soch aur sehat mand mazameen haiN! Har aik sher khoob hai, Daad Qabool kijiay.
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