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Post by khalid on Oct 7, 2007 22:47:50 GMT 5
''aik naara tha tumhaara mujh ko jab haasil kiya amn o khush,haali k is dherti pe mailey chaahiyeN maslehat, laalach, riyakaari ko ker do khatm aaj railiyoN ko aik ker do, mujh ko reilay chaahiyeN''
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 8, 2007 15:23:11 GMT 5
Guzara hai!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 8, 2007 22:39:33 GMT 5
hahaaaaaaa
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Post by khalid on Oct 9, 2007 5:15:01 GMT 5
aqalmandoN ko naaqid ka ishaarey per ishaara hai magar apna to aisey hi ''guzaare'' per guzaara hai
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Post by khalid on Oct 9, 2007 5:15:39 GMT 5
aadab!
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Post by Shaheen on Oct 10, 2007 13:50:26 GMT 5
aqalmandoN ko naaqid ka ishaarey per ishaara hai magar apna to aisey hi ''guzaare'' per guzaara hai Wahhhhhhhh
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 10, 2007 22:39:28 GMT 5
aqalmandoN ko naaqid ka ishaarey per ishaara hai magar apna to aisey hi ''guzaare'' per guzaara hai Wahhhhhh Khalid sahib
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Post by khalid on Oct 11, 2007 5:04:53 GMT 5
aqalmandoN ko naaqid ka ishaarey per ishaara hai magar apna to aisey hi ''guzaare'' per guzaara hai Wahhhhhhhh aadaab!
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Post by khalid on Oct 11, 2007 5:08:49 GMT 5
aqalmandoN ko naaqid ka ishaarey per ishaara hai magar apna to aisey hi ''guzaare'' per guzaara hai Wahhhhhh Khalid sahib janaab aatif sb jaisey kohna mashq aur qaadir ul kalaam shuaraa kee aisee daad per hi to ham jeisey choty motey qita go shua,raa ka guzaara hai!
she'r ki pasandeedgee ka shukriya!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 11, 2007 18:52:37 GMT 5
Khalid sahib! Ab aap kasr-e-nafsi say kam lay rahay haiN aur shaminda karnay maiN bhi aap ka jawab nahiN. Rahi meray kuhna mashq honay wali baat, janab hum kahaN, hum tau hanooz tifl-e-maktab haiN. Qadir-ul-kalami tau aap jaisay senior shu;araa ka muqaddar thehri. Bhar hall bahut Shuriya. Allah aap ka hami-o-nasir ho Ameen Atif Mirza
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Post by khalid on Oct 16, 2007 6:51:31 GMT 5
Khalid sahib! Ab aap kasr-e-nafsi say kam lay rahay haiN aur shaminda karnay maiN bhi aap ka jawab nahiN. Rahi meray kuhna mashq honay wali baat, janab hum kahaN, hum tau hanooz tifl-e-maktab haiN. Qadir-ul-kalami tau aap jaisay senior shu;araa ka muqaddar thehri. Bhar hall bahut Shuriya. Allah aap ka hami-o-nasir ho Ameen Atif Mirza atif sb qaadir ul kalaam to wo ho sakta hai jis ka koii kalaam hota hai. halaat e haazera per do chaar qetaat keh leine se koii shaair nahiN ban jaata!
aap maasha allah ghazal go shaair haiN, aur aik maqaam rakhtey haiN. maiN ne to sirf az raah e tafannun aapke guzaare waale tabserey per sirf apni majboori bayaan ki thee.
dua go!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 16, 2007 12:27:01 GMT 5
Mohtaram Khalid Sahib! Sha'er mana woh hota hai jis k paas kalam ho, laikin mairi nazar main woh bara sha'er hota hai jo halaat-e-hazira per apna mutma-e-nazar zaroor bayan karay. Hum log tau koi bara saneha ho tau shayed aik aadh she'r likh daiN magar aap tau itnay hassas lagtay haiN keh choti choti baatoN ko mehsoos kar kay unhaiN hum logoN tak pohncha detay haiN. Meri tamam gustakhiyaN muaan kijeay ga. Al-batta bay laag tabsiray kay lieay tayyar rahieay ga. KiyooN keh humaiN jo bhi lafz-o-she'r achha lagay ya bura ussi andaz say uss kay baray maiN arz kar detay haiN, shayed yeh aik buri aadat hai. Koshish karooN ga keh iss per qaboo pa sakooN. Shukriya. Allah aap ka hami-o-nasir ho aur apko apna Fazl, Rehmat aur Raza atta farmaay.
Talib-e-dua Atif Mirza
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Post by khalid on Oct 16, 2007 20:57:01 GMT 5
Mohtaram Khalid Sahib! Sha'er mana woh hota hai jis k paas kalam ho, laikin mairi nazar main woh bara sha'er hota hai jo halaat-e-hazira per apna mutma-e-nazar zaroor bayan karay. Hum log tau koi bara saneha ho tau shayed aik aadh she'r likh daiN magar aap tau itnay hassas lagtay haiN keh choti choti baatoN ko mehsoos kar kay unhaiN hum logoN tak pohncha detay haiN. Meri tamam gustakhiyaN muaan kijeay ga. Al-batta bay laag tabsiray kay lieay tayyar rahieay ga. KiyooN keh humaiN jo bhi lafz-o-she'r achha lagay ya bura ussi andaz say uss kay baray maiN arz kar detay haiN, shayed yeh aik buri aadat hai. Koshish karooN ga keh iss per qaboo pa sakooN. Shukriya. Allah aap ka hami-o-nasir ho aur apko apna Fazl, Rehmat aur Raza atta farmaay. Talib-e-dua Atif Mirza huzoor masbat tanqeed ho ya manfi, ham to her do ko khanda peishaani se brdaasht kerne ka hosla rakhtey haiN. lekin uska javaab deina hamaara aur tanqeed jaari rakhna aapka haq hai. aap zaroor apna kaam jaari rakhye. merey khayalaat se aapka muttafiq hona qat'an zaroori nahiN.
yahaN ye kehta chalooN k halaat e haazera per her aik ka ittefaaq zaroori nahiN, jabke lab o ruksaar, kaakul o geisoo, husn o ishq, firaaq o visl ki yaksaaniyat se bherpoor shaari per dunya muttafiq balke aashiq hai. khaaboN ki dunya haqeeqi dunya se zyaada haseen rahi hai sada sey! isi liye is sheeshey k gher meiN patharoN se bachna na mumkin hai.
aapki tareef se zyaada tanqeed ka muntazir aur dua go, khaalid.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 23:57:18 GMT 5
Janab hum tau aap ko "Hazir-ul-Kalaam" maan chukay haiN!
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