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Post by khalid on Jan 28, 2008 8:57:48 GMT 5
zindgee hooN vusat e saagar meiN hooN aur simat jaooN to ik gaager meiN hooN
teh ko dhundla dooN meiN sath e aab se munqalib toofaan hooN, kanker meiN hooN
jo wujood e zan ka hai daaee baRa laagher o lachaar uske gher meiN hooN
be amal jitna hooN, utna mustanid maiN her ik masjid meiN her mander maiN hooN
hooN unhiiN afvaaj ka naara bhi meiN mulk jinka, jinki maiN THoker meiN hooN
hathiyoN sey rondtey ho meira naam maiN ababeeloN k her lashker meiN hooN
ker lo bastiee chaNd per aabaad tum maiN hilaal e eid key chak'kr maiN hooN
kaan meiN aazaN sey khaalid aaj tak jab se kholi aaNkh is mehsher meiN hooN
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 28, 2008 17:56:46 GMT 5
hooN unhiiN afvaaj ka naara bhi meiN mulk jinka, jinki maiN THoker meiN hooN
wah bahut umda khial hay dad qabooleay ga
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Post by khalid on Jan 28, 2008 19:52:52 GMT 5
hooN unhiiN afvaaj ka naara bhi meiN mulk jinka, jinki maiN THoker meiN hooN wah bahut umda khial hay dad qabooleay ga mohtaram malik sb. aapki hausela afzaii ke liye mamnoon hooN!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 28, 2008 22:21:02 GMT 5
zindgee hooN vusat e saagar meiN hooN aur simat jaooN to ik gaager meiN hooN
teh ko dhundla dooN meiN sath e aab se munqalib toofaan hooN, kanker meiN hooN
jo wujood e zan ka hai daaee baRa laagher o lachaar uske gher meiN hooN
be amal jitna hooN, utna mustanid maiN her ik masjid meiN her mander maiN hooN
hooN unhiiN afvaaj ka naara bhi meiN mulk jinka, jinki maiN THoker meiN hooN
hathiyoN sey rondtey ho meira naam maiN ababeeloN k her lashker meiN hooN
ker lo bastiee chaNd per aabaad tum maiN hilaal e eid key chak'kr maiN hooN
kaan meiN aazaN sey khaalid aaj tak jab se kholi aaNkh is mehsher meiN hooN bohat khoobsoorat ghazal Khalid sahib aap sanjeeda shairi bhi khoob kartay haiN
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zaamin
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by zaamin on Jan 28, 2008 23:21:43 GMT 5
hathiyoN sey rondtey ho meira naam maiN ababeeloN k her lashker meiN hooN
ker lo bastiee chaNd per aabaad tum maiN hilaal e eid key chak'kr maiN hooN
bahutt khoobsoorat ghazal khalid saahib meri aor se daad qabool farmaayen zaamin
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Post by khalid on Jan 29, 2008 4:30:32 GMT 5
aapki musalsal hausela afzaii ka shukriya rafi sb!
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Post by khalid on Jan 29, 2008 4:32:10 GMT 5
aadaab arz hai mohtaram zaamin saaheb!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 29, 2008 20:28:46 GMT 5
Wah Khalid Sahib! Kia umda ghazal ataa ki hai! Daad hazir hai. Aik aik sher qabil-e-ghaur aur qabil-e-daad.
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Post by khalid on Jan 30, 2008 10:29:29 GMT 5
Wah Khalid Sahib! Kia umda ghazal ataa ki hai! Daad hazir hai. Aik aik sher qabil-e-ghaur aur qabil-e-daad. mohtaram aatif sb aapi hausela afzaii k liye intehaii mamnoon hooN!
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Post by ibnesiddique on Jan 30, 2008 10:41:17 GMT 5
Khalid bhai
salaam arz hai
aap ke qit'aat ki tarah aap ki ye ghazal bhi bahot pasand aayee
daad qubool farmaaiye
amjad
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Post by khalid on Jan 30, 2008 19:18:45 GMT 5
Khalid bhai salaam arz hai aap ke qit'aat ki tarah aap ki ye ghazal bhi bahot pasand aayee daad qubool farmaaiye amjad mohtaram aadab!
aap haiN kahaN??? aaj kaafi arsey k baad aapko deikha! ab to puloN ke neeche sey kitnee hi ''ghazleN'' nikal chuki haiN ;D khuda kare k aap khairiyat se masroof rahey hoN!
aapki daad o tehseen k liye aapka mamnoon, khaalid!
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Post by ziabaloch on Feb 2, 2008 2:14:57 GMT 5
Khalid bhaa'ii, aadaab ! kaise mizaaj haiN janaab ?? aap ko yahaaN dekh kar mujhe utnnii hii Khushii ho rahii hai jitnii k aap ko mujhe dekh kar ! nehaayat sust insaan hooN , is liye ta'Kheer ho jaatii hai ! aur phir aap jaise dostoN ke saath yeh mu'aamala kuchh ziyaada hotaa hai is liye k aap jaise mehrbaan is ka taHammul rakhte haiN ! varna har kisii ki baat naheeN ! mujhe yaqeen hai k aap merii kahii daad se ziyaada an kahii daad ko maHsoos kareN ge ! aap ka kalaam ain mere mizaaj ke mutaabiq hotaa hai ! so pasand na aane ka to savaal hii naheeN uThtaa ! to janaab-e-man be-shumaar daad ! shukriya Zia Baloch
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Post by khalid on Feb 3, 2008 7:19:00 GMT 5
Khalid bhaa'ii, aadaab ! kaise mizaaj haiN janaab ?? ba khair alhamdolillah! aap ko yahaaN dekh kar mujhe utnnii hii Khushii ho rahii hai jitnii k aap ko mujhe dekh kar ! janaab maiN to yahan utna hi puraana hooN jitna ye forum! nehaayat sust insaan hooN , is liye ta'Kheer ho jaatii hai ! aur phir aap jaise dostoN ke saath yeh mu'aamala kuchh ziyaada hotaa hai is liye k aap jaise mehrbaan is ka taHammul rakhte haiN ! varna har kisii ki baat naheeN ! mujhe yaqeen hai k aap merii kahii daad se ziyaada an kahii daad ko maHsoos kareN ge ! bhaii mujhey koii gila nahiN ager daad na miley, lekin mujhey ye to pata chale k aik hamnava ney meiree kaavish peRh lee! ;D aap ka kalaam ain mere mizaaj ke mutaabiq hotaa hai ! so pasand na aane ka to savaal hii naheeN uThtaa ! to janaab-e-man be-shumaar daad ! shukriya na shaaer hooN, na shaaer ka walad hooN ghazal goee sey bilkull na balad hooNaapki daad ka to shumaar hi nahiN hai! is sey baRi baat aur kya ho sakti hai k aap meirey hamnava haiN! daad k liye shukriya huzoor!Zia Baloch
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Post by kanwal on Feb 12, 2008 3:17:38 GMT 5
zindgee hooN vusat e saagar meiN hooN aur simat jaooN to ik gaager meiN hooN
teh ko dhundla dooN meiN sath e aab se munqalib toofaan hooN, kanker meiN hooN
jo wujood e zan ka hai daaee baRa laagher o lachaar uske gher meiN hooN
be amal jitna hooN, utna mustanid maiN her ik masjid meiN her mander maiN hooN
hooN unhiiN afvaaj ka naara bhi meiN mulk jinka, jinki maiN THoker meiN hooN
hathiyoN sey rondtey ho meira naam maiN ababeeloN k her lashker meiN hooN
ker lo bastiee chaNd per aabaad tum maiN hilaal e eid key chak'kr maiN hooN
kaan meiN aazaN sey khaalid aaj tak jab se kholi aaNkh is mehsher meiN hooN Wah bohat khoob khalid sahiB ,... Har sher aik moti ki maanid nazr aaya jo aap ne bohat hi umdagi se ghazl ki dori meiN piroyaa hai ,.... Khuda tallaH aapko humesha khush rakhe ,....Ameen daad ke phooL aapki khidmat meiN haaziR haiN ,...
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Post by khalid on Feb 19, 2008 20:03:23 GMT 5
zindgee hooN vusat e saagar meiN hooN aur simat jaooN to ik gaager meiN hooN
teh ko dhundla dooN meiN sath e aab se munqalib toofaan hooN, kanker meiN hooN
jo wujood e zan ka hai daaee baRa laagher o lachaar uske gher meiN hooN
be amal jitna hooN, utna mustanid maiN her ik masjid meiN her mander maiN hooN
hooN unhiiN afvaaj ka naara bhi meiN mulk jinka, jinki maiN THoker meiN hooN
hathiyoN sey rondtey ho meira naam maiN ababeeloN k her lashker meiN hooN
ker lo bastiee chaNd per aabaad tum maiN hilaal e eid key chak'kr maiN hooN
kaan meiN aazaN sey khaalid aaj tak jab se kholi aaNkh is mehsher meiN hooN Wah bohat khoob khalid sahiB ,... Har sher aik moti ki maanid nazr aaya jo aap ne bohat hi umdagi se ghazl ki dori meiN piroyaa hai ,.... Khuda tallaH aapko humesha khush rakhe ,....Ameen daad ke phooL aapki khidmat meiN haaziR haiN ,... aapke phooloN ka shukriya! aur khusoosan aapki pur khuloos duaaoN ka!
aapko shaadi ki mubaarakbaad di thee maiN ney, uske baad wo thread ghaaeb hi ho gaya. bhar haal aapko zindgee ki naii raahoN per qadam rakhna mubaarak ho aur aap hameisha khush o khurram raheN! aameen!
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