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Post by khalid on Jan 3, 2008 23:05:19 GMT 5
mustanad hai uska fermaaya hua jo kaha sherfoo ne sermaaya hua
yaad aaya baad bibi key hameN aap ne mukka tha lehraaya hua
aaj ke meiyaar sey wo sur meiN hai be sura her shakhs ka gaaya hua
door se dikhta hai mujh per aaj bhi khaatey peetey gher meiN sab khaaya hua
khoon key rishtey haiN sab sookhey shajar aera gheira her ghana saaya hua
aajkal hooN gheir haazir gher se maiN aajkal susraal hai aaya hua
deir thee daada meirey hone ki bas gher meiN daadi phophiyaN taaya hua
maulvee jitna tha seedha chaahiye usqadar hi bal hai wo khaaya hua
aajkal to maN behen bhaii ka pyaar sab gina jaaney laga, maaya hua
aap ne loota jo ohdoN ke tufail aapka zaati wo sermaaya hua
pee magar paani zara tazeem sey hai ye khaala sey amalvaaya hua
suit fashion ban nahiN sakta kabhi cheap se derzi se silvaaya hua
ham kareN gey is ki tehqeeqaat bhi ham ne hai ye qatl kervaaya hua
jo bhi maana baat khaalid ki wo khud saath se pehley hai sthyaaya hua
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 4, 2008 9:55:14 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat tanz o mezah Khalid sahib bohat khoob
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Post by khalid on Jan 4, 2008 19:14:39 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat tanz o mezah Khalid sahib bohat khoob shukriya rafi sb!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 6, 2008 0:53:24 GMT 5
khalid bhaai bohat khoob khaas taur par yeh shair yaad aaya baad bibi key hameN aap ne mukka tha lehraaya hua thanx razi
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Post by khalid on Jan 6, 2008 8:44:08 GMT 5
khalid bhaai bohat khoob khaas taur par yeh shair yaad aaya baad bibi key hameN aap ne mukka tha lehraaya hua thanx razi aadaab arz ha razi bhaii! ye ghazal wqaii beithey bithaaey huii aur isko maiN ne mann o ann bagheir kisi editing ke post ker diya!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 6, 2008 20:24:14 GMT 5
mustanad hai uska fermaaya hua jo kaha sherfoo ne sermaaya hua
yaad aaya baad bibi key hameN aap ne mukka tha lehraaya hua
aaj ke meiyaar sey wo sur meiN hai be sura her shakhs ka gaaya hua
door se dikhta hai mujh per aaj bhi khaatey peetey gher meiN sab khaaya hua
khoon key rishtey haiN sab sookhey shajar aera gheira her ghana saaya hua
aajkal hooN gheir haazir gher se maiN aajkal susraal hai aaya hua
deir thee daada meirey hone ki bas gher meiN daadi phophiyaN taaya hua
maulvee jitna tha seedha chaahiye usqadar hi bal hai wo khaaya hua
aajkal to maN behen bhaii ka pyaar sab gina jaaney laga, maaya hua
aap ne loota jo ohdoN ke tufail aapka zaati wo sermaaya hua
pee magar paani zara tazeem sey hai ye khaala sey amalvaaya hua
suit fashion ban nahiN sakta kabhi cheap se derzi se silvaaya hua
ham kareN gey is ki tehqeeqaat bhi ham ne hai ye qatl kervaaya hua
jo bhi maana baat khaalid ki wo khud saath se pehley hai sthyaaya hua Wah Khalid Sahib! kia klassick ghazal chori hai aap nay beech maidan kay. Daad-o-tehseen kay dongray qabool farmaeay. Poori ghazal ka har sher pasand aya issi lieay poori ghazal dobara likh mari hai.
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Post by khalid on Jan 7, 2008 7:30:45 GMT 5
mustanad hai uska fermaaya hua jo kaha sherfoo ne sermaaya hua
yaad aaya baad bibi key hameN aap ne mukka tha lehraaya hua
aaj ke meiyaar sey wo sur meiN hai be sura her shakhs ka gaaya hua
door se dikhta hai mujh per aaj bhi khaatey peetey gher meiN sab khaaya hua
khoon key rishtey haiN sab sookhey shajar aera gheira her ghana saaya hua
aajkal hooN gheir haazir gher se maiN aajkal susraal hai aaya hua
deir thee daada meirey hone ki bas gher meiN daadi phophiyaN taaya hua
maulvee jitna tha seedha chaahiye usqadar hi bal hai wo khaaya hua
aajkal to maN behen bhaii ka pyaar sab gina jaaney laga, maaya hua
aap ne loota jo ohdoN ke tufail aapka zaati wo sermaaya hua
pee magar paani zara tazeem sey hai ye khaala sey amalvaaya hua
suit fashion ban nahiN sakta kabhi cheap se derzi se silvaaya hua
ham kareN gey is ki tehqeeqaat bhi ham ne hai ye qatl kervaaya hua
jo bhi maana baat khaalid ki wo khud saath se pehley hai sthyaaya hua Wah Khalid Sahib! kia klassick ghazal chori hai aap nay beech maidan kay. Daad-o-tehseen kay dongray qabool farmaeay. Poori ghazal ka har sher pasand aya issi lieay poori ghazal dobara likh mari hai. janaab maiN ghazal go shaair nahiN hooN, aur maiN ne aik adna see koshish ki hai kuch is sinf meiN kehney ki. ye forum koii jang ka maidaan to hai nahiN, aur naooz billah maiN koii fauji bhi nahiN k koii muqaabla ho kisi sey. yahaN to sab sukhan pasand dost haiN apney jinheiN meidaanoN ka koii tajreba tak nahiN hai.
is na cheez k liye daad k doNgroN ki nahiN pyaar sey di huii, thoRi see muklisaana daad sey hi aapka kaam chal sakta tha. bahar haal aapka mamnoon hooN ke aap ne itney shaandaar alfaaz maiN daad o tehseen sey navaaza! khush rahye!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 8, 2008 21:23:26 GMT 5
TASLEEMAAT
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Post by khalid on Jan 9, 2008 10:36:02 GMT 5
aatif sb yahaN bhi sirf aik hi tasleem sey kaam chal sakta tha!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 11, 2008 17:45:53 GMT 5
Abb hamaray paas kfi saray Tasleem haiN tau Jama ka Seegha hi sahi!
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Post by khalid on Jan 11, 2008 22:54:04 GMT 5
Abb hamaray paas kfi saray Tasleem haiN tau Jama ka Seegha hi sahi! hai khush bakhti hamaari ham nigaah e yaar maiN aaey "sar e tasleem kham hai jo mizaaj e yaar meiN aaey"[/color]
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