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ghazal
Jun 15, 2008 10:31:15 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 15, 2008 10:31:15 GMT 5
Ye jo had say guzar chuka hon mein! baat ye hay, khud ashnaa hon mein!
mayri pehchan shayad ab kay banay dushmano mein thehr gia hon mein
mujh say bahir nikal nahi sakty man lo aik daira hon mein
mujy aisay bhula nahi aey dost waqt hon aur chal raha hon mein
mayri fitrat ajeeb tarz ki hay khauf aey tu nachta hon mein
kahish e zindagi mein shauq ki lay par, thirakta chala gia hon mein
khaab hay khaab sa hay kia hay wo neend hon neend sa hoN kia hon mein
is safar mein qabahatein hen bahut jo tiry sath kar raha hon mein
ye farishtay tu barf soorat hein is leay in ko aagta hon mein
mein saheefay utar sakta hon tum nahi janty khuda hon mein!!
aaena hay , faraib dayta hay is leay khud say kab mila hon mein!
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ghazal
Jun 15, 2008 14:17:46 GMT 5
Post by saeedsaeed on Jun 15, 2008 14:17:46 GMT 5
aoa yar aqeel maza aa gya yar ye ghazal parh hy bilkul thumary meejaz kay mutabiq , jadeed aur nya kehny ki dhun aur tum es mein hameesah hy kamyab hooty hon mubarak hoo yar, khas toor par ye aasahar mujhy bohot pasand aayen hain
Ye jo had say guzar chuka hon mein! baat ye hay, khud ashnaa hon mein!
mayri pehchan shayad ab kay banay dushmano mein thehr gia hon mein
mayri fitrat ajeeb tarz ki hay khauf aey tu nachta hon mein aur yar aqeel mujhy kafi baar lga thumara kalam parh kay bohot sy share hain jo mujhy kehny chahye thy , ya main keh sakta tha, PAR WO TUM NY KEH DIYE HAINN, MISSAL KAY TOOR PAR YE SHARE,
is safar mein qabahatein hen bahut jo tiry sath kar raha hon mein
PAR MAZA AA GYA YAR, REALLY
PAR AIK SHARE ZRA KHATAK RAHA HY YE WALA, MAY BE PAR AAYENA SACH BTATA HY, AGAR APNY AP SY MILLA JAYE TU THEEK HOTA HY, APNA SAB KHUCH SAMNY AA JATA HY,(plz mind na karna, es bat koo) aaena hay , faraib dayta hay is leay khud say kab mila hon mein!
ok thumara duwa goo jeety raho aqeel Mubashir
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ghazal
Jun 15, 2008 23:38:08 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 15, 2008 23:38:08 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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ghazal
Jun 16, 2008 13:20:54 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 16, 2008 13:20:54 GMT 5
Malik Sb khoob ghazal ataa ki hai aap nay. Daad hazir hai! Qabool kijiay.
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ghazal
Jun 18, 2008 18:27:33 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 18, 2008 18:27:33 GMT 5
PAR AIK SHARE ZRA KHATAK RAHA HY YE WALA, MAY BE PAR AAYENA SACH BTATA HY, AGAR APNY AP SY MILLA JAYE TU THEEK HOTA HY, APNA SAB KHUCH SAMNY AA JATA HY,(plz mind na karna, es bat koo) bhae ye mind karnay na karnay wala silsila khan say agia hay ye bhi ajeeb kaha hay ap nay ap ka nukta e nazar pohnch gia mujh tak mein nazr e sani karon ga bahut shukria aqeel
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ghazal
Jun 18, 2008 18:28:05 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 18, 2008 18:28:05 GMT 5
adab dr sahab ap ki mahabat hay
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ghazal
Jun 18, 2008 18:29:16 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 18, 2008 18:29:16 GMT 5
Malik Sb khoob ghazal ataa ki hai aap nay. Daad hazir hai! Qabool kijiay.
ap ka zauq e sukhan hay warna yahan is haqeer kay pass tu achay ashaar ka fuqdan hy
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ghazal
Jun 18, 2008 19:21:28 GMT 5
Post by saeed on Jun 18, 2008 19:21:28 GMT 5
Malik saab,
eik achi aur bold kavish hai....zra munfarid type ki ghazal hai aur makhsoos lehjey ke sath.
mujhey matla aur doosra sher buhut acha laga
Ye jo had say guzar chuka hon mein! baat ye hay, khud ashnaa hon mein!
mayri pehchan shayad ab kay banay dushmano mein thehr gia hon mein
yeh sher bhi apney khiyal ki gehrayi ki wajeh se daad ka mustahiq hai.
mein saheefay utar sakta hon tum nahi janty khuda hon mein!!
mujhey lag raha hai aapne zanjeereN toRney ka irada karliya hai....zor-e-qalam aur ziadeh! mubarak ho!!!
Duago Saeed
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ghazal
Jun 19, 2008 6:16:48 GMT 5
Post by naheedv on Jun 19, 2008 6:16:48 GMT 5
mujh say bahir nikal nahi sakty man lo aik daira hon mein
buhat achee ghazal hai. paRh kar aisaa meHsoos huvaa jaise isey pehle bhee kaheeN paRh rakhaa ho.
daad!
Naheed
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ghazal
Jun 19, 2008 17:53:06 GMT 5
Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 19, 2008 17:53:06 GMT 5
aqeel sahab bohot umda
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ghazal
Jul 1, 2008 15:16:28 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 1, 2008 15:16:28 GMT 5
Malik saab, eik achi aur bold kavish hai....zra munfarid type ki ghazal hai aur makhsoos lehjey ke sath. mujhey matla aur doosra sher buhut acha laga Ye jo had say guzar chuka hon mein! baat ye hay, khud ashnaa hon mein! mayri pehchan shayad ab kay banay dushmano mein thehr gia hon mein yeh sher bhi apney khiyal ki gehrayi ki wajeh se daad ka mustahiq hai. mein saheefay utar sakta hon tum nahi janty khuda hon mein!! mujhey lag raha hai aapne zanjeereN toRney ka irada karliya hai....zor-e-qalam aur ziadeh! mubarak ho!!! Duago Saeed ap nay zajeer torny kay hawaly say ap ka ishara darust hay....ap ka shukria
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ghazal
Jul 1, 2008 15:23:18 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 1, 2008 15:23:18 GMT 5
mujh say bahir nikal nahi sakty man lo aik daira hon mein buhat achee ghazal hai. paRh kar aisaa meHsoos huvaa jaise isey pehle bhee kaheeN paRh rakhaa ho. daad! Naheed ap ka shukria ye ghazal mansora ahmed kay MONTAGE mein parhi hogi
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ghazal
Jul 1, 2008 15:25:43 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 1, 2008 15:25:43 GMT 5
thanx dr sahab
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ghazal
Jul 11, 2008 23:23:22 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 11, 2008 23:23:22 GMT 5
aqeel pehlay to maazrat k main ny aap ki ghazal par takheer sy reply kia main kaai roz sy forum ki maintainess main masroof tha is k saath saath shora k boards bhi bana raha tha is ghazal ny mujhy boht lutf dia shaid is liay bhi k is main kuch ashaar aysay hain jinhain kayfiat k ashaar kaha ja sakta hy
mayri fitrat ajeeb tarz ki hay khauf aey tu nachta hon mein
jo waraftgi aur waalihana pan is shair main dikhaai dia us ny boht lutf dia phir aik aur shair boht umda hy
mein saheefay utar sakta hon tum nahi janty khuda hon mein!!
is k pehlay misray jo tayaqun hy woh boht acha laga boht achi ghazal kahi aap ny daad qabool kijiay
thanx razi
misal k taur par is shair ko daykho
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ghazal
Jul 16, 2008 19:23:39 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 16, 2008 19:23:39 GMT 5
Razi sahab mujhy ap ki masroofiat ka bakhoobi ilm hay ap kay tabsaray nay yaqeenan mujhy hosla dia hay ap ka bahut mamnoon hoN
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