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Post by manu1979 on Nov 30, 2008 16:53:54 GMT 5
dosto.N aaj kaafee vaqt baad yahaa.n aana hua hai, is baar ek taaza ghazal likhane ki koshish kii hai, ummid karta hoo.n kii is ghazal ko yahaa maujjod umda shayaro.n ki rehnumaayii haasiil hogii.
zakhm bhar jaaye magar kyun dard yeh jata nahee Vaqt ke kyun ghaanv marham koii bhar pata nahee
Husn chhal hai,ek bh’ram hai bas nazar ka,ishq men Chaut khaane par bhi kyun sach yeh nazar aata nahi
Umrabhar maine bahaaye ashq ke dariyaa kaii Yaad men jis kii, vo mere zakhm sehlaata nahi
jab se maine dekh li hai fizaa tere rukhsaar kii tab se koi mausam merii biinaayi ko bhata nahii hai fareb niigaah ka yaa dil pe ulfat ka asar aaiina bhi juz tere kuchh aur dikhlaata nahii
Ranj hai is baat kaa loota di jis par zindagi shaksh woH yaado se meri khud ko behlaata nahi
Chal diye aangan se dil ke saaye teri yaad ke Aalam-e-tanhaayi kaa ab lutf bhii aata nahi
Haar kar bhee jeet jaaooN hoon sikandar ishq kaa khel me.n ulfat ke kabhi yu.n maat mai.n khata nahi
maan kar jis ko khudaa karte rahe ham bandagii wehsato.n ke vaqt hee kyun reh’m dil aata nahi
haadse ne jab kisee maasoom ki hai jaan li kyun khuda ? dil ko tere maatam ye pighlaataa nahi
mai.N kharaa hoon hausalo ki phir vahii chattaaN par aandhiyaa aaye agar, mai.n un se ghabhraataa nahii.n
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regards manu
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Post by jooni on Nov 30, 2008 18:42:18 GMT 5
Boht Khoob, Boht Umdah.
Daad qubool kijiye Manu Sahib.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Dec 1, 2008 1:57:42 GMT 5
wahhhhhhh bohat khoob
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 24, 2008 13:32:55 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy boht muddat baad aap nay apnay kalaam sy nawaza thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 26, 2009 19:50:23 GMT 5
Aji huzorr khalaai shaeri hai, yaani bay wazni ki kaifiyat kafi hud tak balkeh badarja-e-utam payee jaati hai!
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