N@ina
ibtidaai rukn
Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
Posts: 33
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Post by N@ina on Jun 30, 2007 3:32:35 GMT 5
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 30, 2007 8:23:43 GMT 5
aaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa wah kia andaz hay bohat khoob nainaaN ji takhalus ko btaur radeef bohat acha nebhaya hay daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 30, 2007 10:01:50 GMT 5
bohat khoobsoorat nazm khaas taur par takhalus ko radeef bana kar aap nay is main khoobsoorti payda ki aur eham baat yeh hy k is main aap ny radeef ko nibhaya bhi khoob hy thanx razi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 2, 2007 21:44:31 GMT 5
ap ka andaz is ghazal mein acha hay magar riwaati hay, ap ka jauhar jo nazm mein dekha us tanazur mein ghazal riwaat say hat kar koe mana nahi day rahi bilkul samnay kay ashaar hein,khaas kar taza nishtar ka chaloN par Masdar lgna kay sath ko nibho nahi ban paya isi tarha mor aur raqs wala wazn mein tu zaroor hein magar shar nahi ban paya han Ahmed Fraz ki taqleed mein ap nay maqta khoob nibhaya hay JANAn JANAn! aur ap ka Naina Naina
aqeel
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Post by khalid on Jul 3, 2007 4:17:16 GMT 5
bohot khoob!
kaafi mutran,nam ghazal kahi hai aap ne aur apne takhallus ko khoob istemaal kiya hai! :)daad haazir hai!
khaalid.
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 5, 2007 13:54:53 GMT 5
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 16:32:51 GMT 5
Normal Shaeri hai. Koi kahS cheez paish karaiN
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