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Post by brijinder on Jan 20, 2008 3:53:06 GMT 5
My reply to all that rubbish in urdu but without behr and wazan:
TalkhiaN-1
Tujhay aayaa na jo falak choonay ka andaaz Gunaah banaa di gayeeN parvaazaiN meri Ab mera qasoor hai kya teray ahsaas ki ghurbat Jo dabaatay ho bulaNd aawaazin meri
Jab tu mehfiloN maiN ho mast phirta tha Karti thi meri umr tanhaaioN maiN riyaaz Jab tu lagaa rahaa tha beparwaa kehkehay Samajh rahaa thaa main khyaaloN kay andaaz
MaiNnay ik ahud pay jiya hai zeest ka lamha lamha Tunay tab jisay junooN ka naam diya ZameeN jisko samajh na paayee AasmaaN nay uska ahatraam kiya
Teray rutboN ki nahiN ab koi kashish baqi Samjhay to yeh bhi hai ik kamaal-e-fun mera Jo bus riwaayutoN maiN dhal kar kay banay NahiN ab woh mouzoo-e-sukhan mera
MaiN to khaaboN kay geet banaauNga Aur wusa_t-e-afkaar say sajauNga Tujh maiN himmat ho to aa jaanaa Varnaa akaylay hi gungunaauNga --------------------------------------
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 22, 2008 2:35:35 GMT 5
khoobsoorat kalaam,usii khoobssoratii se qalam-band kiyaa gayaa; daad haazir hai,janaab zaamin
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 20, 2008 14:09:20 GMT 5
brijinder ji sorry k main aap ki yeh nazm taakheer sy daykh raha hoon achi lagi yeh nazm aap ki poetry aik khaas andaz aur mazameen ki haamil hoti hy jo qari ko mutwaja karnay ki salahiat rakhti hy ' razi
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Post by kanwal on Jul 25, 2008 0:56:33 GMT 5
aik achi takhleeQ par daad e guL aapki nazR ,...
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