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ghazal
Dec 2, 2007 18:12:23 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 2, 2007 18:12:23 GMT 5
kafi arsay bad aik ghazal hoe hay is par kari tanqeedi wichar chahta hon.
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ghazal
Dec 2, 2007 23:28:03 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Dec 2, 2007 23:28:03 GMT 5
malik sahib bohat khoob
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zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
Posts: 125
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ghazal
Dec 3, 2007 11:16:37 GMT 5
Post by zehrab on Dec 3, 2007 11:16:37 GMT 5
Bohat Murassa ghazal kahi aap ney Aqeel Saheb. Daad qabool ki jiye
Kher andesh
Qamar
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ghazal
Dec 5, 2007 20:03:50 GMT 5
Post by dnangrani on Dec 5, 2007 20:03:50 GMT 5
kafi arsay bad aik ghazal hoe hay is par kari tanqeedi wichar chahta hon. Malik ji aapki gazal ko pada to lutf aaya Mere khayaal tak taazgi nahin aayi waah soch ka parinid had ki sarhad ko choona chahta hai. ek aur nayab sher jo bahut hi acha laga Tammam umr banata raha hoon naksh tere magar mujhe kabhi soorat giri nazar nahin aayi. Daad ke saath Devi
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ghazal
Dec 8, 2007 20:22:58 GMT 5
Post by naheedv on Dec 8, 2007 20:22:58 GMT 5
Aqeel jee,
Waah, Waah, buhat hee khoobsoorat ghazal hai, buhat arse ke ba'd kuch achaa paRhaa hai. meree jaanib se dhair saari daad haazir hai. agar naa gavaar na ho tau maqte par thoRi roshani Daal dijiye!
shukriya Naheed
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 20:08:37 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 10, 2007 20:08:37 GMT 5
Dr Sahab!
ap ka shukria
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 20:09:18 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 10, 2007 20:09:18 GMT 5
Bohat Murassa ghazal kahi aap ney Aqeel Saheb. Daad qabool ki jiye Kher andesh Qamar ap ko ghazal pasand ap ki nawazish hay
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 20:10:10 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 10, 2007 20:10:10 GMT 5
Devi g
Ap ko ghazal achi lagi ap ka bara pan hay mamnoon hoN
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 20:12:23 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 10, 2007 20:12:23 GMT 5
Sunita g!
ap janti hein ke mein Roman men paste nahi karta pehlay ki tarha isay bhi roman mein koe na koe kar he day ga bas kotahi keh lejeay ke mujhy zehni koft hoti hay roman mein
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 20:14:02 GMT 5
Post by waqaar on Dec 10, 2007 20:14:02 GMT 5
Aqeel SaaHeb, aik bahut hii aCHh~ii ghazal kahii aapnay. bahut napi tuli ghazal. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 20:28:11 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 10, 2007 20:28:11 GMT 5
Aqeel jee, Waah, Waah, buhat hee khoobsoorat ghazal hai, buhat arse ke ba'd kuch achaa paRhaa hai. meree jaanib se dhair saari daad haazir hai. agar naa gavaar na ho tau maqte par thoRi roshani Daal dijiye! shukriya Naheed ghazal par pasandeedgi ka izhar aur hosla afzae ka shukr guzar hon jahan tak maqta ki baat hay ap ka ishara darust hay munasib tabdeeli kar lon ga.
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 20:30:17 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 10, 2007 20:30:17 GMT 5
Aqeel SaaHeb, aik bahut hii aCHh~ii ghazal kahii aapnay. bahut napi tuli ghazal. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar waqar sahab ap ki mahabat hay warna banda is qabil nahi
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 20:30:37 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 10, 2007 20:30:37 GMT 5
Aqeel SaaHeb, aik bahut hii aCHh~ii ghazal kahii aapnay. bahut napi tuli ghazal. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar waqar sahab ap ki mahabat hay warna banda is qabil nahi
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zaamin
ibtidaai rukn
Posts: 69
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ghazal
Dec 10, 2007 21:36:01 GMT 5
Post by zaamin on Dec 10, 2007 21:36:01 GMT 5
ek nihaayat hi khoobsoorat kalaam.aqeel saahib mei aor se daad qabool farmaayein
zaamin
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ghazal
Dec 21, 2007 16:10:52 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Dec 21, 2007 16:10:52 GMT 5
Zamin sahab ap ka shukria
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