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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 4, 2007 2:12:09 GMT 5
aik taaza ghazal aap ki nazr karta hoon
jo bahattar hain unhi ki aik behtar fauj hy warna is dunya main har ja bud say budtur fauj hy
main akayla haarta to dukh na hota phir mujhay dukh to yeh hy saath meray ik qad aawar fauj hy
teergi ko roshni kehti hy lafzon ki sipaah doob kar ubhri nahin aysi shanaawar fauj hy
hain naheef o naatawan kuch log is k saamnay buzdilon par mushtamil kitni bahadar fauj hy
khatm hoti jaa rahi hy siskion ki ab sada is ka matlab to yeh nikla aaj ghar ghar fauj hy
is ghazal main bhi razi us naam k kuch harf daal warna teri har ghazal main to muattar fauj hy
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Post by khalid on Nov 4, 2007 2:24:23 GMT 5
bohot khoob razi sb! aap be shak ham sab muhibbaan e millat k hamnava haiN! lekin masroofiyat aapko itni baqaaedgi sey shayad nahiN kehtey. ya phir forum per aane ka moqa nahiN milta ho ga.
bahar haal daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 4, 2007 2:45:30 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Razi bhai pehlay shaer maiN khoobsoorat talmeeh aur baqi ash,aar haalat e hazira ki tarjumani kartay huway daad qabool kejiay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Nov 4, 2007 12:19:49 GMT 5
Qudrati amr hai iss ghazal ka likha jana! Daad hazir hai!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 4, 2007 14:04:28 GMT 5
bohot khoob razi sb! aap be shak ham sab muhibbaan e millat k hamnava haiN! lekin masroofiyat aapko itni baqaaedgi sey shayad nahiN kehtey. ya phir forum per aane ka moqa nahiN milta ho ga.
bahar haal daad qubool keeje! khalid bhai forum par koshish to bohat karta hoon k zyaada say zyaada waqt doon magar rozgaar ka ghum kahan saans laynay dayta hay thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 4, 2007 14:05:50 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Razi bhai pehlay shaer maiN khoobsoorat talmeeh aur baqi ash,aar haalat e hazira ki tarjumani kartay huway daad qabool kejiay rafi bhai bohat shukria ghazal pasand karnay ka thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 4, 2007 14:07:31 GMT 5
Qudrati amr hai iss ghazal ka likha jana! Daad hazir hai! thanx bhaai bohat muhabat aap ki razi
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Post by zia on Nov 4, 2007 20:07:27 GMT 5
aoa
razi bhi ap nay gazal thek mokay or bilkul thek unwan par kahi hay.....baatain to karwi han laykin sachi han....very good...
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 5, 2007 1:03:57 GMT 5
aoa razi bhi ap nay gazal thek mokay or bilkul thek unwan par kahi hay.....baatain to karwi han laykin sachi han....very good... zia sahib bohat shukria k aap naypasandeedgi ka izhar kia aap bhi apny column hamari bazm main laaya karain thanx razi
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Post by shahkaar on Nov 11, 2007 13:11:11 GMT 5
razi bhai , apnay ehsaasaat ko aap ne buhut kuhubsortee se alfaaz ka paihen deyaa, ,
khoob ghazal hay.aur aap ke khayalaat se ittefaq kerta hoon.
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Post by shahkaar on Nov 11, 2007 13:15:15 GMT 5
razi saheb
ghazal pasand aye
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 12, 2007 16:47:41 GMT 5
razi bhai , apnay ehsaasaat ko aap ne buhut kuhubsortee se alfaaz ka paihen deyaa, , khoob ghazal hay.aur aap ke khayalaat se ittefaq kerta hoon. bohat shukria aap ka razi
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Post by Tanweer on Nov 12, 2007 20:19:02 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Razi sahib
Tanweer
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 12, 2007 22:10:19 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Razi sahib Tanweershukria tanweer bhaai razi
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Post by phototech81 on Nov 13, 2007 11:46:41 GMT 5
razi sahab boaht khub aap ny baoht acha lekha hai
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