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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 12, 2007 12:01:12 GMT 5
raah main aik bhi deevar nahin chaahtay hain log ab ishq main azaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahnay waalay tera wasl yaqeenan chaahain haan magar hum say talabgaar nahin chaahtay hain
hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain
ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahtay hain keh usay door talak daykh sakain laykin is baat par israar nahin chaahtay hain razi-ud-din razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 13, 2007 3:40:04 GMT 5
raah main aik bhi deevar nahin chaahtay hain log ab ishq main azaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahnay waalay tera wasl yaqeenan chaahain haan magar hum say talabgaar nahin chaahtay hain
hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain
ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahtay hain keh usay door talak daykh sakain laykin is baat par israar nahin chaahtay hainrazi-ud-din razi Bohat khoob Razi bhai daad qabool farmaiay is taza ghazal par
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Post by khalid on Jul 13, 2007 6:17:52 GMT 5
ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hainkya acha kaha hai huzoor! daad qubool keeje!
khaalid.
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 26, 2007 11:40:43 GMT 5
Razi Sahib!
Mashallah bohat khoobsurat.
Daad qabool kejiiey
Tanweer
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Post by waqaar on Jul 26, 2007 15:19:51 GMT 5
Razi SaaHeb, aadaab, bahut aCHh~ii aur saadi ghazal. pasand aaii. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 26, 2007 18:41:25 GMT 5
hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain
razi sahab ye sher mazmoon kay etabar say khatka hay mujhy.kahin koe kaji halki anch ki kami rehgaey hay nazr e sani chaheay hay
ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain
bahut khoobsoorat aur umda hasil e ghazal sher hay,aik mazahmati rawaya,aur is daur ki political anarki kay khado khal par hasb e hal hay dad qabooleay ga
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Post by ibnesiddique on Jul 30, 2007 14:32:26 GMT 5
Razi bhai
salaam arz hai
bahot umdah ghazal hai, meri jaanib se daad qubool keejiye.
Amjad
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Post by shahkaar on Aug 4, 2007 17:35:50 GMT 5
Razi bhi
buhut khubsoorat ghazal, aur umdaah kalaam , behad daad qubool kejay, nawazish
wmk
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Post by hooriya on Aug 6, 2007 10:57:38 GMT 5
"ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain"
buhat khoob...saaray ash'aar buhat achhe hain par ye shair to lajawaab hai...daad qubool kijiye.
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Post by neha on Aug 11, 2007 22:04:03 GMT 5
Salam Razi bhai, hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain
bohut hi khubsurat ghazal hai...mery taraf se daaad qubool kijye .
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 19:49:11 GMT 5
Kia achhchhotay andaaz kay ashaar hai iss ghazal ka. Daa qabool kijiay
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 25, 2008 15:10:06 GMT 5
Kia achhchhotay andaaz kay ashaar hai iss ghazal ka. Daa qabool kijiay
aatif bhai shukria is pazeeraai ka razi
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on May 31, 2008 20:06:49 GMT 5
chahtaay hain keh razi baat kabhi tum say karain or yeh forum ki bhii dewaar nahein chahtaay hain
yeh sher aik sunaat main hay chahtay hain say shurooh hua or chahtaay hain per khatum hua.tumharaay aakhri sher ki taray.main tu lafzii qalabazyoon per daad doon ga.
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Post by naheedv on May 31, 2008 22:32:59 GMT 5
Waah Razi bhai, taqribun aik saal pehle kee post hui ghazal ko log dhooNdh kar daad paish kar rahe haiN, tau waqai iss meN koi baat hai. ghazal be had pasaNd aayi. aik manjhaa huvaa andaaz.e.takallam. daad!
shukriya Naheed
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 2, 2008 9:15:53 GMT 5
chahtaay hain keh razi baat kabhi tum say karain or yeh forum ki bhii dewaar nahein chahtaay hain yeh sher aik sunaat main hay chahtay hain say shurooh hua or chahtaay hain per khatum hua.tumharaay aakhri sher ki taray.main tu lafzii qalabazyoon per daad doon ga. suhail bhai is shair ki yeh khoobi zahir hay ap k siwa kon jan sakta tha ab to sanaat gari waysay hi khatm ho rahi hay pazeerai ka shukria razi
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