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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 27, 2008 22:18:39 GMT 5
bohat khoob Neelofer sahiba
Mai akeeli hi thii lekin rastey me jaa bajjaa meri aahoN aor dukhoN sse karwaN banta gyaa
is shaer kay dosray misray par zra daubara ghaur farma laiN waesay misra sahi hay magar lafz (aor dukhooN zra rwani maiN mzaham hay
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Post by neelofar on Mar 2, 2008 18:39:35 GMT 5
bohat khoob Neelofer sahiba Mai akeeli hi thii lekin rastey me jaa bajjaa meri aahoN aor dukhoN sse karwaN banta gyaa is shaer kay dosray misray par zra daubara ghaur farma laiN waesay misra sahi hay magar lafz (aor dukhooN zra rwani maiN mzaham hay
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Post by neelofar on Mar 27, 2008 18:27:54 GMT 5
Sunita bhnaa!! tarahi ghazal dobara peesh hai Allah kre aap ki nazroN se guzre aor tanqeed ya taareef se aagahi.............
mohtaje duaa neelofar
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 2, 2008 10:53:23 GMT 5
Gazal ke intezaar mein
Devi
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Post by neelofar on Apr 2, 2008 17:42:15 GMT 5
Danangrani G!
phli baar jab ghazal likhi to jane kab aor kaise manzer se ghaib ho gyii dobara type ki lekin shayed jane anjane me khin aor likh baithi....aap se Sunita G se moazret .....andaze byan me mere naam "" NEELOFAR "" ke naam se check kren... khinn mil hi jaaye gi. koshish sossy
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