Rafi Tabasum Sahib! Sukriya daad ka!
Khalid sahib aap ka mashwara sar ankhoN per, Ghalti tasleem shud aur durustgi lazim shud.
Maqta lazmi nahiN keh har ghazal kay saath ho bahar haal satwaN sher maqta hi kahooN ga, kiyun keh meray hisab say sbhi ghazal mukamal nahiN huwi. MaiN koshish karta hooN keh 7 asha'ar kahooN. Ab ghazal mulahiza kijeay:-
Iss say rishta mera wajibi ho gaya
Shehr mujh say mera abjnabi ho gaya
Mo'jiza ik mila hai qalam ko meray
Lafz jo bhi likha sha'eri ho gaya
Ankh wajdan ki ja wadi'at huwi
Har andhera tau phir roshni ho gaya
Bay sabab tau nahiN haiN meray ratjagay
NeeNd qurban ki, maiN wali ho gaya
Phir usay zindagi dhondti reh gaee
Jiss ko andaza-e-zindagi ho gaya
Butt-Shikan kon thay ab yeh kiss ko khabar
Aam ab shaiwa-e-aazari ho gaya