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Agaahi
May 14, 2007 3:31:29 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on May 14, 2007 3:31:29 GMT 5
Maa kya hai baap kya hai iss ka ehsaas uss waqt hota hai jab hum zindagi ki tapti dhoop meiN jhulaste haiN ,... Issi tapish ko jab maine mehsoos kiya to yeh nazM kahi ,.... Agaahi
Zindagi ki agaahi hote hi Duniya se shanaasayee hote hi aasaani se hum bhool yeh jaate haiN ab zeest ki chilchilaati hui dhoop mein bhi shafqat ki thandi chhaoN hai waldein ki lamha ba lamha parvarish karte haiN wo phooloN ki tarah aur kaantoN ki chubhan ka har ehsaas bhi daaman mein samet te hue apne hone ka saboot dete haiN
shaoo´r ki seerhiyaN charhte hi Umr ki manzileiN barhte hi aasaani se hum bhool yeh jaate haiN ke Pehla qadam wo guzri pehli baat bhi Pehl wo saans aur pehli wo raat bhi aur phir wo pehli har khushi anmol moti aur apni zeest o rooh mein saja lete haiN
khud bhook ki aar meiN jal kar luqma luqma khilaate haiN aur hum kis adaa se yeh bhi faramosh kar jaate haiN ke un lambi kaali siyah raton ka wo dukh sehte hue bhi neend ki meethi halaawat bakhashte haiN Hum kiyon nazarandaaz yeh kar jaate haiN ke huM gosht the to maa ki saans mein lahu se senchte rahe ehsaas the to baap ki shafqat se mehfooz hote rahe afsos par
Zindagi ki agaahi hote hi Duniya se shanaasayee hote hi shaoo´r ki seerhiyaN charhte hi Umr ki manzileiN barhte hi aasaani se sab kuch hi hum bhool jaate haiN
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Agaahi
May 14, 2007 14:38:52 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 14, 2007 14:38:52 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Kanwal ji khoobsoorat nazm daad hazir hay
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Agaahi
May 14, 2007 15:42:47 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on May 14, 2007 15:42:47 GMT 5
wah wah kanwal bohat khoobsoorat khyaal hy is nazm main hum aik aysay ehad main jee rahay jahan faramosh kar dayna mamool ban gia is nazm main tum nay aik hasaas mozzo ka intkhaab kai aur usay khoobsoorti say lafzon main piro dia thanx razi
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Agaahi
May 14, 2007 18:50:01 GMT 5
Post by neha on May 14, 2007 18:50:01 GMT 5
Zabardast kanwal.....bilkul theek kaha aap nay ..itny acchi nazam k liye daad hazir hai janab
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Agaahi
May 15, 2007 11:17:09 GMT 5
Post by uzair143 on May 15, 2007 11:17:09 GMT 5
zabardast
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Agaahi
May 15, 2007 14:27:32 GMT 5
Post by hooriya on May 15, 2007 14:27:32 GMT 5
buhat achha khayal hai aapki nazm ka kanwal ji... daad hazir hai
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Agaahi
May 25, 2007 1:53:37 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on May 25, 2007 1:53:37 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Kanwal ji khoobsoorat nazm daad hazir hay Aapki daad ke liye dil se shukr guzaar haiN ,... Thank you jee ,....
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Agaahi
May 25, 2007 1:55:30 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on May 25, 2007 1:55:30 GMT 5
wah wah kanwal bohat khoobsoorat khyaal hy is nazm main hum aik aysay ehad main jee rahay jahan faramosh kar dayna mamool ban gia is nazm main tum nay aik hasaas mozzo ka intkhaab kai aur usay khoobsoorti say lafzon main piro dia thanx razi Husn e nazr hai aapki razi jee ,... apni duaoN meiN yaad rakhiye ga ,... aur hausla afzai ke liye shukrguzaar hoon ,...
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Agaahi
May 25, 2007 1:56:29 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on May 25, 2007 1:56:29 GMT 5
Zabardast kanwal.....bilkul theek kaha aap nay ..itny acchi nazam k liye daad hazir hai janab thank yoU janaaba ,.... Aapki daad humne dil ke gulshan meiN sambhaal li hai ,...
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Agaahi
May 25, 2007 1:56:52 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on May 25, 2007 1:56:52 GMT 5
Thank YOu ,...
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Agaahi
May 25, 2007 1:57:30 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on May 25, 2007 1:57:30 GMT 5
buhat achha khayal hai aapki nazm ka kanwal ji... daad hazir hai Thank You hooriya dear ,...
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