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Post by kanwal on May 30, 2007 2:14:49 GMT 5
Aik ajeeb si kefiyat meiN ajeeb si poem jo jaane kyuN mujhe bohat pasand hai ,... saraapa e aziyat
Main saraapa e aziyat Aur haiN daaman meiN mire kaante Khushi ke phool main laaoN Chun ke aakhir kis jahaN se
Talkh yaadoN ki haiN zanjeereiN ab har soo Kaante hi kaante mere har soo tum mohabbat ke matlaashi aur hooN saraapa e nafrat laaoN halaawat ke main gul Chun ke aakhir kis jahaN se
Apne hi hisaar meiN yuN Hui muqayad ke ab koi raah e faraar nahiN hai TumheiN miri sangat ki Aur saraapa e hijr hooN main phool sangat ke main laaoN kis jahaN se
Rista lahoo dil ki in surkh deewaroN se girta ho wo jharna jaise aabshaaroN se ChahtoN ki barkha ho tum Aur hooN saraapa e Vehshat Dil ki narm laaoN mitti main Chun ke aakhir kis jahaN se
Kar parastish tu na meri baad az khuda De sakooN gi na main silla ke hoon be wafa samjhe mujhe muqadas tum aur hooN saraapa e haqaarat yeh saheefe gulloN ke laaoN to laaoN Chun ke aakhir kis jahaN se
Muqadar hua hai KANWAL ka bas yeh paani phir talaab ho ya ho ashk e rawaani Tum aman ke matlaashi hue aur main saraapa e baghaawat
HaaN
Tum saraapa e murawat Aur main saraapa e adaawat Main sakooN ke phooL laaoN Chun ke aakhir kis jahaN se
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 31, 2007 2:07:12 GMT 5
wahhhhhhh Kanwal ji daad hazir hay
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Post by farooqi on Jun 3, 2007 23:08:37 GMT 5
hhmmmmm nice kanwal g !
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Post by muzafarmohsin on Jun 8, 2007 23:22:49 GMT 5
bohat acha lagaa yeh Qalaam....
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Post by kanwal on Jun 18, 2007 2:37:48 GMT 5
wahhhhhhh Kanwal ji daad hazir hay thank you rafi jee ,... Aapki daad dil ke gulshan meiN saja li hai ,...
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Post by kanwal on Jun 18, 2007 2:45:38 GMT 5
hhmmmm shukriya janaab,....
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Post by kanwal on Jun 18, 2007 2:48:09 GMT 5
bohat acha lagaa yeh Qalaam.... thank you ,...
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 5, 2007 11:21:26 GMT 5
Kanwal beti!
Bohat he omdaah, behtreen.........
tom nay bohat tezi say qalam ka ye safar tamam kiya aur aab aik sang-e-meel par mojod ho...
meri duaien tomharay saath hain.
haan bohat si daad qabool karo.
Tanweer
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Post by kanwal on Jul 25, 2008 1:36:22 GMT 5
Kanwal beti! Bohat he omdaah, behtreen......... tom nay bohat tezi say qalam ka ye safar tamam kiya aur aab aik sang-e-meel par mojod ho... meri duaien tomharay saath hain. haan bohat si daad qabool karo. TanweerBohat bohat Shukriya Uncle ,...
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 25, 2008 13:02:56 GMT 5
boht khoobsoorat nazm hy khyaal boht acha hy unwaan ki tara poori nazm aziat ki akaasi karti hy woh aziat jo her hasaas qalamkaar k hissay main aati hy daad qabool karo kanwal
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Post by uzair143 on Sept 29, 2008 0:37:50 GMT 5
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh khoobsurat
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