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Post by kanwal on Mar 22, 2008 6:03:12 GMT 5
Aik Forum pe "hijr" ke mozu pe nazM kehne ka itfaaQ hua, wohi nazM aapki bisaartoN ki nazR ,... E Yaraan e HijraaN
E Yaraan e HijraaN kaho kaise kat ti haiN raateiN kaho yaad kya kya aati haiN baateiN Kaho kitna tarpe hai yeh dil kaho kitna machle hai ye dil
E Yaraan e HijraaN KiyoN bhoole yeh dil na uss be wafaa ko kiyoN karta hai yaad uski sadaa ko kiyoN yeh mohabbat ki raaheiN kathin ho gayee haiN kiyoN in bahaaroN meiN bhi ik ghutan ho gaye hai
E Yaraan e HijraaN tire lab pe khamoshiyoN ke yeh dar waa nahiN hote to kya tiri aankhoN se ashkoN ke yeh samandar nahiN rukte to kya to phir ab suno E Yaraan e HijraaN bharam hai tumhara, jo nadaaN kabhi hai samjha
E Yaraan e HijraaN samjhta hai yeh dil jo beeti hai tum par ke "hijr" ke safar par lahoo, dard se raastoN par nishaaN sajte haiN, aur iss rooH pe zakhM lag ke mehkte haiN
KahooN kya E Yaraan e HijraaN Ke deemak ban ke chaat jaaye hari shaakh ko yeh sehraa hai jis meiN kayee qaafle mit gaye haiN faqat shidat e pyaas ke waaste nishaaN hai ke milta nahiN hai
Main batlaaoN kya tum ko Yaraan e HijraaN ban ke naag dass jaaye iss jism o jaaN ko aur nas nas meiN ik zehr bhar deta hai jhalakta hai jo lafzoN, baatoN se meri
Suno to E Yaraan e HijraaN yahaN saath haiN dono "hijr" ke safar meiN jahaN jalna hai hum ko umR bhar ke bhatti ki soorat hai yeh "hijr"
To E Yaraan e HijraaN chalo aao huM shauQ se iss meiN jaleiN ke jal kar issi meiN humeiN ab nikharna hai, aur phir nikhar kar in lafzoN meiN dhalna hai
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 22, 2008 23:16:12 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat nazm kahi aap nay Kanwal ji
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Post by khalid on Mar 23, 2008 2:08:31 GMT 5
nazm ka khayaal boht umda hai! daad qubool keeje kaNval!
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 25, 2008 1:10:55 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jee aj mujhe kuch kuch yaqeen hota ja raha he ke meri yadasht kamzor hoti ja rahi he aj ap ke thred ki seer karte howe dekha ke ap ki itni khobsorat nazm par me neap ko dad ke phool nahi peesh kiye jis ke liye mazrat qabol ki jyie ............................................ so is bohat hi khobsorat nazm ke lyie meri janib se bohat sari dili dad nazm ka bunyadi kheyal seedha dil me utar geya bohat hi umda qalbe chaman se bohat sare phool ap ke husne klam ki nazr
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 9, 2008 0:00:06 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jee aj mujhe kuch kuch yaqeen hota ja raha he ke meri yadasht kamzor hoti ja rahi he aj ap ke thred ki seer karte howe dekha ke ap ki itni khobsorat nazm par me neap ko dad ke phool nahi peesh kiye jis ke liye mazrat qabol ki jyie ............................................ so is bohat hi khobsorat nazm ke lyie meri janib se bohat sari dili dad nazm ka bunyadi kheyal seedha dil me utar geya bohat hi umda qalbe chaman se bohat sare phool ap ke husne klam ki nazr
ramish sahab yaad daasht sirf aap ki hi kamzor nahin hui is dasht main hum bhi mojood hain hamaari to samjhain yaad daasht khutm hi ho gaai k hum bhi is nazm ko nazar andaaz kiay baythay thay boht see daad kanwal koi baat nahin aysa hota hi hay kanwal tumhari shaadi ko to abhi chand maah guzray hain na jab hamari tara old is gold ho jaao gi to tumhari yaad daasht bhi aysi hi ho jaay gi thanx razi
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Post by HASIB RANA on Nov 26, 2008 21:46:49 GMT 5
BOHAT KHOB KANWAL ..... BOHAT KHOB ....
DAD QABOL HO .......................
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