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Post by nadeem on Jul 2, 2008 14:51:19 GMT 5
chala gaya hai wo lekin nishan ab bhi haeN kay us kay soog maeN pasmaandgan ab bhi haeN
yeh aur baat kay rehna mera gawara naheN tumharay shehr maeN khali makaan ab bhi haeN
yeh ishq hai kay tujhay chooR bhi naheN saktay wagarna tujh say to ham badgumaan ab bhi haeN
hamaeN to pehlay bhi tum say gila naheN tha koi aur ab kay hai bhi to ham bay zubaan ab bhi haeN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 2, 2008 23:58:10 GMT 5
chala gaya hai wo lekin nishan ab bhi haeN kay us kay soog maeN pasmaandgan ab bhi haeN yeh aur baat kay rehna mera gawara naheN tumharay shehr maeN khali makaan ab bhi haeN yeh ishq hai kay tujhay chooR bhi naheN saktay wagarna tujh say to ham badgumaan ab bhi haeN hamaeN to pehlay bhi tum say gila naheN tha koi aur ab kay hai bhi to ham bay zubaan ab bhi haeN wahhhhhhhh
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 30, 2008 23:21:32 GMT 5
Wah Nadeem Bhai bahut khoob soorat! Daad tau bay saakhtaa deni laazim hai. PaRhtay huway maiN aik aik sher per ruk kar sochta rahaa keh yeh sher behtreen ho ga laikin saheeh poochaiN tau chaaroN ashaar bahut khoob haiN.
Ghazal mukammal kab hogi?
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