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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 6, 2008 1:15:00 GMT 5
AOA ehle bazm apni aik poarni nazm jo pechle board par peesh ki thi aj nigaho se guzri to socha chalo use yaha phir se post kar diya jaye ap ki qeemti ara k amuntazir ramishjaanTou wo larki he jis ke peyar ne mere jazboN kz bhatakte qafle dast e hijraN ki shab tareek se subh ki dehleez tak pohncha diye rang chun kar shadmani ke sabhi mere jism w rooh pa barsa diye tw wo larki he ke dasht e zeest ki tilmalati jaan leewa dhwop me js ne zulf e mehr ko phela diya mjh pa abr e lutf he barsa diya meri har ik arzu ke jam me bhar ke az khud shrab e iltfaat khod zulekha ho gai aor mujh ko yousaf kar diya to wo larki he ke jis ki Aankh par rind qurbaN aor peemana nisaar rind o peemana hain keya sara meekahna nissar te ajab he har ada teri ajeeb tere nazuk ahmari honto se aye jaan e bahar phol ka har istaara mushkbar lehn tera sherien he sherien he tera tarze sukhan husn tera he baharaN me khila koei chaman tero zulfoo par fasoon e samri saeya f*gan to wazzefa e wafa he to namaz e ishq he to ho nghma e mohabat to hi saaz e ishq he zindagi ki meri hr ik shakh pa gul khil geya tum mile keya mujh ko goeya zamana mil geya
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 6, 2008 3:03:21 GMT 5
aaj bhi is nazm nay pehlay ki tarah maza dia Ramish sahib yehi is nazm ki khoobdoorati aur tazagi kasaboot hay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 6, 2008 14:39:16 GMT 5
Wah Ramish Bhai! kiss umdgi say aap nay nazm ko shuroo kia aur mantaqi anjaam ko pohNchaya. MaiN kafi mutassi huwa aap ki iss nazm say. """"""""""Khoob soorat""""""""""""" Meri jaanib say dheroN munn daad, gar qabool aftad zahay izzo sharaf.
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 7, 2008 0:17:41 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram dr rafi shaib bohat mamno,n ho,n ap ki in mohabato ka ao ki in shafqato ka shurkiya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 7, 2008 0:19:34 GMT 5
AOA ATIF bhai bohat shukriya itni sari dad dene ka aur hazoor yeh kese ho sakta he ke ap ki esi pur khlso dad ko hum qabol na kare gar ap ki ijazat ho to 3 bar qabol kar le ( bad ki zimadari ap ki he ) waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 23, 2008 11:41:27 GMT 5
aik khoobsoorat nazm hay yeh boht lutf aaya ramish ji daad qabool kijiay razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 23, 2008 16:20:34 GMT 5
AOA ATIF bhai bohat shukriya itni sari dad dene ka aur hazoor yeh kese ho sakta he ke ap ki esi pur khlso dad ko hum qabol na kare gar ap ki ijazat ho to 3 bar qabol kar le ( bad ki zimadari ap ki he ) waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Ji Ramish bhai, zaroor qabool kijiay, magar yeh bhi arz kartay chalaiN keh jo qabool karta hai, zimma daari khalistan ussi ki hoti hai. Yeh hamara saaRhay aath baras ka tajrba kehtaa hai. Waisay bazurg kehtay haiN keh daad aik hi baar qabool ki jaati hai. Yeh hai tau moannas magar jaandaar moannas kay zumray maiN nahiN aati. Kahiay aap ka kia khayaal hai!
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Post by nazghazal on Jun 24, 2008 9:36:40 GMT 5
aadaab janab!
itni achi tehreer pe ham aapko daad paish karte hain.
khush rahiye
naz ghazal
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 28, 2008 23:38:02 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai bohat sahrminda ho,n ke jawab dene me takheer ho gai ap ki is pur khlos dad ke liye bohat bohat shukriya waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 28, 2008 23:42:52 GMT 5
Ji Ramish bhai, zaroor qabool kijiay, magar yeh bhi arz kartay chalaiN keh jo qabool karta hai, zimma daari khalistan ussi ki hoti hai. Yeh hamara saaRhay aath baras ka tajrba kehtaa hai. Waisay bazurg kehtay haiN keh daad aik hi baar qabool ki jaati hai. Yeh hai tau moannas magar jaandaar moannas kay zumray maiN nahiN aati. Kahiay aap ka kia khayaal hai! [/quote]
AOA Atif bhai apsirf ath sal se bughat rahe hain me pichle 18 sal se bughat raha ho,n jee magar aik lutf to he na ise hum ap se 100000% itefaq karte hain jee
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 28, 2008 23:46:27 GMT 5
AOA naz ghazal jee ap ko bazm me dekh kar bohat khushi hoi tah e dil se khushamdeed kehta ho,n ap ko..... nazm pasand karne ke liye bohat shukriya sada khush rahiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by rooh on Jun 29, 2008 13:57:54 GMT 5
Ramish ji
khoobsurat nazm par aap ko hamari taraf se daad
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 29, 2008 17:03:27 GMT 5
AOA bohat bohat shurkiya rooh jee ap ki is pur khlos dad ka waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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Post by zaki on Sept 11, 2008 9:38:38 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai Bahut Khoobsorat nazam share ki hai app ne..... Bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay..... sada khush raheay....
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