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Post by meena on Aug 12, 2008 17:20:05 GMT 5
bohut piyari ghazal.......!
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Post by meena on Aug 10, 2008 22:49:40 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Aik mukhtasar si nazm hazir hai. Ye nazm main "Atif Mirza Bhaii" kay naam kerta hoon. Ap ki aaraa ka intezaar rahay ga. "KAASH" Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta! mukhtasir...............aor mukamal..........! bohut khoob.......!! faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 10, 2008 22:46:46 GMT 5
Behtreen.........................!
maray paas alfaaz nahin ke main apni raaye is khoobsoorat naat per paish ker sakun................!!
bohut khoob..........!!!
faqat
meena
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Post by meena on Aug 10, 2008 22:26:40 GMT 5
bohut shukriya Rafi sahab........aap nai as usuall meena kee bher poor hosla afzaayii kee......... ;D faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 13:16:38 GMT 5
soz e Nay mein jo muqayyad thi Sada,la maujood aik ahang numa raqs mein tha lamaujood mein nay jis pal tujhy manga tha khuda say usi pal mujhy ehsas hoa mayra khuda la maujood har farishty kay tabbasum say ayaN tha koe hay har sitaray ki jabeeN par likha tha la,majood yahan sunta nahi awaz e sarafeel koe khaak uraatay hoey kehti thi hawa la maujood aik ik mauj pe heiN naqsh ye ayayaat e janooN jahan shab hay wahiN par hay ujaala maujood banjh mitti pe koe abr barasny laga hay koe dam hay yahaN hoN gay gul o lala Maujood lafz choray heiN wirasat meiN ghazal ki soorat ta dam e hashr hay ab mayra hawala maujood kiya kahye................bohut khoob...... jub bhee likhtahy hain..........be misaal likhtay hain......! faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 13:11:59 GMT 5
Aapka poora naam = Meena
Aapka qalmi naam ya laqab = meena
Shehr, Mulk= England
Aapka E-mail address= meena_baboo@yahoo.com
Taleem = M.Sc (Maths)
Aapka paisha = Teaching
Aap sukhanwar pe kis wasaasat se aaye hain = Ramish bhayii nai invite kiya.........
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 13:03:55 GMT 5
janab ap k liay bottle pakki magar meena sahiba nay abhi tak apni mojoodgi zahir nahi ki hummm.........moujoodgi kaisay zahir kertay janab.........aap kai forum tuk RASAAYI hee aaj ho paayi hai............. aor haaN ramish bhayii aik sheezan meena kee janib sai....................... ;D faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 12:58:46 GMT 5
Meena g ham bhi aap ko aap ki apni is mehfil maiN khush amdeed kehtay haiN bohut bohut shukriya Rafi bhayii........... kaisay hain aap? faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 12:57:05 GMT 5
ramish bhayii..............aap ka shukriya kaisay ada karay meena.........aap kai liye meena kai dil sai dhaair sari duaain nikalti hain..................
ALLAH AAP KO HAMAISHA KHUSH RAKHAY....AMEEN
faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 12:54:59 GMT 5
meena sahiba hum aap ka khair maqdam kertay hain or aap kay tufseeli taaruf kay muntazir hain bohut shukriya sohail ji...... faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 12:54:20 GMT 5
Meena Saheba ko naay forum per naya janam mubarak ho. Meena ji aap ko bharpoor tareeqay say welcome kehtay haiN. Aap kay taarruf aur shaeri ka intezaar rahay ga! hummm.......bohut shukriya bhayii......DOBARA JANAM......sai yaad aaya.... sou baar janam lain gai sou baar fana hon gai aaye jaan e wafa phir bhee hum tum na juda hon gai........... ;D (aray ye sher tou SUKHANWER kai liye hai........aap kyun KHUSH ho rahay hain??? ) faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 12:51:43 GMT 5
meena sahiba aik muddat k baad is bazmmain aai hain hamaray puraanay forum main boht mutaharak theen khoobsoorat shair kehti hain meena sahiba ka bhar poor istaqbaal kartay hain hum meena ji boht khushi hui aap ko aaj dobara sukhanwar main daykh kar meena ji isi section main aik thread hy apna apna taaruf aap say guzarish hy k wahan apna taaruf bhi kara dijiay boht say naay log bhi hain jo aap ko jaanna chaahtay hain thanx razi ufff.......Razi bhayii.......main kiya kahun........meena is laaiq kahan..........yaqeen jaaniye Razi bhayii mujhay is sai bhee baRh ker khushi huyii ke main dobara forum ko join ker saki.....main to laakh koshish kai baavijood bhee forum ko talaash na ker sakee thee.......ye to bhala ho ramish bhayii ka jinhon nai hamain dobara APNON sai mila diya................ ;D khush rahye faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 12:45:18 GMT 5
wah ramish bhayi....aik arsay baad aik khoobsoorat kalaam paRhnay ko mila.......... aap kee shairy main bohut nikhaar aa gaya hai janab......wallah bohut umda likhtay hain aap.........! faqat meena
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 12:37:04 GMT 5
AOA.............
aik taaweel arsay kai baad aap sub kai saath hai meena......wajah dhaaaaair saaaaaari masroofiyaat......aor sukhanwer ka KHO jana tha.....just couple of days ago achanak ramish bhayii sai mulaqat ho gayii to unhon nai ye link diya......meena tah e dil sai un kee shuker guzaar hai......... jaisa ke aap sub jaantay hain ke meena jub bhee aor jo bhee TUK BANDI kerti hai forums per bhaij daiti hai to aaj jub ke aap kai saath hai meena to aik nayii TUK BANDI hazir hai...... ;D shairy to aap paRhtay rehtay hai......zara AANKH ka zayiqa change kernay ke liye AIK NAZAR IDHER BHEE................
matti kee moorat.....!
Wo majhay matti kee aik moorat samajhta hai
Nadan……phir bhee mujhay apni zaroorat samajhta hai
Kabhee wo mujhay aatish daan per sajata hai
Aor khud saamanay baith ker daikhta jaata hai
Jub aik shokh chingaari lapak ker maray paas aati hai
Uskee tapish jub mujhay jalaati hai
Main tarap ker rah jaati hun
Mary ye ada usay bohut hee bhaati hai
Kabhee jub wo udaas hota hai
Wo lamha bohut hee khaas hota hai
Wo mujhay aavaz daita hai
Us kee sada sai maray under zindagi dor jaati hai
Main uskai paas aati hun
Aor wo khud kalaami main
Mujh sai kalaam kerta hai
Maray vajood ka ruvaan ruvaan jhuk ker
usay salaam kerta hai
Keh jaisay husn sajda raiz ho ishq kai aagay….!
Wo mujh sai poochta hai
Tumhain maaloom hai udasi kiya hoti hai?
Dard kee shiddat zara see bhee,kiyah hoti hai?
Us kee baat sun ker mara dil bher aata hai
Dard dil sai uthta hai…zubaan per aata hai
Phir main usay sunaati hun saari baatain
Dil-o-damagh per taari baatain
Apni deeda-e-purnum kee baatain
Phool kee ,shabnam kee baatain
Ishq kee aor piyar kee baatain
Jeet kee aor haar kee baatain
Mehboob kee vafa kee baatain
Hijr kee aor jafa kee baatain
Mary baaton main dard bhee tha sakun bhee tha
Malaal bhee tha………janoon bhee tha
Wo sunta hai aor sisakta hai
Jaisay dard sai bilakta hai
Fart-e-jazbaat main galay sai lagata hai mujhay
Apni baanhon kai jhoolay main jhulata hai mujhay
Main uskai piyar main kho hee jaati hun
Uskay seenay sai lag ker so hee jati hun
Phir achanak usay khayal aata hai
Apni naadani per malaal aata hai
Ye to matti kee aik moorat hai
Bhala mujhay is kee kaya zaroorat hai
Wo mujhay uthata hai
Aatish daan per sajata hai
mara khavaab toot jaata hai
Zindagi ka daaman phir haath sai choot jata hai
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