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Post by Aqeel Malik on Feb 19, 2008 18:00:23 GMT 5
soz e Nay mein jo muqayyad thi Sada,la maujood aik ahang numa raqs mein tha lamaujood
mein nay jis pal tujhy manga tha khuda say usi pal mujhy ehsas hoa mayra khuda la maujood
har farishty kay tabbasum say ayaN tha koe hay har sitaray ki jabeeN par likha tha la,majood
yahan sunta nahi awaz e sarafeel koe khaak uraatay hoey kehti thi hawa la maujood
aik ik mauj pe heiN naqsh ye ayayaat e janooN jahan shab hay wahiN par hay ujaala maujood
banjh mitti pe koe abr barasny laga hay koe dam hay yahaN hoN gay gul o lala Maujood
lafz choray heiN wirasat meiN ghazal ki soorat ta dam e hashr hay ab mayra hawala maujood
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Post by khalid on Feb 19, 2008 19:45:22 GMT 5
waah! aqeel sb khoobsoorat ghazal!! mushkil aur munfarid radee ko khoob nibhaaya hai aap ne! daad quboliye!
ppaNchveN she'r ka doosra misra shayad nazr e saani maaNgta hai!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 19, 2008 22:46:45 GMT 5
wahhh bohat khoob Malik sahib
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Feb 20, 2008 17:13:23 GMT 5
waah! aqeel sb khoobsoorat ghazal!! mushkil aur munfarid radee ko khoob nibhaaya hai aap ne! daad quboliye!
ppaNchveN she'r ka doosra misra shayad nazr e saani maaNgta hai! ap ka shukria ke ap nay ghazal ko pasand kia aur jis misray kitaraf ap nay ishara kia ap agar bata daytay ke kis hawaly say ap ko khatka tu yaqeenan mayray leay asaani hoti kiun mein kafi kant chant kay bad koe misra lagata hon behr kaif hosakta hay mayri kisi pehlo par nazar na pari ho umeed karta hon nishandehi parmaein gay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Feb 20, 2008 17:13:58 GMT 5
wahhh bohat khoob Malik sahib shukria Dr sahab
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Post by Sukhanwar on Feb 20, 2008 23:23:41 GMT 5
aqeel bhai aap ki ghazal ny bohat lutf dia is ki khaas baat yaqeenan aik mushkil zameen hy aap ny la mojood k qaafiay ko jis tara nibhaaya wo qabil e sataaish hy khas taur par khuda la mojood wala shair kamaal ka hy khush rahain aap thanx razi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Feb 24, 2008 18:28:24 GMT 5
aqeel bhai aap ki ghazal ny bohat lutf dia is ki khaas baat yaqeenan aik mushkil zameen hy aap ny la mojood k qaafiay ko jis tara nibhaaya wo qabil e sataaish hy khas taur par khuda la mojood wala shair kamaal ka hy khush rahain aap thanx razi Razi sahab ap ka shukria
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 25, 2008 1:21:04 GMT 5
AOA malik sahib keya bat he janab bohat umda gahzal atta ki he bohat sari dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Feb 25, 2008 17:50:51 GMT 5
AOA malik sahib keya bat he janab bohat umda gahzal atta ki he bohat sari dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan shukria
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Post by saeed on Feb 29, 2008 3:22:38 GMT 5
Malik saab, buhut acchi kavish hai. ghazal ka lutf tabhi aata hai jab mehboob mojod ho....or khuda la Mojod... khush rahen. saeed
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 3, 2008 16:45:13 GMT 5
shuria saeed sahab
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zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 8, 2008 3:14:19 GMT 5
Aqeel saheb
bari munfrid radeef per itni achi ghazal kahi aap ney... kya khub nibhaya hey saheb. Maqta tow bohat lutf dey gaya. Dad hazir hey
Kher andesh
Qamar
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 11, 2008 12:30:55 GMT 5
shukria qamar sahab
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 30, 2008 19:58:11 GMT 5
Munfarid aur achhoota andaaz hai ghazal maiN. Daad qabool kijiay.
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meena
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by meena on Aug 9, 2008 13:16:38 GMT 5
soz e Nay mein jo muqayyad thi Sada,la maujood aik ahang numa raqs mein tha lamaujood mein nay jis pal tujhy manga tha khuda say usi pal mujhy ehsas hoa mayra khuda la maujood har farishty kay tabbasum say ayaN tha koe hay har sitaray ki jabeeN par likha tha la,majood yahan sunta nahi awaz e sarafeel koe khaak uraatay hoey kehti thi hawa la maujood aik ik mauj pe heiN naqsh ye ayayaat e janooN jahan shab hay wahiN par hay ujaala maujood banjh mitti pe koe abr barasny laga hay koe dam hay yahaN hoN gay gul o lala Maujood lafz choray heiN wirasat meiN ghazal ki soorat ta dam e hashr hay ab mayra hawala maujood kiya kahye................bohut khoob...... jub bhee likhtahy hain..........be misaal likhtay hain......! faqat meena
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