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Post by tmasood on Jul 17, 2009 1:22:50 GMT 5
Rim jhim, rim jhim gham barsa hai aaNkhoN say Ab kay Atif khooN tapka hai aaNkhoN say
Paas gaay tau andhay pan ka raaz khula Beena her ik shakhs laga hai aaNkhoN say
Aa jaao yeh rasta hai aasaan bahut Zeena dil maiN utar raha hai aaNkhoN say
Muddat say jo andar andar pakta tha Ab woh laawah beh nikla hai aaNkhoN say
Piyar maiN Atif lub ka hilana bay ja hai Uss nay yeh paigham diya hai aaNkhoN say
mashallah bohat khoob nazm hai
ashaar k maZaameen bhi ache haiN
daad haazir hai Atif Bah'ee
aap se urdu main typo ho gayaa hai
zeenah dil main uter rehaa hai aankhN se
ko aap " zeenah dil se uter rehaa hai ankhoN se" likh gaey haiN
shaer bohat laa jawaab hai
baar-e-digar daad HaaZir hai
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Post by tmasood on Jul 17, 2009 1:15:07 GMT 5
Bahut umdah ...... Sada khusha raheay ... Shukeriyah Zaki bha'ee maiN teh-e-dil se mamnoon hoN
Khush rehaiN
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Post by tmasood on Jul 17, 2009 1:13:18 GMT 5
AAP KI NAZM WATAN KE MUHBBAT KA BY MISAAL SABOOT HAY Jazaakomullah Bashir bha'ee
meri adnaa si koshish ko seraahne k liye maiN mamnoon hoN
Allah Ta'alaa watan-e-Aziz per apni KhaaS erHmat ki nazaer fermaaey.aameen
Khush rehaiN
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Post by tmasood on Jul 17, 2009 1:11:23 GMT 5
Tahira aapaa khoob ssorat nazrana hai dharti maaN ki khidmat maiN. Shayad kahiN kahiN typos ki wajah say behr say kharij hai. Jald hi nishandahi karooN ga. Atif Bahiyya
salaam
bohat bohat shukeriyah is hauSlah afza'ee kaa
aghlaat ki nishandahi ka intezaar rehay gaa
Khush rehaiN
wassalam
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Post by tmasood on Jul 17, 2009 1:10:07 GMT 5
Tahira Sahiba, Adaab. Watan-e-Azeez k hawalay se khoobsoorat nazm hai. Daad hazir hai. Jooni Bha'ee maiN aapki manoon hoN
in tareefi kalimaat kaa shukeriyah
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Post by tmasood on Jul 17, 2009 1:06:24 GMT 5
sukhanwar ki chothee salgira k moqay per joint thread main aap sab ko khush aamdeed kehta hoon aaj hum hasb e riwayat is thread main sukhanwar ki salgira manaain gay aur guzray lamhon ko yaad karain gay aaiay sahab moHteram Razi bha'ee
salaam-e-khuloos
aap ko bhi bohat bohat mubarak ho
Allah kare keh ilm-o-adab ki dildaada -o-perwerdah yeh site hameshah phalay phoolay aur ma'rfat-o-Hikmat k moti bahkhairti rehay. Ameen
yehaN per mojuud aik Khaandan kaa saa maHol yuNhi sab per hameshah apni muHabbatein nichaawar kertaa rehay.sumaa aameen
meri teraf se aikbaar phir aapko aur tamaam membraan ko
Khush rehaindilee mubarakbaad
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Post by tmasood on Apr 18, 2009 21:25:36 GMT 5
Allah Ta'alaa Neelofer Sahibah ki aankh kaa operation kaamyaab fermaaey.Ameen
aur hamesha seht-o- tandarusti k saath khush-o- khurram rakhay.aameen
bohat shukeriyah hamein bataane kaa Atif bha'ee
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Post by tmasood on Apr 14, 2009 2:18:19 GMT 5
Atif Bha'ee
Asslamo Alaikum warehmatullahi waa baraaktohuu
aap ne aik bohat khoobsurat mushaaire ki rudaad nehaayat achay andaaz maiN bayaan ki haiN.
hameiN bhi ismaiN shaamil kerne kaa shukeriyah
sab ki manzoomaat pasand aa'ee haiN
aap ki contributions hamesha ki teraH bohat dilnasheeN aur khoobSurat haiN.
Shahiya saheb tau chaa gaey haiN
unkee nazmoN kaa nadaaz bohat achaa lagaa
khaS taur per aakheri band
mubarakbaad k mustaHiq hai woh bhi
aikbaar phir aapkaa shukeriyah
maine Derte Dert yeh post likhee hai
aaj kal ujlat maiN hoti hoN is liye typos bohat ho jaati haiN
umeed hai keh isbaar koee ghalati nahiN huee ho gee
shukeriyah
wassalam
khush rehaiN
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Post by tmasood on Apr 7, 2009 23:03:26 GMT 5
Razi Bahie Bha'ee
Asslamo Alaikum warehmatullahi waa barakaatohuu
I salute you for this column
Bravo!
Haq baat kehnaa sab se baRaa jehaad hai
Allah Talaa aap per her mumkin fazloN ki baarish karay aur aap ko is kaa ajr-e- Azeem ataa fermaaey. aameen
Aur fermaata hi chalaa jaaey.Ameen summa aameen. sumaa aameen
shukar sad shukar keh zombioN k is mulk main koee insaan nazar aaya
baHaiciyyat muslmaan k hamaiN Ilaahi HukmoN se qata'ee inkaar nahiN Laikin un ahkaamat ko naafiz kerne aur unkaa ittelaqq jin suratoN aur sheraait aur Haalat maiN hotaa hai unkaa khayaal kernaa be hadd zaroori hai
aik waaqia hai keh aik baar aik ShakHs ne roti chura'ee log usko pakR ker maarne lage
Tau Huzuur Sallalaho Alaiihi waa aalaihee wa sallam ne fermaay us se yeh tau poocho woh kab se bhooka hai?
haalankeh Islam maiN chori ki sazaa bohat sakht hai
isee teraH ikk bin maaN baap ki bachee jiskee rehnumaa'ee k liye koee serprast nah ho uski terbiyyat maiN kasar reh sakti hai
woh qaabil-e-rehm hai
meraa khud us bachi ki cheekhoN se klaija chalni hai
Sirf aikbaar dekhi woh video aur kaee raateiN theek se sau nahiN paa'ee
be tehaasha swaalat gham aur ghusah hai dilmeiN
aik naujawaan laRkee ko merdoN k majme maiN jaanwaroN ki teraH khulee zameen per litaa ker merdoN se hi piTwaana kehaan kaa Islam hai?
her gizz nahiN Islam aisaa nahin hai
jab usko koRe parte thay tau uski qmeez peeTh se uTh jaati thi jisper ser ki teraf waala aadmi usko foran neechi kertaa.aur yeh nazzaara saare momineen dekhte rahae. kisee ko ghairt nahiN aae keh uski itnee be hurmati kerne kaa Haq kisee ko nah thaa
phir maarne waalaa aadmi tau goyaa Khudaa banaa huaa thaa
jab aikbaar laRki ne haath chuRaa ker khud ko bachaan ek liye peeche kiya tau us shakhs ne ser waale aadmi ko jamaa ker aik dhap lag'ee keh theek se pakRo
woh hai koN? usko yeh iKhtiaar dia kis ne keh wo jis ko chaahae jehaaN chaahae jo merZee sazaa de???
zeraa koee is shaKhS k ser per quran rakhwaa ker agar is se qasam le keh uss ne kabhi bhii koee gunaah nahin kiyaa aur woh Quran Uthaa le tau maaneiN
magar tab bhi agar koee naik hai tau apne liye hai
kisee per iskee dhons jamaane k zaroorat nahiN
ikk bin maan baap ki bachi jis kee agar terbiyyat maiN koee khaami reh bhi gaee thi tau yeh"islam ka alamberdaar" muaashera is kaa waqt se pehle sidd-e-baab kioN nahi ker skaa
Khuda Ta'alaa ne jo chaar gawaah kaa irshad fermaaya hai bilaa wajah nahin hai. is main bohat gehri Hikmat hai
magar kotaah aql lgoN ne isko dau gahwaah ker diaa hai taa keh sazaa daine maiN daer nah lagae
Khudaa k HukmoN ko badalne kaa ikhtiyaar inko ksi ne diaa?
kayaa Allah aur Rasool ko ilm nahin thaa keh chaar gawaah laana ju-e-sheer laane k beraaber hai
tau phir bhi aisaa kioN fermaaya gayaa?
shari'at k aHakaamt apne ander bohat hikmatein rakhte haiN is teraH k Hassas muaamilaat ko nimTaane main bohat ziyaadah ahtiyaat ki Zaroorat hai
Jaan jane per utnaa dukh nahin hotaa jitnaa Izzat jaane per
is se tau rooH bhi mer jaati hai
yeh sharee'at kaa qanoon koee dunyaavi qaanoo nahiN keh iskee aankhoN per patti bandhi ho
is noi'yyat k muaamilaat maiN Ghalati kaa aHtamaal naa qaabile talaafi nuqSaan ponhchaa saktaa hai insaan ko
Hazart umer tau madinah ki galyoN maiN yeh dakhne k liye chakkar lgaate thay keh kahin koee bhooka tua nahin reh gayaa kahiN koee muSeebat zedah tau nahiN hai
yeh daikhne k liye chakkar nahiN lagaate thay keh gheroN maiN biathay logoN ko sezaa dainay k jawaaz dhoondaiN
Allah Ta'alaa inko Haqeeqi taqwaa ataa fermaaey.ameen
filHaal tau yeh bhi Azaab hi ki qism hai
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Post by tmasood on Mar 31, 2009 2:32:38 GMT 5
Atifa bha'ee aap k is andaaz per ahnsi aa rehi hai
baat hai k jitne aap preeshaan ahin is qite per is se ziyaadah maiN hoN
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Post by tmasood on Mar 31, 2009 2:15:29 GMT 5
Kia kaha hai ya kia kehnay ki koshish ki hai aap nay? Aik ghazal hoti kum ashaar ki, chunay huway ashaar hotay tau behtar hota.
Atif bha'ee
yeh aik duaaiyah kalaam hai
aap ki taba'e naazuk per yeh andaaz garaaNn guzeraa ho tau ma'zerat khwaah hoN
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Post by tmasood on Mar 31, 2009 2:12:51 GMT 5
T Masood Sahiba, Boht achhi aur khoobsoorat nazm hai. DaaD qubool kijiye. " Muzaffar Garh " main kabb zalzala aaya? Wazahat kijiye ga plzzz. mohteram bha'ee salaam
is HuaSlah afaz'ee k liye manoon hoN
jee haaN wogh mUzaffar aabad kaa zalzila thaa
my bad! sorry!!!
isko theek kerdoNgee
khush rehaiN
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Hayaa
Mar 31, 2009 2:10:49 GMT 5
Post by tmasood on Mar 31, 2009 2:10:49 GMT 5
boht khoob yeh naasihana andaz ab khaal khaal hi daykhnay ko milta hy thanx razi Jazaakomullah Razi bha'ee is hauSlah afz'ee k liye mamnoon hoN
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Hayaa
Mar 31, 2009 2:09:32 GMT 5
Post by tmasood on Mar 31, 2009 2:09:32 GMT 5
Tahira ji aur haya goya ik ibaadat hai.. khoobsoorat nazara pesh kiya hai haya ka. wishes Devi bohat boat shukeriyah devi jee
khush rehaiN
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Post by tmasood on Mar 31, 2009 2:07:38 GMT 5
Wah Bahut Khoob........... Bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay...... Sada Khush raheay...... jazaakomullah Zaki bha'ee
sadaa khush rAhiye
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