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Post by Atif Mirza on May 10, 2009 19:09:39 GMT 5
Rim jhim, rim jhim gham barsa hai aaNkhoN say Ab kay Atif khooN tapka hai aaNkhoN say
Paas gaay tau andhay pan ka raaz khula Beena her ik shakhs laga hai aaNkhoN say
Aa jaao yeh rasta hai aasaan bahut Zeena dil maiN utar raha hai aaNkhoN say
Muddat say jo andar andar pakta tha Ab woh laawah beh nikla hai aaNkhoN say
Piyar maiN Atif lub ka hilana bay ja hai Uss nay yeh paigham diya hai aaNkhoN say
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jooni
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Post by jooni on May 10, 2009 22:10:37 GMT 5
Atif Bhai, Adaab.
Boht hi khoobsoorat aur jandar ghazal hai.
Aakhon k hawalay say kuchh na'ii baat hai.
Dhair sari daad hazir hai.
Allah aap ko khush rakhay!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 10, 2009 22:28:22 GMT 5
Mirza sahib Khoobsoorat ghazal share ki aap nay daad qabool kejiay
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Raheel
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by Raheel on May 11, 2009 10:07:21 GMT 5
Bahut khoob likha, Saheb aap ney! Maza aa giya!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2009 21:10:31 GMT 5
Atif Bhai, Adaab. Boht hi khoobsoorat aur jandar ghazal hai. Aakhon k hawalay say kuchh na'ii baat hai. Dhair sari daad hazir hai. Allah aap ko khush rakhay! Shukriya Jooni Bhai! Kaifiyat ki ghazal hai yeh....
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2009 21:17:15 GMT 5
Mirza sahib Khoobsoorat ghazal share ki aap nay daad qabool kejiay Shukriya Rafi bhai! Daad qabool ki!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2009 21:18:03 GMT 5
Bahut khoob likha, Saheb aap ney! Maza aa giya! Raheel Saheb shuriya taareef ka!
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zaki
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Post by zaki on May 12, 2009 13:46:05 GMT 5
Bahut khoobsorat ghazal hai Atif sahab ... daad hazir hai Sada khush raheay ...
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 13, 2009 2:27:12 GMT 5
Shukriya Zaki bhai!
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Post by tmasood on Jul 17, 2009 1:22:50 GMT 5
Rim jhim, rim jhim gham barsa hai aaNkhoN say Ab kay Atif khooN tapka hai aaNkhoN say
Paas gaay tau andhay pan ka raaz khula Beena her ik shakhs laga hai aaNkhoN say
Aa jaao yeh rasta hai aasaan bahut Zeena dil maiN utar raha hai aaNkhoN say
Muddat say jo andar andar pakta tha Ab woh laawah beh nikla hai aaNkhoN say
Piyar maiN Atif lub ka hilana bay ja hai Uss nay yeh paigham diya hai aaNkhoN say
mashallah bohat khoob nazm hai
ashaar k maZaameen bhi ache haiN
daad haazir hai Atif Bah'ee
aap se urdu main typo ho gayaa hai
zeenah dil main uter rehaa hai aankhN se
ko aap " zeenah dil se uter rehaa hai ankhoN se" likh gaey haiN
shaer bohat laa jawaab hai
baar-e-digar daad HaaZir hai
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 26, 2011 8:48:06 GMT 5
Typo durust kar di gayee hai.
Tareef ka shukriya.
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