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Post by saeed on Aug 4, 2008 8:46:41 GMT 5
khub kavish hai Daad
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Post by saeed on Aug 4, 2008 8:42:12 GMT 5
Aik dil aur itney gham Ramish Kitney arman aur mein tanha
Wahhh Buhut khub
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Post by saeed on Aug 4, 2008 8:40:01 GMT 5
Khub tevar hain Ramish bhai. Daad
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Post by saeed on Aug 4, 2008 8:38:33 GMT 5
saeed sahib mujay sirf yeh khusi hay keh aap kay kalam main rawani hay.rawani woh naheen jo log aam toor per istaymaal kertay hain.yeh aik technical istalah hay.main nain apni thesis ka dosra chapter jo funiistalahat say mutaliq hay atif mirza sahib ko email kia tha ager unhain kabi fursat huii tu iss forum per post ker dain gay.uss main in istalahat ki funi tareef hay.phD maqalay ka unwaan tha "urdu shairy main islah e sukhan ki rawayat"lahore say mujlis taraqi adab say shaya hua hay.maray pasandida field hay "tufheemi tunqeed" yeh istalah meri ghari huii hay.iss silsilay main meri aik kitab bhi hay"Baag o bahar by meer aman ka lisani tujzeea" multan say becon books nay shaya ki hay.yeh to theen fazool batain.ab aap ki ghazal per baat ho jaey. "reh reh kay daikhna" wala sher bohat umda hay iss kyaal say wohi poray toor per lutf undooz ho saktay hainn jo abroad rehtay hain. baqi kaii sher kasnay walay hain. pehlay sher main "phir" say lag raha hay keh josh e musafat pehlay bhii tha.jub keh deewangi tu musalsal cheez hay. do teen sher asay hain keh amoomi kyal hay.aap achay kyal la saktay hain juldbazi na kia karain.russian liguistic school of thougt kehta hay keh "text" ko "defamiliar" hona chaeay.aap naey kyal laya kareen.meer anees aik aik bund ki riyazat iss tarah kerwatay thay keh aik bund per 70 bund likhwatay thay.yeh hay reyazat jub aap itni riyazat karain gay tu kaii suhail abbas aap ko dad daynay kay liey line main kharay hoon gay. Suhail saheb, Buhut nawazish ke aapney itni tawajo se meri ghazal ko paRha aur apnney qeemati raye se nawaza. Jahan tak kasney ki bat hai to baja farmaya aapney…. Yes is ghazal ka pehla graft hai jo dostoN se share kiya hai. Publish honey ki manzil tak kasney ka amal jari rahega aur is ghazal ke kei ashaar mein tabdeliyaN aayengi aur shayad kuch ashaar qurban ho jayeN. “Phir Josh-e-musafat” ke silsiley mein arz hai ke josh aik sa nahen rehta is mein kami beshi aati rehti hai….jesey deevangi bhi musalsal honey ke ba-wajood kam ziyadeh hoti rehti hai. Riyazat ke barey mein aapka mashwara sar-aaonkhoN pe….ye kabhi na khatm honey wala safar hai. Aik bar phir mashwarey aur hosla afzai ka buhut shukriya. Regards, Saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 4, 2008 4:46:06 GMT 5
Full Name: Saeed Ahmed Khan Pen name: Saeed Date & Place of Birth: 19 July 1966, Khanpur Hazara (Distt: Haripur) Residence: Sydney, Australia/ Khanpur NWFP, Pakistan Phone: 61-414 698 634 Email: talktosaeed@gmail.com…. Websites: Activism and politics: www.saeedkhan.org Poetry: saeed.be Education: MBA (E-Business Management), Masters of Management, University of technology, Sydney (UTS). Profession: IT Consulting & Management (also elected Councillor in Sydney since 2004) Sukhanwar Reference: Razi-ud-din Razi Books – 2 collections of Urdu poetry 1. “Manzar Baat Karte Hain” 2003, Bangash Publishres, Lahore/Sialkot 2.“ Eik Muthhi Mein Mere Khaab” 2007, “Sham-k-Baad Publications, Lahore Interests: poetry, activism, politics, environment, community development …and CRICKET Aziz e Girami qadr, Aapki tasveer (shkhsiat) bhi aap ke kalam ki tarah taro taza aur umdagi ka shahkaar nazar aati hey. Shukria, ke yuN nisf mulaqaat ka samaan to hooa. Is nisf mulaqaat se mazeed khushi hasil hooie aur tamaniat ka ehsaas hooa. Shaad o Abaad rahey, Ameen Tashie Tashie bhai, Buhut Nawazish.....pleasure is all mine! Saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 4, 2008 4:07:26 GMT 5
Mohtaram Najm-ul-Asghar Shahia saheb, Mera aapse taaruf nahen lekin Aapko yahan dekh ker sub se ziadeh khushi mujhey hui hai....Kiyun???
iska jawab merey is sher mein hai.....
Ik jism ke perdes mein phirta hai preshaaN ik rooh ke choR aaye they ham des hazarey
mein bhi Khanpur Dam (Haripur) se hoon.
Aapkey Ashaar jo Atif bhai ne ata kiye haiN lajawab haiN Umeed hai ke aapse deger DAK-KHANEY bhi milenge aur khubsoorat shari se bhi mustafeed honey ka moqa milega.
Dili Khush-aamdeed Saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 3, 2008 8:23:56 GMT 5
Faraz and our mindset www.thenews.com.pk/daily_detail.asp?id=127787 Sunday, August 03, 2008 Masood Hasan, the Daily NEWS In another time and another place, perhaps the sudden illness of a country's leading poet would have made headline news or at least made it to the front page, but not here. The disturbing news that Ahmad Faraz was critically ill in hospital in the US first broke ground in one of Lahore's English-language newspapers, and that too because its US correspondent was able to share that piece of bad news with readers back home. Other newspapers, unless I missed it all, barely had time or space to mention this grave development. Instead, we were, as usual, treated to more details of the national farce that passes for governance these days, and more inanities uttered by nobodies on every subject under the sun. Talks between the JUI-F jirga rival groups were suspended, cheery news that another jirga not engaged in more time-wasting "talks" would be deciding the fate of 29 abducted soldiers hit the nation's front pages. A suicide bomber who struck a Shia gathering in Dera Ismail Khan (it's always open season on Shias and Ahmedis, with the regular lynching and burning of Christian churches thrown in for variety) and blew himself apart. Militants had a change of heart and returned the bodies of 17 nameless men of the Frontier Constabulary killed in action, ambushed in Hangu – which to me reads more and more like "Hang You." And the PM discussed the expansion of the federal capital with allies – not in Islamabad, stupid, but Lahore, where the circus was performing on great public demand after a sell-out show in Dubai. Yet another drone violated Pakistani airspace – and Mr Gilani thundered that Pakistan won't allow anyone to interfere in its affairs. Reality, we all know, fled from this country, as did decency. That was the print media. As for the over-saturated and low-grade pulp that characterises the electronic media, the less said the better. Their great contribution to the cause of Ahmad Faraz was to announce that he was dead, which was slightly inaccurate since he was and remains alive, fighting for his life. Subsequently there was some stirring and show of a little concern about a man whose poetry has never thrilled the power-holders, who in Pakistan seem to discover humanity and the fine arts after they have safely retired, pocketed their gratuity funds and salted away their sizeable ill-gotten wealth. Then the muse is upon them as they churn out poetry, write fine essays and appreciate the arts of this largely barren land. But while this may not be applicable to all who serve the government – there have always been good men and women in a growing minority – by and large, starting with official neglect down to individual indifference, we have, one and all, treated our great, talented sons and daughters with contempt, never openly embraced them or their craft and left most of them to fend for themselves in an environment that now enters yet another hostile era. Once these artists have safely died, out come the flowery adjectives, the full-throated praise and adulation that would make a stone blush. Why have we behaved so abominably with our artists? Why have we hounded them so shamelessly? Our history of 60-odd troubled years is full of heartbreaking stories. Over and over again, when support was badly needed, all it generated was royal indifference. Look at the coarse way Ahmad Faraz's ordeal is being handled. After great persuasion, it is said, our new US ambassador had some flowers delivered to the ICU – someone quite conveniently forgetting that flowers are not allowed in American ICUs unlike here, where both flowers and bodies can be inside any ICU on any given day in any city. There has been a mouse-like squeak that suggests the government has agreed to take care of the medical bills for Faraz's treatment. Has it made larger headlines? I must have missed that too. May Faraz win this battle too and may the gods smile on him, but surely he is not the establishment's favourite son, having lamthingyed them and our hobnailed friends who have had a glorious time living off the fat of the land for decades. What is more, he returned some medal or the other that was given to him because the regime's attitude upset him. Who returns medals in Pakistan and still have friends in the corridors of power? Not a big list, that one. Roshan Ara Begum melted away into the shadows long ago, taking with her that glorious voice and that gift only gods can bestow on mortals – talent. During her lifetime she was at the receiving end of petty babus, and PTV, bless its dark heart, gave her scant time to sing her great works of classical music. Eventually she just stopped trying. I have yet to see her works produced as an anthology, yet to see a street named after her or seminars and gatherings to formally acknowledge her contribution to music. Do any of the channels ever think of doing in-depth programmes on artists like her, instead of the drivel that they mindlessly churn out 24 hours a day? There is some archival material still and there are people who can talk about her, but who is going to do that? Has anyone ever thought of opening the few classical conferences that we hold and pay formal tribute to Pakistan's great heritage of singers and musicians? Have we ever thought of a festival where we showcase their work interpreted through other artists? Has someone written a biography of the great diva? Perhaps, but forgive many of us for not having even seen its shadow. I cite Roshan Ara Begum's story just to illustrate the terrible neglect that each one of us has practised through indifference and disinterest. The list of those who have on the one hand been denied their proper place and role in this country and persecuted for their art, is a sad list and even more sad, a long one. The great Faiz fled and lived in self-imposed exile after being framed in a conspiracy case – yet others who actually sold and continue to sell state secrets were conferred this nation's highest accolades – even Faraz left the country. Manto was hounded in courts by men who did not deserve to be called human beings – his relentless expose of human failings could not be stomached by a country where hypocrites and liars abound. Even today, he remains an outcast, loved and supported by those who know and appreciate his art. The work done on him is largely outside Pakistan and if the literary world knows Manto, it is because of this. The sanitised Pakistani government wouldn't be seen dead supporting him or acknowledging his greatness. A plaque placed on the house where he lived and wrote was entirely done by a band of people – ordinary citizens. The list of those who have bled at the hands of our collective indifference is long. Amongst musicians, Amanat Ali Khan died penniless, Nur Jehan survived and prospered because she could take on the establishment, Nusrat Fateh Ali sang all his life in the back streets of Pakistan till he became famous in the West, Pathanay Khan died for lack of proper medical care, Ahmed Pervaiz, the painter, suffered needlessly, Naheed lost her golden years unable to dance on Pakistani stages, even Zia's poetry recitals were cloak-and-dagger affairs – these are the famous ones. Others, not so famous, have died in silence. Even today, electronic channels play the music of artists, earn huge profits but don't pay them even a single paisa. It's a sad commentary on what we are and how we have lost our way. Those who treat their finest sons and daughters so atrociously never amount to much, but then who cares? The writer is a Lahore-based columnist. Email: masoodhasan66@gmail.com
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Post by saeed on Aug 3, 2008 6:01:08 GMT 5
Khalid Hasan US Correspondent Daily Times, Lahore
Sent: Friday, August 01, 2008 7:40 PM Subject: Faraz
Faraz being flown home on Sunday
* Poet's condition remains 'stable but delicate'
By Khalid Hasan
WASHINGTON: Ahmed Faraz is being flown to Pakistan on Sunday, August 3, by a PIA flight from Toronto to Islamabad, according to Ambassador Husain Haqqani, who has provided from embassy funds $28,000 to defray the expense involved. Faraz, accompanied by his son Shibli Faraz and a male nurse, will be flown to Toronto from Chicago by air ambulance, from where he will be put on board PIA. His nurse will accompany him all the way to Islamabad. Haqqani told Daily Times that he had informed Dr Murtaza Arain and Dr Tahir Rohail, principal physician of the ailing poet, that the bill for Faraz's long hospitalisation, which is expected to run into $250,000, should be sent to the embassy. Prime Minister Syed Yousuf Raza Gilani, who met Dr Arain in Washington, inquired after Faraz's health and there is every indication that the government will defray the entire expense. Dr Arain told Daily Times that he would do his best to get the bill discounted to the extent that he can. Faraz was admitted to the Intensive Care Unit of the Chicago hospital on July 7 and he has remained there since. Stable but delicate: Daily Times learnt on Thursday night that Faraz's condition remains stable but delicate. He has shown some improvement in the last few days but because of the massive stroke that he suffered, his right side continues to exhibit profound weakness. He needs physical assistance if he is to be moved into a chair. He remains on dialysis three times a week. He is fed through a tube and while it is hoped that he may eventually be able to eat and swallow unassisted, the time-frame is uncertain. He cannot speak but it is possible that he may recover some or perhaps most of that function. It is not clear if he recognises people. However, he has given the distinct impression off and on that he may. His blood pressure is normal and his heart is in good condition. The next few months are crucial. People have been known to make dramatic recoveries from strokes and even regained their ability to speak and move. However, when that might happen in Faraz's case, no one can say, but everyone, including his doctors and his family, is hoping for the best.
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Post by saeed on Aug 3, 2008 5:50:31 GMT 5
Latest from Chicago today Thanks to ifti Naseem! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Friends, I had lunch with Shibli who is son of Faraz sahib , a very fine gentleman, talked about Faraz sahib itinerary. Faraz Sahib will be leaving tomorrow (Sunday)10 AM by a private plane to Toronto Canada. From there he will take PIA non stop to Islamabad. His son Shibli will be accompaning him along with a male nurse. Even in this situation , hopital did not trust Faraz sahib with a female nurse(just kidding). Thanks to Pakistani government to take care of Faraz sahib. Special thanks to Asad to take care of Shible more than i could. Dr. Murtaza Arain is a man of his words and community's true leader. Dr. Aman Rashid Consul General of Pakistan and Hussain Haqqani Ambassador of Pakistan realy realy stood up for Faraz sahib. Prime Minister of Pakistan Yousuf Raza Gilani Came up with every thing he could. Thanks a lot. I shall send you final e mail about Faraz sahib tomorrow after he leaves for Pakistan. Take care of yourself. Aapka, Ifti Nasim Radio Talk Show Host WSBC 1240 AM-WCJF 1470 AM Sunday 9PM- 11PM www.sargamradio.us6033 North Sheridan Road Suite 40-J Chicago Illlinois 60660 Ph: 773-271-6400 Fax: 773-271-4024 Cell: 773-407-3330
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Post by saeed on Aug 2, 2008 15:18:20 GMT 5
Razi bhai you are welcome! saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 2, 2008 15:16:51 GMT 5
Aatif & Razi bhai khub tasveer hai... lekin ise dekhkar eik sawal forun zehn mein aaya ke aap tenoN hazraat kis ghareeb ko itne jalal se dekh rahey hain...)
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Post by saeed on Aug 2, 2008 15:11:18 GMT 5
wassay rani agar mehboob ka istaara hay tu yuhan "naar" ka lafz munasib hay.kunkeh naar alhar dosheeza or aag donoo manoon main istamaal hota hay.neez naar yani aag ka sehra say bhi khass taelq hay.n.m,rashid ki nazm{dil meray sahra nawerd e peer dil)main rashid nay aag kay istaerati undaaz ko khoob istamaaal kia hay. Suhail saheb, AaPKi bat baja hai ke sehra ke sath rani ke bajaye nar ziadeh munasib lagta.... lekin meine "Rohi" ke sath rani istemaal kiya hai. Rohi sehra mein woh jageh jahan zindagi mumkin ho...Yahan Rani mehboob ke ilawa zindagi ka iste-ara bhi hai. ...aur phir Rohi aur rani ka soti tassur bhi. regards, saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 2, 2008 14:46:50 GMT 5
ager mushairoon ya amoomi shairy jo ho rahi kay lehaz say daikhain tu achi nazm hay.janay main ya unjanay main aap nay kaii mahawray banday hain jin say nazm ki zaban achi ho gaii hay.aik miray dheela hay aata jata her mosam kerta hay teri batain sursi chand,doha chand or mutaqarib ka milap hain.ager koii baqaida iltazam hota tu lajab nazm hoti.neez sifati tukroon ka bhii izafa chahey.yeh main iss liey keh raha hoon ki mujaj bari shairy pasand hay.yeh nazm acha hi ager aap kosish karain tu bari bhii ho sakti hay. Prof saheb Buhut nawazish ke aapney meri nazm ko pRha aur apni qeemti raye se nawaza. aapney jo points uthaye hain main zroor un pe ghaur karonga. mujehy dili khushi hui hai aapki masbat tanqueed paRh ker! aayenda bhi apni raye se nawaztey rehye ga. mashkoor Saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 2, 2008 14:37:22 GMT 5
[size=4]AOA Saeed bhai bohat khobsorat mahakti hoi nazm qalb e chaman se dad ke bohat se phool ap ke husne klam ki nazr waslam Mukhlis ramishjaan [/size][/color][/quote] Buhut nawazish Ramish bhai. Saeed
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Post by saeed on Aug 2, 2008 14:35:35 GMT 5
ager aap image main paste karian tu main ghor say perhoon ga.roman main likhi hu shairy ho ya photo copy mera zooq perhnay ki ijazat naheen dayta.shairy latafat hay mushaqat naheen. Suhai saheb yeh lejiye.....
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