zaamin
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by zaamin on Feb 21, 2008 1:34:54 GMT 5
suuraj ki parchhayii nahiiN hotii- DhoonDhata hoon maiN zehn apne ki raatoN meN yaad kisii ka aks wujood kisi roshanii ki kiran ka andheron ke bar-aks;
lekin kab hota hai sumel andhere aur roshani ka zulmat-o-jalaalat ka;
kyon hai phir ke is raah-e-be-sabaat par chalata hooN main DhoonDhata tujhe; tu- jo ki suuraj hai aur kahaaN hotii hai parchhaayii suuraj ki
zaamin
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 21, 2008 23:12:30 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat nazm Zaamin sahib
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Feb 23, 2008 0:35:36 GMT 5
waah bahut hi ummda nazm kahi hai aap ne zaamin ji. bahut pasand aayii.daad haazir hai. shukriya,sunita di khush rahen zaamin
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zaamin
ibtidaai rukn
Posts: 69
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Post by zaamin on Feb 23, 2008 0:36:21 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat nazm Zaamin sahib paziiraayii ke liye mamnoon hoon,rafi saahib zaamin
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Post by kanwal on Mar 14, 2008 2:47:14 GMT 5
bohat khoob, .... Aik achi nazM par daad ke phooL ,...
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Post by waqaar on Mar 27, 2008 19:21:06 GMT 5
vaah vaah Zaamin SaaHeb! bahut hi uMdah khaYaal. daad qubool kee jiYay.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 1, 2008 13:32:59 GMT 5
aik khoobsoorat khyaal hy aap ki nazm main zaamin sahib daad qabool kijiy thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 17:44:34 GMT 5
Kia nazm hai?
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