simran
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Post by simran on Feb 18, 2008 17:54:36 GMT 5
kayi roz se kuch likha nahin socha pooraana hi post kar diya jaaye. Woh mujhe hausla to khoob dete haiN LafzoN ke zawiye meiN Qaid kar lete haiN Sirf tum mujhe aur main tumhei socha karooN Sapna dikha ke aksar hi bhoolte haiN Qaid hooN tere mohabat ke serab mein Tere intzaar meiN aansoo chupke chupke peete hain HaathoN ki tehreereiN badalne lagi haiN Bhoole nahiN tumh yeh wo kehte haiN Jisse mangne meiN khuda se zamane lage Wo humari haalat pe hanste haiN Uske aane se fiza moatar ho jati hai Jab taswur meiN wo aate jate rehte haiN Ab naseem subah ka mujhe intza hai simran ke bam o dar sanwarte haiN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 18, 2008 23:25:45 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhhh
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 7, 2008 8:59:15 GMT 5
simranji aap ki ghazal parhi aap boht muddat baad sukhanwar main nazar aain aap ki yeh ghazal behr main nahi hay agar aap baa qaaidgi say forum main aati rahain to in khaamion par qaaboo paa sakti hain thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 8, 2008 0:51:30 GMT 5
Simran Ji achchi kaavish hai. Issi tarah koshish jaari rakhaiN.
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simran
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Post by simran on Apr 27, 2008 19:14:51 GMT 5
simran ji ek arse baad aap se mukhatib ho rahi hun, aap hain kahan aaj kal? jab se yeh bazm shuru huii aap ne sirf ek hi ghazal post ki thi aur ab phir meri tarah aap ne bhi pooraani ghazal post kar di lekin koii baat nahin, ghazal achhi ho to baar baar padne ka man hota hai. aap ki yeh ghazal jab pehli baar padi thi tab bhi pasand aayi thi aur ab bhi bahut pasand aayi.takneeqi taur par dekhen to nazr-e-sani ki zaroorat hai. meri aur se aap ke in khayaon par dheron daad haazir haiN.khush rahen. shukariya sunita ji, main hun to idhar hi bas zaraa masroofiyat ne aan ghera hai.behr mein likhane ki koshish to rehti hi hai, lekin phir se dekh lungi.
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simran
ibtidaai rukn
Posts: 14
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Post by simran on Apr 27, 2008 19:15:12 GMT 5
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simran
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Post by simran on Apr 27, 2008 19:16:47 GMT 5
simranji aap ki ghazal parhi aap boht muddat baad sukhanwar main nazar aain aap ki yeh ghazal behr main nahi hay agar aap baa qaaidgi say forum main aati rahain to in khaamion par qaaboo paa sakti hain thanx razi Razi ji bahut bahut shukariya jo aap ne waqt nikaal kar meri adna si koshish par kuch kaha.main koshish karungi ki bazm main bakaaydagi se aa sakun.
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simran
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Post by simran on Apr 27, 2008 19:17:38 GMT 5
Simran Ji achchi kaavish hai. Issi tarah koshish jaari rakhaiN. Atif sahab pasandagi ka shukariya.koshish zaari hai.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 28, 2008 18:57:33 GMT 5
U R welcome, buss yeh zehn maiN rakhaiN: - Naami koi baGhair mushaqqat nahiN huwa So baar jab aqeeq kataa tab nageeN huwa
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