Post by Aqeel Malik on Feb 15, 2008 16:04:24 GMT 5
Akhtar Raza Saleemi ki kitaab IRTIFAA shaya hoe jis par muktalif shuara nay apni ara de hein chand aik darj heiN
Dr Wazir Agha
akhtar ko ghazal kay maidan mein aey hoey zayada arsa nahi hoa magar wo ghazal kay lateef maqamaat ko mas karny par qadir hay
Dr Khursheed Rizvi
saleemi ki ghazal kay taiwar gawah hein ke us ka janoon sadiq hay wo gard e rah say sitaray takhleeq karnay par qadir hay
shehzaad ahmed
jis zaweay say saleemi nay ghazal kahi hay wo us ka apna andaz hay ye yaqeen say nahi keh sakty ko us nay daokhny kay leay darwazy ka kon sa rozan istemaal kia hay ya door been ki ultitaraf say daikha hay manzar manoos hay magar daikhnay wali ankh ajnabi hay yehi ajnabiat us ka takhleeqi amal bhi hay aur taza kari bhi.
Saleemi sahab ki kitab ki taqreeb e pazeerae Muqtadara qaumi zubaan mein hoe jis mein Dr tauseef tabasum ,Izhar ul Haq,Qamar raza shezad,aur deegar ahbab nay izhar e khial kia chand ashaar irtifa say
JahaN do lakht hota tha khial e yaar ka paikar
wahaN ham nay shikast e narawa ko bhi rawa rakha
isi leay tu jhikhakti hay hath atay hoey
dhanak nay daikh lia tha usay nahaty hoey
najany kon si galyoun mein chor aya hon
charagh jalty hoey,khaab muskuraty hoey
dil o nigah pe tari rahay fasooN uska
tumhara ho kay bhi mumkin hay mein rahoN uska
tujhy khabar nahi abhi is baat ki shayad
keh tayra ho tu gia hoN magar mein hon uska
dar e imkan wa honay say pehlay
khuda kia tha khuda honay say pehlay
ghubar e raigani mein ghira tha
mein tujh say ashna honay say pehlay
kahan say aaey hein ham log yeh nahi maloom
magar ye tay hay behr haal is jahan kay nahiN
saroN pe aan khari thi qabooliat ki ghari
hamary paas magar koe bhi dua nahi thi
ik aur jaam ata ho ke us ko rook sakoN
guzar raha hay koe lamha sarsarata hoa
be soey dasht e gumaN day raha hay izn e safar
kinar e khaab sitara sa jhilmilata hoa
miri nazar pe musalat hein bad numa manzar
idhar bhi chashm e karam, aey khudaey husn o jamal
ye manzarooN mein jo aey hay dilrubae si
kuch aur bhi hay yaqeenan waraey husn o jamal
ab khaab par uthaey bunyaad e do jahan
jo ban chuka kuch is kay ilawa banaey
laya hoN ap kay leay chandi ki baliaN
kanooN mein in ko dal kay sona banaeay
zaboor e wehm utari gae miray dil par
mujhy payambar e wehmo gumaN banaya gia
tu ziada yaad anay lag gia hay
is ka matlab hay tujhy bhool jaein
is kay ilawa koe aisi ghazal nahi jis ko parh kar koe ye kahay kay aust darjay ki ghazal hay saleemi ka fan IKHRIRAA say IRTIFAA tak musalsal irtiqa pazeer hay. mein apnay doston ko zaror kahoN ga ke is kitaab ka matalia zaroor kejeay ga
Dr Wazir Agha
akhtar ko ghazal kay maidan mein aey hoey zayada arsa nahi hoa magar wo ghazal kay lateef maqamaat ko mas karny par qadir hay
Dr Khursheed Rizvi
saleemi ki ghazal kay taiwar gawah hein ke us ka janoon sadiq hay wo gard e rah say sitaray takhleeq karnay par qadir hay
shehzaad ahmed
jis zaweay say saleemi nay ghazal kahi hay wo us ka apna andaz hay ye yaqeen say nahi keh sakty ko us nay daokhny kay leay darwazy ka kon sa rozan istemaal kia hay ya door been ki ultitaraf say daikha hay manzar manoos hay magar daikhnay wali ankh ajnabi hay yehi ajnabiat us ka takhleeqi amal bhi hay aur taza kari bhi.
Saleemi sahab ki kitab ki taqreeb e pazeerae Muqtadara qaumi zubaan mein hoe jis mein Dr tauseef tabasum ,Izhar ul Haq,Qamar raza shezad,aur deegar ahbab nay izhar e khial kia chand ashaar irtifa say
JahaN do lakht hota tha khial e yaar ka paikar
wahaN ham nay shikast e narawa ko bhi rawa rakha
isi leay tu jhikhakti hay hath atay hoey
dhanak nay daikh lia tha usay nahaty hoey
najany kon si galyoun mein chor aya hon
charagh jalty hoey,khaab muskuraty hoey
dil o nigah pe tari rahay fasooN uska
tumhara ho kay bhi mumkin hay mein rahoN uska
tujhy khabar nahi abhi is baat ki shayad
keh tayra ho tu gia hoN magar mein hon uska
dar e imkan wa honay say pehlay
khuda kia tha khuda honay say pehlay
ghubar e raigani mein ghira tha
mein tujh say ashna honay say pehlay
kahan say aaey hein ham log yeh nahi maloom
magar ye tay hay behr haal is jahan kay nahiN
saroN pe aan khari thi qabooliat ki ghari
hamary paas magar koe bhi dua nahi thi
ik aur jaam ata ho ke us ko rook sakoN
guzar raha hay koe lamha sarsarata hoa
be soey dasht e gumaN day raha hay izn e safar
kinar e khaab sitara sa jhilmilata hoa
miri nazar pe musalat hein bad numa manzar
idhar bhi chashm e karam, aey khudaey husn o jamal
ye manzarooN mein jo aey hay dilrubae si
kuch aur bhi hay yaqeenan waraey husn o jamal
ab khaab par uthaey bunyaad e do jahan
jo ban chuka kuch is kay ilawa banaey
laya hoN ap kay leay chandi ki baliaN
kanooN mein in ko dal kay sona banaeay
zaboor e wehm utari gae miray dil par
mujhy payambar e wehmo gumaN banaya gia
tu ziada yaad anay lag gia hay
is ka matlab hay tujhy bhool jaein
is kay ilawa koe aisi ghazal nahi jis ko parh kar koe ye kahay kay aust darjay ki ghazal hay saleemi ka fan IKHRIRAA say IRTIFAA tak musalsal irtiqa pazeer hay. mein apnay doston ko zaror kahoN ga ke is kitaab ka matalia zaroor kejeay ga