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Post by subhanoor on Sept 24, 2007 15:28:48 GMT 5
Assalam-o-alikum all of u! Kafi din k baad ayi hoon …shamil to hoti rahi hoon app ki mehfil mai lekin sirf as a reader…..pichlay dinoon zara likhnay mai bohat dushwari mehsoos kar rahi thi iss ley ….app sab ko app ki behad khubsurat kawishoon par daad dynay sy mehroom rahi hoon…..jis ka afsoos ajj bhi ho raha hai….bohat sy thread esy hain jin ko main nai pardhnay k bad bohat socha k uss par ye likhoon gi… esy likhoon gi…jesy my most speciall thread my BIRTH DAY thread on (6 AUG )….. lekin meri tabiyat nai mujhy ijazat na di aur dekhtay hi dekhtay wo pages change hotay rahye….abb inshahAllah waqt aur tabiyat k sath milta raha to bari bari app sab k pages back kar k reply …with dher sari daadddddddd app tak arsal karti rahoon gi…..ummeed karti hoon app meri mazrat ko kabool karain gy ….aur mujhy phir sy appni dher sari daoon k sath iss mehfil mai jaga dain gy…..
Meri iss kawish ko zaroor pardhiye ga…..aur appni ara sy nawaziye ga.
Na do tarteeb meray wajud ko tum dubara sy K jo chaho gy tum na ban paoon gi main phir sy
Kadmoon ki chaap ,lehjay ka andaz kuch alag tha uss ka Jo sunao gy abb tum na sun paoon gi main phir sy
Khalish diloon ki, duri nazroon ki door karnay k ley Jo muhabbat chahoo gy tum na dy paoon gi main phir sy
Bhary hajoom mai ya khamshi k sehar mai appny ley Jo mela lagoo gy tum shamil na ho paoon gi main phir sy
Rabtay bharda kar, diloon ko mila kar har aik sy yahan Jo wada karoo gy tum wada wafa kar na paoon gi main phir sy .
Shukriya! Sumaira
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 24, 2007 23:06:25 GMT 5
Sumera achi kawish qafia radeef aur behr kay takaluf say azaad magar baharhaal koshish to ki
khuda aap ko apnay hifz o amaan maiN rakhay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Sept 25, 2007 16:20:13 GMT 5
sumaira sahiba aap ko aaj apnay darmyaan daykh kar bohat khushi hui humn aap ki sehat aur salaamti k liay dua go hain khushi hui k aap sukhanwar k saath raabtay main rahin magar aap reply na kar sakin yeh majboori thee aap ko hum welcome kehtay hain aap ki ghazal main craft sy ziada khyaal ki ehmiat hay aap radeef aur qaafiay k baaray main agaahi haasil karain us k baad behr ki baat ho gi khoobsoorat khyaalat hain aap k thanx razi
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Post by subhanoor on Sept 25, 2007 19:55:31 GMT 5
shukriya rafi sb! meri adna si kawish ki hosala afzai k ley...umeed karti hoon k app meri hoslaafzai k sath sath islah bhi karain gy......ta k ainda main appko behtareen poetry paish kar sakoon sumaira
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Post by subhanoor on Sept 25, 2007 20:02:43 GMT 5
bohat shukriya razi bhai! app sab ki doain hi thin jin ki badaolat main app k darmiyan hoon.... meri adna si ghazal ko pasand karna k bhi aik bar shukriya karti hoon. razi bhai agar app bura na manaye to ...app sy poetry karnay k ley kuch tips mangna chahti hoon....jis sy main appni kawish ko behtar kar sakoon.....jesy app nai kaha radef kafiya...aur behr k baray mai..... meri poetry k baray mai main janti hoon k iss mai bohat kamiyan shamil hain ....jin ki islah app sy chahti hoon..... kuch ziyada nahi ......itni hi jitni app asani sy appnay masroof tareen waqt mai mujhy samjha sakain. example app meri hi ghazal ko kar saktay hain.....
bohat shukriya dua aur hosla dyny k ley sumaira
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 26, 2007 5:34:17 GMT 5
Kia KAWISH hai? Ta'ajjub, Achhamba, Herani, pareshani, fikr, andesha, ghum, ranj, alam, museebat, afsos, sorry, sadness, grief, andoh waghaira waghaira kay milay julay jazbat ka ba-yak waqt muzahira karana bohut nushkil hai. Daad na dai saknay ki Ma'zrat qabool kijiay!
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Post by miim miim mughal on Sept 28, 2007 10:48:05 GMT 5
MuHtarma'h sumaira SaaHia'
aadaab-o-slaam-e-masnoon
tajdiid-e-Khush aamdiid kay ba'Ad yeh 'keh naachiiz kii jaanib say itnii ach'hii kaushih par muaarakbaad Qabool kiiijiay. diigar Saahibaan nay jau baataiN bataa'ii haiN inhiaN dorah maiN baaNdh kar rakhiay. aa'inda' vaqtauN maiN kaam aa'aiNgii.
mashq jaarii rakhi'ay manzil aap par jald vaaZe'H hau jaa'ygii.
duaa gau.
miim miim mughal
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Post by HASIB RANA on Sept 30, 2007 22:40:54 GMT 5
Assalam-o-alikum all of u! Kafi din k baad ayi hoon …shamil to hoti rahi hoon app ki mehfil mai lekin sirf as a reader…..pichlay dinoon zara likhnay mai bohat dushwari mehsoos kar rahi thi iss ley ….app sab ko app ki behad khubsurat kawishoon par daad dynay sy mehroom rahi hoon…..jis ka afsoos ajj bhi ho raha hai….bohat sy thread esy hain jin ko main nai pardhnay k bad bohat socha k uss par ye likhoon gi… esy likhoon gi…jesy my most speciall thread my BIRTH DAY thread on (6 AUG )….. lekin meri tabiyat nai mujhy ijazat na di aur dekhtay hi dekhtay wo pages change hotay rahye….abb inshahAllah waqt aur tabiyat k sath milta raha to bari bari app sab k pages back kar k reply …with dher sari daadddddddd app tak arsal karti rahoon gi…..ummeed karti hoon app meri mazrat ko kabool karain gy ….aur mujhy phir sy appni dher sari daoon k sath iss mehfil mai jaga dain gy…..
Meri iss kawish ko zaroor pardhiye ga…..aur appni ara sy nawaziye ga.
Na do tarteeb meray wajud ko tum dubara sy K jo chaho gy tum na ban paoon gi main phir sy
Kadmoon ki chaap ,lehjay ka andaz kuch alag tha uss ka Jo sunao gy abb tum na sun paoon gi main phir sy
Khalish diloon ki, duri nazroon ki door karnay k ley Jo muhabbat chahoo gy tum na dy paoon gi main phir sy
Bhary hajoom mai ya khamshi k sehar mai appny ley Jo mela lagoo gy tum shamil na ho paoon gi main phir sy
Rabtay bharda kar, diloon ko mila kar har aik sy yahan Jo wada karoo gy tum wada wafa kar na paoon gi main phir sy .
Shukriya! Sumaira NICE 1 . KEEP SHEARING .. ALL THE BEST
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 2, 2007 14:02:31 GMT 5
bohat shukriya razi bhai! app sab ki doain hi thin jin ki badaolat main app k darmiyan hoon.... meri adna si ghazal ko pasand karna k bhi aik bar shukriya karti hoon. razi bhai agar app bura na manaye to ...app sy poetry karnay k ley kuch tips mangna chahti hoon....jis sy main appni kawish ko behtar kar sakoon.....jesy app nai kaha radef kafiya...aur behr k baray mai..... meri poetry k baray mai main janti hoon k iss mai bohat kamiyan shamil hain ....jin ki islah app sy chahti hoon..... kuch ziyada nahi ......itni hi jitni app asani sy appnay masroof tareen waqt mai mujhy samjha sakain. example app meri hi ghazal ko kar saktay hain..... bohat shukriya dua aur hosla dyny k ley sumaira aap jo bhi poochna chaahain mujh sy pooch sakti hain thanx razi
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Post by kanwal on Dec 2, 2007 2:02:54 GMT 5
Sumaira jee ,... Khushi hui k aapki sehat meiN behtari aayee, Dua hai k Khuda wand e kareem aapko mukamal sehat yaab farmaaye,.... Iss khubsoorat si ghazl pe dheroN daad ke guL aapki khubsoorat si bisaartoN ki nazR ,....
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Post by uzair143 on May 11, 2008 16:59:32 GMT 5
as salam alikum aaj kafi erse k bad yaha aena houa bout bout kkhoobsurat likha hai app ne uzair
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