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Post by masagar on Aug 13, 2007 0:24:00 GMT 5
AIK GHAZAL BRAE ISLLAH O TANQEED HAZIR HEY, UMEED KRTA HUN K AHLE SUKHAN MERI REHNMAI FARMAYEN GE.
le gay loot k zardar jo khalyanon ko kia mile ga bhala mahnat kashon dehkanon ko
tiragi hade nazar tk he yahan pheli hoi rah phir kese mile gi bhala insanon ko
mujh se aese na sare rah mila kr janan der kia lagti he bante huve afsanun ko
larkharate na tire rind ager pi k sharab shan milti kahan saki tire mekhanon ko
dard se dill na ager aashna hote sagar kese pehchanta koi yahan diwanon ko
urdu attachment bhi shamile arz he.
( M A SAGAR )
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Post by masagar on Aug 14, 2007 0:13:48 GMT 5
mera khayal hey k kisi ne ise para hi nahin plz mujhe aap ki rae ka betabi se intazar he.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 14, 2007 0:27:45 GMT 5
sagar sahib behtreen ghazal hay
tiragi hade nazar tk he yahan pheli hoi rah phir kese mile gi bhala insanon ko
mujh se aese na sare rah mila kr janan der kia lagti he bante huve afsanun ko
yeh donooN ash,aar achay lagay is ghazal main tasheeh ki gunjaish nazar hi nahi aati
sari ghazal behtareen hay
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Post by masagar on Aug 14, 2007 23:43:56 GMT 5
rAFI SAHIB AAP KA BAHOT BAHOT SHUKRIA AAP KI HOSLA AFZAI MUJH JESE NAE SHAIR K LIE MISHALERAH SABIT HO GI, AIK BAR PHIR SHUKRIA BRAE PASANDIDAGI.
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Post by kanwal on Sept 11, 2007 23:33:27 GMT 5
aik umdaa, khubsoorat si ghazl aap ne kahi sagar jee ,... jis ke liye dil ke gulshan se dhero daad ke phooL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by masagar on Sept 22, 2007 23:32:29 GMT 5
Kanwal g aap ka bahot bahot shukria barae hosla afzai.
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Post by subhanoor on Sept 24, 2007 17:54:43 GMT 5
Bohat khoob sagar sb Meri taraf sy dher sari daad kabool kijiye. Janay kyun har rasta mera aik hi simat ko jata hai Jesy zindagi nai manzil ka wada kar liya ho mujh sy
Sagar sb dil chota nahi kartay … life mai bohat si cheeezain …..bohat sara time mangti hain…..aur kabhi kabhi wo hum sy liya ga waqt humary ley jany kitni khushiyan aur kitni khubsurat yaadain simat kar la raha hota hai….. iss baat ka ehsaas humain waqt k khatam honay k baad hi hota hai…..
Umeed karti hoon app meri iss choti si aur mufeed baat ko yaad rakheen gy aur bilkull bhi mind nahi karain gy….as a forum member accept karain gy. Sumaira ………
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Post by masagar on Oct 5, 2007 23:08:07 GMT 5
Sumera g bahot shukria, men kabhi mind nahin krta shayad mind hey hi nahin.... thnx a lot.
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Post by hooriya on Nov 12, 2007 10:22:53 GMT 5
aapka kalaam achha laga daad haazir hai janab.
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