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Post by khalid on Feb 16, 2008 23:49:46 GMT 5
amjad islaam amjad ki zameen meiN aik mashvara!
abhi kuch din lageN gey
javaani meiN haseeN lamhaat ko yakser bhulaaney meiN naya kuch yaad rakhney aur puraana bhool jaane meiN kisi ki yaad ko dil sey khurachney aur dil e zakhmi bachaaney meiN abhi kuch din lageN gey
na ghebraao, javaani meiN ye sab hota hai jis per bas nahiN chalta ye wo mausam hai bersaatoN meiN jis ki dil machalta hai na bujhta hai, na jalta hai na ley ye chain seeney meiN na ye seene sey baaher hi nikalta hai
yehi khilvaaR jaari hai zamaaney sey yeh aatish jab bhaRakti hai nahiN bujhti bujhaane sey lagaaey waqt hi is aag ko aur waqt hi isko bujhaata hai koii tadbeer hai be kaar is dam ishq ka tareekh daN ham ko bataata hai
hai meira mashvara met tool do murda fasaaney ko meri maano, haNsaao met zamaaney ko!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 17, 2008 0:10:05 GMT 5
wahhhhhh
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Post by Atif Mirza on Feb 17, 2008 8:35:15 GMT 5
Kia baat hai! Khalid Sahib aap ki. Magar wazan gaR-baR hai iss maiN, yeh kuch naSri nazm ki si soorat bunn gayee hai.
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Post by khalid on Feb 19, 2008 6:17:08 GMT 5
Kia baat hai! Khalid Sahib aap ki. Magar wazan gaR-baR hai iss maiN, yeh kuch naSri nazm ki si soorat bunn gayee hai. bhaii main neyeh nazm 3 baras pehley kahi thi. us waqt meira wazn 30 pound kam tha! ;D
daad k liye mamnoon! khaalid!
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Post by Tanweer on Feb 19, 2008 12:08:13 GMT 5
Khalid Mahmood Sahib!
Bohat khoobsurat nazm inayat ki aapnay. Daad qabool kejiey.
Tanwer
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Post by HASIB RANA on Feb 19, 2008 13:26:30 GMT 5
amjad islaam amjad ki zameen meiN aik mashvara!abhi kuch din lageN gey
javaani meiN haseeN lamhaat ko yakser bhulaaney meiN naya kuch yaad rakhney aur puraana bhool jaane meiN kisi ki yaad ko dil sey khurachney aur dil e zakhmi bachaaney meiN abhi kuch din lageN gey
na ghebraao, javaani meiN ye sab hota hai jis per bas nahiN chalta ye wo mausam hai bersaatoN meiN jis ki dil machalta hai na bujhta hai, na jalta hai na ley ye chain seeney meiN na ye seene sey baaher hi nikalta hai
yehi khilvaaR jaari hai zamaaney sey yeh aatish jab bhaRakti hai nahiN bujhti bujhaane sey lagaaey waqt hi is aag ko aur waqt hi isko bujhaata hai koii tadbeer hai be kaar is dam ishq ka tareekh daN ham ko bataata hai
hai meira mashvara met tool do murda fasaaney ko meri maano, haNsaao met zamaaney ko!
NICE POETRY ................. DAAD QABOOL KEJEY ............. BE HAPPY
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Post by khalid on Feb 19, 2008 19:37:56 GMT 5
Khalid Mahmood Sahib! Bohat khoobsurat nazm inayat ki aapnay. Daad qabool kejiey. Tanwer zerra navaazi aur hosla afzaii ke liye aapka mamnoon hooN tanveer sb!
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Post by khalid on Feb 19, 2008 19:39:26 GMT 5
amjad islaam amjad ki zameen meiN aik mashvara!abhi kuch din lageN gey
javaani meiN haseeN lamhaat ko yakser bhulaaney meiN naya kuch yaad rakhney aur puraana bhool jaane meiN kisi ki yaad ko dil sey khurachney aur dil e zakhmi bachaaney meiN abhi kuch din lageN gey
na ghebraao, javaani meiN ye sab hota hai jis per bas nahiN chalta ye wo mausam hai bersaatoN meiN jis ki dil machalta hai na bujhta hai, na jalta hai na ley ye chain seeney meiN na ye seene sey baaher hi nikalta hai
yehi khilvaaR jaari hai zamaaney sey yeh aatish jab bhaRakti hai nahiN bujhti bujhaane sey lagaaey waqt hi is aag ko aur waqt hi isko bujhaata hai koii tadbeer hai be kaar is dam ishq ka tareekh daN ham ko bataata hai
hai meira mashvara met tool do murda fasaaney ko meri maano, haNsaao met zamaaney ko!
NICE POETRY ................. DAAD QABOOL KEJEY ............. BE HAPPY
[/COLOR][/SIZE][/quote] shukriya raana sb! khush rahye aap bhi! :)
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Post by khalid on Feb 22, 2008 8:53:44 GMT 5
bahut khoob nazm bhi kehte hain aur apni pooraani collection mein se post karne ki himmat bhi.bahut kam hi koii yeh kaam karega ki apni bina behr ki pooraani ghazal ya nazm post kare.sab yeh hi show karte hain ki vo to kafii arse se achhi ghazal keh lete hain. [/quote ji haN! logoN ka bas chaley woh yehi keh deN ke unhoN ne paida hotey hi roney ki jagah ghazal saraii fermaii thi. yuN bhi maiN apne aap ko shaair nahiN maanta. ye to sirf dil ki bhaRaas nikaalne ka zerya hai meirey kiye
aapki pasandeedgee ka shukriya!
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Post by waqaar on Feb 23, 2008 0:04:55 GMT 5
khaalid SaaHeb,
hai meira mashvara met tool do murda fasaaney ko meri maano, haNsaao met zamaaney ko!
vaah! kYa uMdah naZ^m kahii hay aapnay. us naZ^m kii zameen maiN jo mujh~ay bahut pasand rahii hay. dilii daad qubool kee jiYay!
waQaar:)
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Post by khalid on Feb 23, 2008 10:59:37 GMT 5
khaalid SaaHeb, hai meira mashvara met tool do murda fasaaney ko meri maano, haNsaao met zamaaney ko! vaah! kYa uMdah naZ^m kahii hay aapnay. us naZ^m kii zameen maiN jo mujh~ay bahut pasand rahii hay. dilii daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar:) shukriya waQaar! waqaii zameen khoob hai! iskey liye amjad sb ko ful marks!
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Post by HASIB RANA on Feb 23, 2008 19:22:07 GMT 5
NICE POETRY ................. DAAD QABOOL KEJEY ............. BE HAPPY
[/COLOR][/SIZE][/quote] shukriya raana sb! khush rahye aap bhi! :)[/quote]
U WEL COME DEAR ....
MAY ALLAH BLESS U
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