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Post by khalid on Jan 3, 2008 7:47:47 GMT 5
iss taaza tareen ghazal kee tehreek ke liye maiN aatif sb aur unki taaza ghazal ka intehaii mamnoon hooN! unki soch ne meira bhi raasta khol diya. aap bhi mulaaheza fermaiiye........jahaN pe aaj juda hai jahaan maiN bhi tha kahbi to mehfil e jaanaN ki jaan maiN bhi tha
ye theek hai k naii simt tu ne dee thee mujhey tu nakhuda tha ager, baadbaan maiN bhi tha
muqad'daroN ko shab o roz kosney waalo rah e naseeb pe ooNcha makaan maiN bhi tha
dabeez abr ko chatney se rok deitee rahiiN wo jin zameenoN pe ik aasmaan maiN bhi tha
kisi habeeb sey izhaar e ishq ki maanind kabhi na khul k hua jo bayaan maiN bhi tha
zar o waqaar ki wuq'at na thi meirey nazdeek magar dikhaavey ki ik aan baan maiN bhi tha
maiN aik rooh tha, mujhko badan ney maar diya baeed e qeid e makaan o zamaan maiN bhi tha
meirey wujood ki thandak maiN tamtaraaq nahiN haqeer ter tha, magar saaebaan maiN bhi tha jo ehd shikni maiN us sey bhi teiz ter ho ga ik us key zehn meiN aisa gumaan maiN bhi tha
meiree panaah maiN mujh per thee teer andaazi kuch is qimaash ki ooNchi machaan maiN bhi tha
jo zindgee meiN faqat aik baar kaam aaey bagheir teer saja wo kamaan maiN bhi tha
khurach khurach ke mujhey choR ker to met jaao wafa ke ehd ka mubham nishaan maiN bhi tha
bigaaR paaey gee peeri na kuch tera khaalid rahey ye vird e zabaN ger,' javaan maiN bhi tha'
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 3, 2008 9:24:50 GMT 5
iss taaza tareen ghazal kee tehreek ke liye maiN aatif sb aur unki taaza ghazal ka intehaii mamnoon hooN! unki soch ne meira bhi raasta khol diya. aap bhi mulaaheza fermaiiye........jahaN pe aaj juda hai jahaan maiN bhi tha kahbi to mehfil e jaanaN ki jaan maiN bhi tha
muqad'daroN ko shab o roz kosne waalo rah e naseeb pe ooNcha makaan maiN bhi tha
dabeez abr ko chatney se rok deitee rahiiN wo jin zameenoN pe ik aasmaan maiN bhi tha
zar o waqaar ki wuq'at na thi meirey nazdeek magar dikhaavey ki ik aan baan maiN bhi tha
maiN aik rooh tha, mujhko badan ney maar diya baeed e qeid e makaan o zamaan maiN bhi tha
meirey wujood ki thandak maiN tamtaraaq nahiN haqeer ter tha, magar saaebaan maiN bhi tha jo ehd shikni maiN us sey bhi aagey jaaey ga ik us key zehn meiN aisa gumaan maiN bhi tha
meiree panaah maiN mujh per thee teer andaazi kuch is qimaash ki ooNchi machaan maiN bhi tha
jo zindgee meiN faqat aik baar kaam aaey bagheir teer saja wo kamaan maiN bhi tha
khurach khurach ke mujhey choR ker to met jaao wafa ke daur ka mubham nishaan maiN bhi tha
bigaaR paaey gee peeri na kuch tera khaalid rahey ye vird e zabaN ger,' javaan maiN bhi tha' Bohat khoob Khalid sahib isi tarah dostooN ko aik dosray say tehreek milti hay aik matla haazir hay halqa e ahbab maiN ik daastaaN ban,nay kay ba,ad ham zameeN par aa ga,ay haiN aasmaaN ban,nay kay ba,ad
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Post by khalid on Jan 3, 2008 18:54:57 GMT 5
iss taaza tareen ghazal kee tehreek ke liye maiN aatif sb aur unki taaza ghazal ka intehaii mamnoon hooN! unki soch ne meira bhi raasta khol diya. aap bhi mulaaheza fermaiiye........jahaN pe aaj juda hai jahaan maiN bhi tha kahbi to mehfil e jaanaN ki jaan maiN bhi tha
muqad'daroN ko shab o roz kosne waalo rah e naseeb pe ooNcha makaan maiN bhi tha
dabeez abr ko chatney se rok deitee rahiiN wo jin zameenoN pe ik aasmaan maiN bhi tha
zar o waqaar ki wuq'at na thi meirey nazdeek magar dikhaavey ki ik aan baan maiN bhi tha
maiN aik rooh tha, mujhko badan ney maar diya baeed e qeid e makaan o zamaan maiN bhi tha
meirey wujood ki thandak maiN tamtaraaq nahiN haqeer ter tha, magar saaebaan maiN bhi tha jo ehd shikni maiN us sey bhi aagey jaaey ga ik us key zehn meiN aisa gumaan maiN bhi tha
meiree panaah maiN mujh per thee teer andaazi kuch is qimaash ki ooNchi machaan maiN bhi tha
jo zindgee meiN faqat aik baar kaam aaey bagheir teer saja wo kamaan maiN bhi tha
khurach khurach ke mujhey choR ker to met jaao wafa ke daur ka mubham nishaan maiN bhi tha
bigaaR paaey gee peeri na kuch tera khaalid rahey ye vird e zabaN ger,' javaan maiN bhi tha' Bohat khoob Khalid sahib isi tarah dostooN ko aik dosray say tehreek milti hay aik matla haazir hay halqa e ahbab maiN ik daastaaN ban,nay kay ba,ad ham zameeN par aa ga,ay haiN aasmaaN ban,nay kay ba,ad shukriya rafi sb!
is ghazal ka radeef kyuNke apni hi taraf uNgli uthaata hai, is liye mujhe kaafi maza aaya ash'aar kehtey huey. aapka she'r bhi lajavaab hai.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 6, 2008 1:01:23 GMT 5
khalid sahib main aap ki poetry ka hamaysha sy motrif hoon aap ka andaz e bayan ,tanz aur barjastgi aap ki poetry ka husn hay mizaah kehnay walay amooman nakaam shair hotay hain magar aap ki ghazal jab bhi nazar sy guzri humain ehsaas hua k aap ka muaamla mukhtalif hy is ghazal k yeh do ashaar mujhay khaas taur par passand aay
ye theek hai k naii simt tu ne dee thee mujhey tu nakhuda tha ager, baadbaan maiN bhi tha
maiN aik rooh tha, mujhko badan ney maar diya baeed e qeid e makaan o zamaan maiN bhi tha
thanx razi-ud-din razi
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Post by khalid on Jan 6, 2008 8:39:48 GMT 5
khalid sahib main aap ki poetry ka hamaysha sy motrif hoon aap ka andaz e bayan ,tanz aur barjastgi aap ki poetry ka husn hay mizaah kehnay walay amooman nakaam shair hotay hain magar aap ki ghazal jab bhi nazar sy guzri humain ehsaas hua k aap ka muaamla mukhtalif hy is ghazal k yeh do ashaar mujhay khaas taur par passand aay ye theek hai k naii simt tu ne dee thee mujhey tu nakhuda tha ager, baadbaan maiN bhi tha maiN aik rooh tha, mujhko badan ney maar diya baeed e qeid e makaan o zamaan maiN bhi tha thanx razi-ud-din razi mohtaram aapka intahaii mamnoon hooN k aap ne hosla afzaii fermaii! meiree shaaeri ki umr go itni zyaada nahiN lekin shayad talkhi e ayyaam ne tajrebaat ko shaaeri meiN samoney ka kuch huner itnee taakheer se, aur is umr maiN bhi bakhsh diya hai! is haqeeqat ko tasleem ker leiney maiN(k shayad maiN waqaii kuch mutassir kerney k qaabil hooN) aap jaisey dostoN ka baRa haath hai. allah miaN aapko khush rakeN!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 6, 2008 20:14:43 GMT 5
Masha Allah! Aap ki Hazir-ul-Kalami nay bil aakhir aap ko jhanjoR kar aik nihayat umda aur murassa ghazal irshad karadi. Mujhay fakhr hai keh maiN adna sa insaan bhi aakhir kisi ka muharrik bana. Khushi iss baat ki hai keh meri ghazal kay baad aik bahut piyari ghazal paRhnay ko mili. Jazak Allah
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Post by khalid on Jan 7, 2008 20:33:02 GMT 5
Masha Allah! Aap ki Hazir-ul-Kalami nay bil aakhir aap ko jhanjoR kar aik nihayat umda aur murassa ghazal irshad karadi. Mujhay fakhr hai keh maiN adna sa insaan bhi aakhir kisi ka muharrik bana. Khushi iss baat ki hai keh meri ghazal kay baad aik bahut piyari ghazal paRhnay ko mili. Jazak Allah janaab aapki ghazal k radeef ne meiree haazir ul kalaami (aapke ba qaul) ko jaisey ''jump start'' ker diya! shaairi ki dunya maiN shayad hi koii aisa mozu raha ho jis per mukhtalif advaar maiN seNkRoN mertaba tab'aa aazmaii na huii ho gee. isi tarah aapke radeef ne bhi is mozu per mujhey bhi kuch kehne per dafatan jaisey uksa diya ho.
aapki daad o tehseen k liye intehaii mamnoon hooN!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 8, 2008 17:24:49 GMT 5
janaab aapki ghazal k radeef ne meiree haazir ul kalaami (aapke ba qaul) ko jaisey ''jump start'' ker diya! shaairi ki dunya maiN shayad hi koii aisa mozu raha ho jis per mukhtalif advaar maiN seNkRoN mertaba tab'aa aazmaii na huii ho gee. isi tarah aapke radeef ne bhi is mozu per mujhey bhi kuch kehne per dafatan jaisey uksa diya ho.
aapki daad o tehseen k liye intehaii mamnoon hooN!
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