sahil
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by sahil on Dec 9, 2008 15:44:38 GMT 5
Humare samne/Sadion ki Raakh pri he/Oor hum is raakh main/Ous kl ko tatolte hen/Jo aik Aihd tk/Hamare samne pra/Sulgta hi raha..................Jamshaid Sahil.
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Dec 10, 2008 23:32:00 GMT 5
Boht Khoob nazm hai Jamshaid Sahib.
Boht si DaaD hazir hai.
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neha
rukn
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Post by neha on Dec 11, 2008 18:14:32 GMT 5
Bohut khoob Sahil sahab...bht acchi nazm hai aur khayal bhi khoob hai..bas zara isay nazm ki shakal main agar kardain tou i think is nazm ki khubsurti main izafa hojaye ga aur padhnay main bhi asani rahay gi..thanx 4 sharing such a nice nazm.
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sahil
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by sahil on Dec 15, 2008 18:06:58 GMT 5
Me Nazm pasand krne walay tmam sukhanwaroon ka shukar guzaar hoon................... Jamshaid Sahil
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Post by Sukhanwar on Dec 24, 2008 13:18:00 GMT 5
khoobsoorat nazm hay jamshaid sahab razi
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