zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Sept 29, 2008 13:57:11 GMT 5
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Post by Tanweer on Sept 29, 2008 19:01:22 GMT 5
Zaki saheb!
achi lagi, aapki ehtejaji, aur dard bhari ghazal.
daad laey hain ham saath.
Faq't Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 29, 2008 19:18:54 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat Ghazal Zaki sahib daad qabool farmaiay
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zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 30, 2008 11:46:23 GMT 5
Arshad Saheb
aaj bas aap ka kalam hi parhey ja raha hun aur afsos ho raha hay ke aaj tak mehroom kaisey raha
bohat achey aur khayal angez ashaar aap ke dil ko chu jaaney waaley
is sher mein aap ney "kandha" likha hay jis sey wazan mein ( meri naqis raaey mein) kuch gerber ho rahi hay....aur waisey bhi merey khayal mein sahi lafz "kaandha" hay aur wo use karen tow wazan bhi sahi rahey ga
ye siraf meri naqis raaey hay....aur wazeh rahey ke mujhey funn-e shaeri ki abjad sey waqfiaat naheen hay.....is liye intezar rahey ga sukhanwar hazrat ki raaey ka..
meri janib sey bohat si daad hazir hay...qabool fermaaiye
Khaksar
Qamar Kon aaey ga meri laash ko kaandha dene teri shadi mein magar sara zamana ho ga
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zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Sept 30, 2008 14:52:50 GMT 5
Zaki saheb! achi lagi, aapki ehtejaji, aur dard bhari ghazal. daad laey hain ham saath. Faq't Tanweer Sada Khush Raheay......
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zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Sept 30, 2008 15:32:52 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat Ghazal Zaki sahib daad qabool farmaiay Bahut Shukria Rafi Sahib....... Sada Khush Raheay......
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zaki
sukhanshanas
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Post by zaki on Sept 30, 2008 15:37:30 GMT 5
Arshad Saheb aaj bas aap ka kalam hi parhey ja raha hun aur afsos ho raha hay ke aaj tak mehroom kaisey raha bohat achey aur khayal angez ashaar aap ke dil ko chu jaaney waaley is sher mein aap ney "kandha" likha hay jis sey wazan mein ( meri naqis raaey mein) kuch gerber ho rahi hay....aur waisey bhi merey khayal mein sahi lafz "kaandha" hay aur wo use karen tow wazan bhi sahi rahey ga ye siraf meri naqis raaey hay....aur wazeh rahey ke mujhey funn-e shaeri ki abjad sey waqfiaat naheen hay.....is liye intezar rahey ga sukhanwar hazrat ki raaey ka.. meri janib sey bohat si daad hazir hay...qabool fermaaiye Khaksar Qamar Kon aaey ga meri laash ko kaandha dene teri shadi mein magar sara zamana ho ga Bahut Shukria Qamar Sahib........ Sada Khush raheay......
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