maya
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Post by maya on May 26, 2007 11:35:49 GMT 5
"ANKHAIEN"
Main gar khamosh be ho jaoun Tu Ankhaien hansti rahti hain
Janay yea kaisi ankhaien hain Hanstay howay bhegee rahti hain
Mujay khud main tanha kar kay yea ik khwab sa Bunti rahti hain
Jo baat chupaati hun khud say Yea sab say kahti rahti hain jin rahon per hay Dhool bohat Yea Un per chalti rahti hain
Main tu thak ker so jaati hun Yee phir be jaagti rahti hain
Daman pholoun say bhar jay Yea khar be chunti rahti hain
Jaanay yea kaisai ankhain hain muj say be chupti rahti hain
(fatimah)
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 26, 2007 12:54:35 GMT 5
Sahi kaha Fatimah ji aankhaiN koi bhi raaz raaz nahi rehnay daeteeN
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 28, 2007 13:55:21 GMT 5
fatima khoobsoorat nazm hy aankhon k hawalay say aur un supnon k hawalay sy jp aankhain daykhna chaahti hain acha laga aap ka yeh khoobsoorat andaz rawan dawan nazm hy yueh aap ki thanx razi
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Post by azeezbelgaumi on May 28, 2007 18:42:44 GMT 5
Aankhou ki Khususiyat ka mushahida achcha hai...keep it up fathima saheba azeezbelgaumi
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Post by maya on May 28, 2007 21:51:02 GMT 5
Rafi Sahib,Razi Sahib Aur Azeez Sahib hemat afzai per ap sab ka bay had shukria . waslam fatimah
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Post by kanwal on May 30, 2007 1:03:16 GMT 5
Yeh aankheiN isi liye to nemat hai Khuda ki dear ,...
AankhoN ko apne lafzoN meiN khoob samoeya hai aapne ,...
umdagi aur nafaasat se ,...
iss nafees si poem ke liye dil ke gulshan se daad e guL
aapki nazR ,........
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Post by maya on Jun 2, 2007 10:09:56 GMT 5
thanx Aapa
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Post by farooqi on Jun 3, 2007 23:06:23 GMT 5
ummmmmm. bohut khub fatima g , bohut pasand aai ap ki nazam !
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 17:27:58 GMT 5
good...achha andaaz e bayaan hai aapka ...daad qubool kijiye..
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Post by maya on Jul 16, 2007 17:23:02 GMT 5
Faroqi Sahib aur Hooriya jee nazm pasand karnay ka bah had shukria
waslam
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