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ghazal
Jul 5, 2007 12:17:03 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Jul 5, 2007 12:17:03 GMT 5
Aao zakhmoN ki baat kerte haiN tum se apnoN Ki baat kerte haiN
maslehat bhi jinheN chupa na saki aise jazboNN ki baat kerte haiNN
teergi hai moheet sadyoNN per log lamhoN ki baat kerte haiNN
ek tamasha si ban gyi hai hayat sab hi ruttbon ki baat kerte haiNN
sab ko le jaayen sab ki manzil tak aise rastoN ki baat kerte haiNN
phir sahar ho gayee na neend aayii aap kwaboN ki baat kerte haiNN
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ghazal
Jul 5, 2007 22:53:39 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 5, 2007 22:53:39 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh Kia baat hay bohat khoob Neelofer sahiba daad qabool farmaiN Akhri shaer par apna aik shaer yaad aa gia
Saltanat Khaab ki sjatay kia neend apni grift maiN kab thee?
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ghazal
Jul 9, 2007 16:29:42 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Jul 9, 2007 16:29:42 GMT 5
Tabasum bhai aadaab! aap ki tareef o tanqqeed dono mere lie mash'Al e rah haiN. Aap kii tawajja ka behad shukria............
wassalam Neelofar
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ghazal
Sept 12, 2007 0:04:49 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on Sept 12, 2007 0:04:49 GMT 5
umdaaa jee ,...
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ghazal
Nov 17, 2008 23:02:32 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 17, 2008 23:02:32 GMT 5
neelofer ji bahut he kubsurat
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ghazal
Nov 18, 2008 0:34:19 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 18, 2008 0:34:19 GMT 5
aray waah itni achi ghazal aur hum nay itni takheer sy parhi laykin humain mehsoos hota hy k hum ny yeh ghazal parhi to usi roz thee is ko post karnay k baad koi error aaya hum ny woh bhi theek kia magar is par reply karna bhool gaay shaid neelofar sahiba daad qabool kijiay aur taakheer sy rply par maazrat bhi thanx razi
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zaki
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ghazal
Nov 18, 2008 15:59:42 GMT 5
Post by zaki on Nov 18, 2008 15:59:42 GMT 5
Bahut khoobsorat sharing Neelofar ji..... bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay... sada khush raheay....
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jooni
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ghazal
Nov 18, 2008 23:44:57 GMT 5
Post by jooni on Nov 18, 2008 23:44:57 GMT 5
Boht hi umda, Boht khoob. Daad qubool kijiye.
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ghazal
Nov 26, 2008 6:53:00 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on Nov 26, 2008 6:53:00 GMT 5
Mohtarma Neelofar Saheba! Aik umda aur jaandaar ghazal hai.
5th sher maiN shayad typo hai. Khair durusti kar kay "jaaye" ki bajaay agar aap "JaaieN" istemaal karaiN tau munasib ho ga.
Daad qabool kijiay.
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