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GHAZAL
Jul 6, 2007 3:02:27 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Jul 6, 2007 3:02:27 GMT 5
TanhayoN ka dard hai iss zindagi ke sath dukh mere sath sath haiN kis bndagi ke sath
meri zubaN pe taale haiN woh chup hai aadetan kaisa mazaq hai ye meri sadgi ke sathh
palkoN pe ashk ruk gyee manzar ye dekh kar hairan thii magan tha woh apni khshi ke sath
mohlat mili jo zeest se to bus yhi kiya maiN uss ko dekhhti rahi deewangi ke sath
aiisa hi ghup andhera hai apne naseeb ka kuch yaad gya mujhe teera shabi ke sath
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GHAZAL
Jul 6, 2007 8:24:29 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 6, 2007 8:24:29 GMT 5
Bohat achi ghazal Neelofar ji bas zra dosray misray
dukh mere sath sath haiN kis bndagi ke sath
par ghaur farma lejiay ga lafz Dukh poora talafuz nahi day raha aur aakhrii misray shaid typing mistake ka shekaar hu gia hay
kuch yaad gya mujhe teera shabi ke sath
kuch yaad aa gya mujhe teera shabi ke sath
ho ga shaid
Majmooi taur par Khoobsoorat ghazal daad qabool farmaiay
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GHAZAL
Jul 6, 2007 15:45:14 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 6, 2007 15:45:14 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba aap ki ghazal majmooi taur par achi lagi jin lafzon ki trar rafi sahib ny tawaja dilaai un par ghaur kar lijiay yeh shair mujhay bohatr pasand aaya thanx razi
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GHAZAL
Nov 5, 2008 17:26:12 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 5, 2008 17:26:12 GMT 5
BAHUT KHOOBSURAT GHAZAL HAY NEELOFER GEE
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