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Roshni
May 25, 2007 10:34:16 GMT 5
Post by maya on May 25, 2007 10:34:16 GMT 5
salam for all chalain aaj nay seray say agaaz kartay hain aur roshni ki baat say kartay hain waslam
Roshni
Mujay Roshni kay leya Taaq per dharay aik Diay ki lou chaheya, Us Muqadas teal say phot ti hoi Jo sharqi hay na garbi Aik noor ka haala, chahar janib madham madham roshni , phir partt dar partt roshni Jo Ankhaoun ki thandak banay Jis say Roh abaad ho uthay Jis gahri aur teaz roshni kay sab mutlashi hain uski chaka chond main tu... Ankhaien andhi ho jati hain mujay roshni kay leya taaq per dharay , aik diay ki lou chaheay
(fatimah)
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Roshni
May 25, 2007 13:26:41 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 25, 2007 13:26:41 GMT 5
salam for all chalain aaj nay seray say agaaz kartay hain aur roshni ki baat say kartay hain waslam RoshniMujay Roshni kay leya Taaq per dharay aik Diay ki lou chaheya, Us Muqadas teal say phot ti hoi Jo sharqi hay na garbi Aik noor ka haala, chahar janib madham madham roshni , phir partt dar partt roshni Jo Ankhaoun ki thandak banay Jis say Roh abaad ho uthay Jis gahri aur teaz roshni kay sab mutlashi hain uski chaka chond main tu... Ankhaien andhi ho jati hain mujay roshni kay leya taaq per dharay , aik diay ki lou chaheay (fatimah) Fatimah ji Khoobsoorat nazm daad qabool farmaiay
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maya
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Roshni
May 25, 2007 20:48:21 GMT 5
Post by maya on May 25, 2007 20:48:21 GMT 5
Rafi sahib hosla afzai ka bay had shukria. waslam
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Roshni
May 26, 2007 0:24:27 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on May 26, 2007 0:24:27 GMT 5
fatima ji aap ka andaz hamaysha hi chonka daynay wala hota hy is nazm main bhi roshni k laiy aap ny jo khaahish zaahir ki woh anokhi hy aap ko apnay matlab ki roshni chahiay yaani jaysi aap chaahti hain waysi yehi is nazm ka husn hay thanx razi
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Roshni
May 26, 2007 8:43:28 GMT 5
Post by maya on May 26, 2007 8:43:28 GMT 5
Razi Sahib hosla afzai ka bay had shukria waslam
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Roshni
May 30, 2007 1:54:39 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on May 30, 2007 1:54:39 GMT 5
Maya aapki poems aksar hi ghup andheroN meiN bhi roshni ki kiran dhoond leti haiN ,...
aapki poems meiN yaas ke baadloN meiN chhupi hui Aas hai jo aapki takhleeqaat ko khubsoorati bakhshti haiN ,...
Yunhi manziloN ki aur barhti raho Aur meri dua hai ke Khuda talaH aapka haami o nasir rahe ,.... Ameen .
Main to sirf chand daad e guL hi de sakti hooN so wohi iss roshan poem ke naaM ,.....
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Roshni
May 30, 2007 16:43:55 GMT 5
Post by maya on May 30, 2007 16:43:55 GMT 5
Yunhi manziloN ki aur barhti raho Aur meri dua hai ke Khuda talaH aapka haami o nasir rahe ,.... Ameen .
Apki Dua lanay kay leya he tu main likhti hun bohat shukria Aapa. waslam
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Roshni
Sept 25, 2007 0:19:47 GMT 5
Post by subhanoor on Sept 25, 2007 0:19:47 GMT 5
dheroon daad hazir hai keep it up
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Roshni
Sept 28, 2007 11:15:11 GMT 5
Post by maya on Sept 28, 2007 11:15:11 GMT 5
Subhanoor bohat Shukria aapka waslam Fatimah
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