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Post by maya on Oct 5, 2008 20:01:29 GMT 5
Zindgy ay Zindgy
Yea be hay zindgy Jo meri ragoun main hay doorti magr yea kea howa hay kay Rag e jaan main hay khamshi moot ki.. Aur us main khbi khbi har aik had ko toorti Yea Naw e baazgasht si Zindgy ay zindgy ....
Fatimah
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 5, 2008 22:22:06 GMT 5
wah fatimah zindagi ki haqeeqat ko samajhnay ki jo bhi koshish karta hy woh isi kism ki uljhan ka shikaar hota hy magar yeh bhi aik haqeeqat hy k jo uljhan ka shikaar hota hy usi ny sal main zindagi ka bhayd paaya hota hy aap ki nazmain hamaysha achi lagti hain thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 6, 2008 1:09:47 GMT 5
wahhhhhhh
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Post by ramishjaan on Oct 6, 2008 14:19:14 GMT 5
AOA maya jee bohat arse bad ap ka koi klam nazr se guzra aur guzra hi nahi balke bisarat ke raste seedha dil ki gehraio,n ko choo geya bohat khobsorat nazm bohat sari dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Oct 6, 2008 20:48:15 GMT 5
beautifull
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 6, 2008 23:13:01 GMT 5
AOA maya jee bohat arse bad ap ka koi klam nazr se guzra aur guzra hi nahi balke bisarat ke raste seedha dil ki gehraio,n ko choo geya bohat khobsorat nazm bohat sari dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color] ramish jee maya to kai roz sy forum par aa rahi hain aur apni shairi bhi post kar rahi hain aap fikre nau walay section main baa qaidgi sy aaya karain na
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Post by maya on Oct 8, 2008 12:59:12 GMT 5
wah fatimah zindagi ki haqeeqat ko samajhnay ki jo bhi koshish karta hy woh isi kism ki uljhan ka shikaar hota hy magar yeh bhi aik haqeeqat hy k jo uljhan ka shikaar hota hy usi ny sal main zindagi ka bhayd paaya hota hy aap ki nazmain hamaysha achi lagti hain thanx razi jee Razi Sahab zindgy ka mamla hay he itna ajeeb kay jo na janay wo tu tehra anjan aur jo talsah main neklay wo be har qadam per herani main mubtla hay. hosla afzai ka bay had shukria waslam fatimah
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Post by maya on Oct 8, 2008 13:01:39 GMT 5
Ramish jee aur Najma sahaba
apkay es ezhar ka shukria
waslam
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Post by maya on Oct 8, 2008 13:08:34 GMT 5
Rafi Sahab aap sy tu ab hmko gela tehra kay apka ezhar naqable bayan had tak mukhtasar hota hay....bayan mukhtasir hona bohat umda sahi lakin khbi tu kuch kaha kejeay.Cahalain !maan leay es medan kay khilari tu apkay ezhar ko samjh jatay hun gay lakin aap ham jaisay sekhnay waloun ko ko batlana apnay farz kay zumray mai lay aeay.anjan ko batlana be tu farz kay jaisa hay.. waslam Fatimah
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Oct 31, 2008 10:52:07 GMT 5
Zindgi pehlay he samjh mein nahi aa rahi thi abb mazeed uljh gai ..........
Nazam bahut achli lagi Fatimah ji...... Daad qabool farmaeay.....
Sada Khush raheay....
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 5, 2008 17:54:24 GMT 5
Zindgi pehlay he samjh mein nahi aa rahi thi abb mazeed uljh gai .......... Nazam bahut achli lagi Fatimah ji...... Daad qabool farmaeay..... Sada Khush raheay.... zindagi jitna ulajhti hy utna hi samajh aati hay zaki bhai
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Nov 6, 2008 18:04:55 GMT 5
Boht khoob Fatima Sahiba.
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Post by maya on Nov 7, 2008 11:23:06 GMT 5
Zaki Sahab aur Junaid sahab ap ka bay had shukria waslam fatimah
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