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Post by waqaar on Jun 8, 2007 18:17:40 GMT 5
ehl-e-sukhan!
aadaab,
kaafi 'arSay ba'd kuCHh~ zehn ko faraaghat milii. aur foran hi aik ma'mooli sii ghazal ho gaii. so paiSh kernay chala aaYa. apni baiSh qeemat aara' say nawaaziYay gaa. Shukriah!
waQaar
===================== 1. Yeh sadaa say hay daastaan-e-'iSHq toR deta hay imtahaan-e-'iShq
2. jaa chukaa mera raazdaar-e-ghazal jaa chukaa mera raazdaan-e-'iShq
3. khaak ho jaa,uuNga meN bh~ii ik din baaqi reh jaayega niShaan-e-'iShq
4. woh saraapa th~aa husn ka darYa tu saraapa hay aasmaan-e-'iShq
5. aas,ummeed, hoSlay TooTay dil ko laikin hay it^minaan-e-'iShq
6. toR aaYa hooN meN sabh~ii zindaaN Chh~oR aaYa hooN meN jahaan-e-'iShq
7. miT gaya raah-e-shoq maiN tu :waQaar: per raha tu bh~ii Shaadmaan-e-'iShq
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 8, 2007 22:39:10 GMT 5
ishq ki radeef ho aur us main achay mazmoon na niklain yeh bhala kaysay ho sakta hy aap ki saari ghazal ishq ki khobsoorat daastan liay huay hy aur khas taur par yeh shair toR aaYa hooN meN sabh~ii zindaaN Chh~oR aaYa hooN meN jahaan-e-'iShq wah wah haqeeqat k bohat hi qareeb hy yeh shair thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 8, 2007 22:53:53 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Waqaar sahib bohat ishq o muhabat maiN doob kar kahi hay yeh ghazal bohat khoob
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Post by khalid on Jun 9, 2007 7:05:02 GMT 5
jab talak tabsera kareY na waQaar na mukammal hai daastaan e ishqbaRey din baad koii taaaza ghazal aaii hai aap ki taraf se! aur kya khoob aaii hai! DAAD HAAZIR HAI!
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Post by dilshadnazmi on Jun 10, 2007 17:38:18 GMT 5
ehl-e-sukhan!
aadaab,
kaafi 'arSay ba'd kuCHh~ zehn ko faraaghat milii. aur foran hi aik ma'mooli sii ghazal ho gaii. so paiSh kernay chala aaYa. apni baiSh qeemat aara' say nawaaziYay gaa. Shukriah!
waQaar
===================== 1. Yeh sadaa say hay daastaan-e-'iSHq toR deta hay imtahaan-e-'iShq
2. jaa chukaa mera raazdaar-e-ghazal jaa chukaa mera raazdaan-e-'iShq
3. khaak ho jaa,uuNga meN bh~ii ik din baaqi reh jaayega niShaan-e-'iShq
4. woh saraapa th~aa husn ka darYa tu saraapa hay aasmaan-e-'iShq
5. aas,ummeed, hoSlay TooTay dil ko laikin hay it^minaan-e-'iShq
6. toR aaYa hooN meN sabh~ii zindaaN Chh~oR aaYa hooN meN jahaan-e-'iShq
7. miT gaya raah-e-shoq maiN tu :waQaar: per raha tu bh~ii Shaadmaan-e-'iShq waqaar sahib , salam _o_alaekum bhai matla_a khoob kaha hai aap ne , bahot pasand aaya , tamam ash_aar ishq ke hawale se bahot klhoob hain ,ishq ki mukhtalif kaifiyat ka aap ne ehata kiya hai , har do misron me , albatta shear no # 3 par nazr_e_cani farma lein to ,theek rahe ga , misra ula par dubara gour karein , pata nahi kiyon mujhe pad>hne me , aur rawani me kuch diq_qat pesh aa rahi hai , gazal pe meri dhero'n daad qabool kijiye
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Post by waqaar on Jun 13, 2007 1:23:09 GMT 5
ishq ki radeef ho aur us main achay mazmoon na niklain yeh bhala kaysay ho sakta hy aap ki saari ghazal ishq ki khobsoorat daastan liay huay hy aur khas taur par yeh shair toR aaYa hooN meN sabh~ii zindaaN Chh~oR aaYa hooN meN jahaan-e-'iShq wah wah haqeeqat k bohat hi qareeb hy yeh shair thanx razi razi SaaHeb,
aadaab,
'iShqiYa ghazal per aapki daad nah milay Yeh bh~ii bh~alaa kaisay ho sakta hay.
aapnay merii teHreer ko saraaha aur 'izzat say nawaazah, meN aapka mamnoon hooN.
Shukriah!
waQaar
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Post by waqaar on Jun 13, 2007 1:25:45 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Waqaar sahib bohat ishq o muhabat maiN doob kar kahi hay yeh ghazal bohat khoob rafi SaaHeb, Yeh aapka husn-e-naZ^ar hay. bahut Shukriah! sadaa khuSh rahYay! waQaar
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 11:58:18 GMT 5
Wah WaQar Bhai! Har aik sher khoobsoorat Har sher kay mazameen achhootay aur munfarid, daad hazir hai
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