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Post by Tanweer on Sept 24, 2008 7:39:29 GMT 5
ehbaab ke khidmat mein aik ghazal pesh karna chaho.N gaRango.N mein dhaal na saka' moorat teri tarash na paya Aks tera jo ma'n mein tha shahkaar bana mera
Lafzo.N mein qaed kar na saka' shaer mein ban na paya Kisi kalam ki takhleeq ko jewan bar-sar-e-pekaar bana mera
Khawhisho.N ko mein pa na saka' gadagar bhi mein ban na paya Taqdeer to he bata kiyon jewan bekaar bana mera
Zakhmo.N ko mein see na saka' rafogar bhi mein ban na paya Maseeha dair ki' par to he peshkaar bana mera
JanglouN mein ja na saka' ranjha-o-farhad mein ban na paya Sanam teray lubhanay say geet chehkaar bana mera
Janamo.N ki piyas mein bujha nan saka' Tanweer mein ban na paya Aapki junbish-e-nigaah say b^ut akhire^kaar bana meraTanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 24, 2008 9:36:48 GMT 5
Wah
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Sept 24, 2008 12:00:00 GMT 5
Bahut Khoob Tanweer Sahib.....
Alfaz bahut khoobsorat iste'maal keay hain app ne...
Sada Khush Raheay.....
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Post by Tanweer on Sept 25, 2008 1:38:18 GMT 5
Bohat inayat aapki Rafi saheb
Tanweer
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Post by Tanweer on Sept 25, 2008 1:39:18 GMT 5
Zaki saheb!
Bohat inayat aapki, pasandeedgi ka shukriya
Tanweer
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