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Post by neelofar on Jul 8, 2007 13:04:31 GMT 5
Pyaar to kerna aasaN hai per moshkil hai anjaam bhot rahe wafa me ham jaise to hoNge shikastaa kam bhot
ishq ka suraj tulluh hoaa ti andyaron ne gher liaa dil ki basti me hoti hai sham se phle shaam bhot
zakham bhot gahraa hai lekiin waqt ka marham bhar dega kab tak dil ko thaam ke baitheN dunya mee hai kaam bhot
jhooti baateN tum kerte ho wada khilafi aadat hai kis kis ki terdeed kro gey tum per hai ilzaam bhot
uss ne shayed yeh samjha ham uss ke naaz uthaeN ge bhool hai uss ki uss jaise haiN dunia me gulfaam bhot
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 9, 2007 13:25:33 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhhh Neelofer ji aap musalsal bohat acha likh rahi haiN daad haazir hay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 29, 2008 19:23:44 GMT 5
khoob hay neelofar ji bohat takheer say aap ki ghazal parhi daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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zaamin
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Post by zaamin on Jan 29, 2008 23:58:41 GMT 5
ishq ka suraj tulluh hoaa ti andyaron ne gher liaa dil ki basti me hoti hai sham se phle shaam bhot
zakham bhot gahraa hai lekiin waqt ka marham bhar dega kab tak dil ko thaam ke baitheN dunya mee hai kaam bhot
bahut khoob,neelofaer saahiba.saare hi ashaar bahut khoobsoorat hain.
pehle sher men kyaa aap shikastah-kaam kehna chaahtii hain?
daad qabool farmaayen
zaamin
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Post by kanwal on Feb 13, 2008 3:48:32 GMT 5
Pyaar to kerna aasaN hai per moshkil hai anjaam bhot rahe wafa me ham jaise to hoNge shikastaa kam bhot ishq ka suraj tulluh hoaa ti andyaron ne gher liaa dil ki basti me hoti hai sham se phle shaam bhot zakham bhot gahraa hai lekiin waqt ka marham bhar dega kab tak dil ko thaam ke baitheN dunya mee hai kaam bhot jhooti baateN tum kerte ho wada khilafi aadat hai kis kis ki terdeed kro gey tum per hai ilzaam bhot uss ne shayed yeh samjha ham uss ke naaz uthaeN ge bhool hai uss ki uss jaise haiN dunia me gulfaam bhot Neelofar jee bohat pyari ghazl kahi aap ne ,... daad e guL aapki nazR ,....
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 17:56:55 GMT 5
Daad denay ka faeda, aap nay acknowledge tau karni nahiN
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