meena
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Post by meena on Aug 29, 2008 19:27:34 GMT 5
WO...................!!!!!
us nai vaisay to qader na jaani us nai apni hee kee hai mun mani
lakin akser iqraar kerta hai…. haan!wo mujh sai piyar kerta hai
waqt kai saath saath waqt badla soch badli to piyar bhee badla
yun to main hee dua thee uskee dil kee dharkan,sada thee uskee
per na jaanay kiya kami see thee us kee aankhon main bhee nami see thee
wo machalta raha panaahon ko qaid kerta raha havaaon ko
baagh kee her kali uskee chahat bani na bani,per wo dil kee na rahat bani
us ko jub jub baharon nai thukraya lout ker phir wo maray hee paas aaya
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Post by Sukhanwar on Aug 29, 2008 23:59:49 GMT 5
meena ji achi nazm hay mujhy is ka khyaal bhipasand aaya aap ny boht saada lafzon main aik khoobsoorat kayfiat ko byaan kia hy nazm main kaai maqamaat par ahang aur rawaani bhi mojood hay kahin kahin kuch kami see reh gaai hy aap nay isi lagan sy apna adabi safar jaari rakha to yeh kami bhi door ho jaay gee thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 1, 2008 6:34:05 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhhhh
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