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Post by naheedv on Aug 11, 2008 4:47:50 GMT 5
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 11, 2008 21:54:52 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Naheed sahiba
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Post by Sukhanwar on Aug 11, 2008 22:26:07 GMT 5
naheed sahiba hasb e mamool aap ki ghazal boht umda hy khaas taur par mujhy maqta boht pasand aaya daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by naheedv on Aug 13, 2008 1:57:56 GMT 5
Rafi bhai and Razi bhai, aap donoN kee hosla afzaayee kaa be.had shukriya!
Naheed
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Post by saeed on Aug 14, 2008 5:15:01 GMT 5
khub kavish hai Naheed. Mubarak
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Post by naheedv on Aug 17, 2008 23:08:58 GMT 5
buhat shukriya Saeed!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Aug 25, 2008 22:25:35 GMT 5
Naheed Ji! Aik bahut umda ghazal per daad hazir hai.
Lafz manind maiN noon elaan kay saath aataa hai. Magar aap nay issay "Maanin" kay talaffuz main istemaal kia hai, jo fanni aur per theek nahiN hai! Mera mashwara manaiN tau teesray sher maiN Manind ki bajay "soorat" likhiyay.
Khawaahish-e-bay naam ki soorat hamaiN
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Post by naheedv on Aug 26, 2008 9:01:58 GMT 5
Naheed Ji! Aik bahut umda ghazal per daad hazir hai.
Lafz manind maiN noon elaan kay saath aataa hai. Magar aap nay issay "Maanin" kay talaffuz main istemaal kia hai, jo fanni aur per theek nahiN hai! Mera mashwara manaiN tau teesray sher maiN Manind ki bajay "soorat" likhiyay.
Khawaahish-e-bay naam ki soorat hamaiN
Aatif G, ghalati kee nishaan dahi kaa shukriya! maiN ye ghalati durust kar chuki hooN. Daad kaa shukriya Naheed
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Post by Atif Mirza on Aug 26, 2008 16:28:34 GMT 5
Aatif G, ghalati kee nishaan dahi kaa shukriya! maiN ye ghalati durust kar chuki hooN. Daad kaa shukriya Naheed U R welcome Naheed Sahiba! Masha Allah bahut baRa dil hai aap ka! Aik guzarish yeh keh image bhi badal dijiay warna baad maiN paRhnay waloN per achhchha taa'ssur nahiN paRay ga.
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Post by naheedv on Aug 29, 2008 6:35:45 GMT 5
Atif G, aap kee inaayat ke naye image kee taraf bhee meri tawajjoh dilwaai. nayaa image upload kar diyaa hai.
buhat shukriya Naheed
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 3, 2008 21:14:33 GMT 5
Bahut Shukriya Naheed sahiba! Aap ki aalaa zarfi hai!
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 26, 2008 16:14:49 GMT 5
ap ki majmooe shairi bahut umda hay magar lafz daira e kay hawalay say mayray tahfuzaat heiN kiun ka daira _e_ koe fa ilatun (mutafa) par tu likha ja sakta hay magar fa ilaa tun kay wazn par likhna jaiz nahi hay
thnx aqeel
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Post by naheedv on Sept 29, 2008 23:26:31 GMT 5
Aqeel g, meree shaa'iree pasaNd karne kaa buhat shukriya. maiN aap kee baat se itefaaq karti hooN ke daa'irah.e. ko faa.i.laa.tun par maiN ne bhee nahee daikhaa/paRhaa hai. magar aik baat jo maiN samjhee thee voh ye ke agar lafz.e.aainah/daairah ko faa.i."Nothing" par likhaa jaa saktaa hai tau daa.i.rah.e ko faa.i.laa.tun par bhee baaNdhaa jaa saktaa ho gaa. maiN koshish kar rahi hooN ke mujhey koi aisi micaal mil jaaye magar abhi tak faa.i.laa.tun ki micaal nahi mil saki hai. soch rahi hooN ke Akhtar bhai (Akhtar Shumaar) se kuch madad maaNgooN, ho saktaa hai kuch madad mil jaaye warnah misra' badalnaa paRe gaa.
shukriya Naheed
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Post by Tanweer on Oct 3, 2008 23:50:59 GMT 5
Naheed sahebaAik bohat khoobsurat ghazal share karnay par hamari janib say bohat si daad. aur maqta tu jan hay es ghazal ka Koi tha mujh mein he mujh say ham^kalam oski aab-o-taab mein rehna paraFaq't Tanweer
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Post by naheedv on Oct 4, 2008 1:27:38 GMT 5
buhat shukriya Tanweer saahab
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