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Post by neelofar on Jul 21, 2007 0:13:03 GMT 5
GHAZAL ******
AnkhoN ke raste koi dil me uter gaya bigraa naseeb thaa mera pal me saNwer gaya
TanhayioN ka soog manayeN kahan tlak Apni to woh missal jiaa aor mar gaya
ab zindagi ki sari fraghatt tumhare naam rsttaa mera wohi hai jo bas tere ghar gaya
etna to haqq hamara bhi hai zindagi pe dost mar jaayeN ham to log kaheN koun mar gaya
sahraa ki taptii rait bigaree gii meraa kya nas nas mee jab woh pyar ki bersat bher gaya ************************
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Post by dilshadnazmi on Jul 21, 2007 13:25:26 GMT 5
GHAZAL ****** AnkhoN ke raste koi dil me uter gaya bigraa naseeb thaa mera pal me saNwer gaya TanhayioN ka soog manayeN kahan tlak Apni to woh missal jiaa aor mar gaya ab zindagi ki sari fraghatt tumhare naam rsttaa mera wohi hai jo bas tere ghar gaya etna to haqq hamara bhi hai zindagi pe dost mar jaayeN ham to log kaheN koun mar gaya sahraa ki taptii rait bigaree gii meraa kya nas nas mee jab woh pyar ki bersat bher gaya ************************ ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, eak peyari aur bharpoor gazal ke liye meri janib se dher sari mubarak baad. dilshadnazmi
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 21, 2007 16:13:42 GMT 5
Neelofar Sahiba!
Bohat khoob, acha likha aap nay, achay khiyalaat
etna to haqq hamara bhi hai zindagi pe dost mar jaayeN ham to log kaheN koun mar gaya
Ye shair pasand aaya.
Daad hazir hay
Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 22, 2007 5:37:50 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat ghazal Neelofer ji daad qabool kejiay
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Post by khalid on Jul 25, 2007 6:42:15 GMT 5
etna to haqq hamara bhi hai zindagi pe dost mar jaayeN ham to log kaheN koun mar gaya
sahraa ki taptii rait bigaree gii meraa kya nas nas mee jab woh pyar ki bersat bher gaya bohot khoob neelofer saaheba! daad haazir hai!!!
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 25, 2007 16:58:38 GMT 5
bahut kamzoor ghazal hay mehnat ki zarorat hay sher seedhay saday hein
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 18:26:16 GMT 5
Aqeel Sahib ki baat ko dil per na lijiay ga, achhchhi ghazal hai, Daad qabool kijiay
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