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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2007 0:29:11 GMT 5
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 8, 2007 0:40:58 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat Razi bhai daad hazir hay
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Post by khalid on Nov 8, 2007 1:27:03 GMT 5
bohot khoob janaab razi bhaii!
aapki ye takhleeq aik gheir maamooli nazm hai aik zabaN zad e aam aur gheir mamooli mozu per. khuda karey ke hamaare chiraagh roshan, aur phool mehektey raheN. waqaii in ko in ko koii gazaNd nahiN pohNcha sakta!
daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2007 23:42:12 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat Razi bhai daad hazir hay shukria rafi tabasum sahab razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2007 23:52:00 GMT 5
bohot khoob janaab razi bhaii!
aapki ye takhleeq aik gheir maamooli nazm hai aik zabaN zad e aam aur gheir mamooli mozu per. khuda karey ke hamaare chiraagh roshan, aur phool mehektey raheN. waqaii in ko in ko koii gazaNd nahiN pohNcha sakta!
daad qubool keeje! khalid bhai shukar guzar hoon aap ki pazeerai k hawalay sy bhi aur aap ny chraagh jaltay rehnay k liay hamaray yaqeen ko jis tara saraha is hawalay sy bhi aap ka manoon hoon aap ki duaon main meri dua bhi shamil rahay gi thanx razi
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Post by waqaar on Nov 9, 2007 1:11:27 GMT 5
Razi bh~aa,i vaah SaaHeb. kYa khoobSoorat andaaz maiN aapnay ph~ool barsaaye haiN. Allaah keray aapkay chiraagh kabh~ii nah bujh~aiN. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 10, 2007 2:12:25 GMT 5
Razi bh~aa,i vaah SaaHeb. kYa khoobSoorat andaaz maiN aapnay ph~ool barsaaye haiN. Allaah keray aapkay chiraagh kabh~ii nah bujh~aiN. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar waqar sahib bohat shukria is pazeerai ka thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 10, 2007 2:18:36 GMT 5
maroof shai azm behzad nay mehfil e sukhan main is nazm ka manzoom jawab dia bohat khoobsoorat andaz hy aap k saath un ka jawab share kar raha hoon
magar tumhare paas jo charaaGh heN voh kab tumhare paas heN k voh tau KHud hi apni raushani meN qaid heN
voh jin ko phuul jaan kar tum apne haath meN liye kisi ke muntazir ho aek umr se zaraa saa Ghaur tau karo voh phuul kab heN voh tau dasht be-basi ke saKHt-tar babuul heN
suno saroN ki fasl jo ugaii thii ab us pe sunDioN kaa vaar he yeh saari sunDiaN heN "lashkari" kahaN se laao ge tum apni bartari k tum charaGh aur phuul ke fareb meN nah raushani hi paa sake nah phuul hi khilaa sake
suno mire bhi paas Ghaaliban charaGh heN mire bhi paas phuul heN magar saroN ki fasl ki talaash he k ab saroN ki fasl par tau sunDioN kaa vaar he yeh tum bhi jaante ho saari sunDiaN heN "lashkari".....
zindah-baad razi saaHib zindaah baad! aap ki nazm mujhe sar se pair tak hilaa gaii.yeh nazm Avaami be-basi kaa nauHah he.aisaa nauHah jo likhaa tau aap ke qalam se gayaa,magar har ahl-e-dard ki avaaz ban gayaa.maiN yeh nazm biradaram KHaalid masuud ke colum meN paRh chukaa thaa,magar us vaqt mere andar utnaa rad'd-e-Amal paidaa nahiiN huaa thaa jitnaa yahaaN meHfil meN huaa. muAaf kiijiye gaa is nazm ke ta'as'sur meN, maiN bhi kuchh ulTe siidhe misre likh gayaa,darguzar farmaaiye gaa. allaah aap ke qalam ko maziid quv'vat aur aap ke lafzoN meN be-andaazah barakat ataa farmaaye,aamiin.
KHair-aNdesh: Azm Behzad
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Post by shahkaar on Nov 11, 2007 13:13:56 GMT 5
razi bhai
buhut khoob
"palestine" ke awam ke jazbaat ki akkaassi kerti yeh nazm pasand aye
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 12, 2007 16:46:13 GMT 5
razi bhai buhut khoob "palestine" ke awam ke jazbaat ki akkaassi kerti yeh nazm pasand aye ji bas aysay hi samjhain is nazm ko thanx razi
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Post by Tanweer on May 12, 2008 4:22:03 GMT 5
Razi Bhaee!
Bohat he achay, Khoobsurat hay aapki aata.
Tanweer
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 12, 2008 23:40:04 GMT 5
Wah Razi Bhai! bahut umda ghazal hai.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 17, 2008 8:44:56 GMT 5
Razi Bhaee! Bohat he achay, Khoobsurat hay aapki aata. Tanweertanweer bhai nazm pasand karnay ka shukria
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 17, 2008 8:45:33 GMT 5
Wah Razi Bhai! bahut umda ghazal hai.
aatif bhai ghazal nahin nazm hay
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