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NAZM
Jul 4, 2007 16:34:21 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Jul 4, 2007 16:34:21 GMT 5
aahat -------
sunai di wohi makhsoos aahet wohi tham tham ke chalna aor rukna! wohi kuch gungonana aor haNsna! woh aahet aa rahi hai paas mere ke usski beqarari aor khushboo mere ander samayi ja rahi hai woh mere lams aor qurbet se jaise bhot simti lajayii ja rahi hai hawasoNper bhi chayi ja rahii hai mujhe gercha pata hai ke ye aahet fareb e aarzoo hai kuch nhi hai hum apne aap ko bhla rahe haiN tamach waqt ke yuN khaa rahen haiN ------------------------------------------------------
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NAZM
Jul 4, 2007 23:17:36 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 4, 2007 23:17:36 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Neelo ji
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NAZM
Feb 23, 2008 11:49:54 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Feb 23, 2008 11:49:54 GMT 5
neelofer sahiba hayrat hy main ny aap ki yeh nazm boht dair sy parhi aur afsos hua k pehlay kion na parhi bohat see posts daykhna hoti hain mujhy pooray system ko chalana hota hy .. chotti chotti ranjishain payda hoti hain un ko sambhaalna hota hy so main baaz auqaat achi tehreeon sy mehrom reh jaata hoon aap ki nazm ki tareef na karna bukhl ho ga main aap ko bohat see daad dayta hoon thanx razi
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NAZM
Mar 14, 2008 2:44:47 GMT 5
Post by kanwal on Mar 14, 2008 2:44:47 GMT 5
Bohat umdaa Neelofar jee ,... Aik khubsoorat si nazM par daad ke phooL aapki nazR ,...
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NAZM
Apr 8, 2008 0:56:42 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 8, 2008 0:56:42 GMT 5
Wah Neelofar kia khhosoorat aur mutassir kun nazm hai....
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NAZM
Apr 16, 2008 10:59:31 GMT 5
Post by nadeem on Apr 16, 2008 10:59:31 GMT 5
Neelofar aap ki nazm bahut achi hai aur is maen misroon ki tateeb bhi bahut achi hai khushi hoi kay aap kay khiyaalaat maen yaksooii hai albatta is misray ko dubara kahaen
mujhe gercha pata hai ke ye aahet
yahan keh wazn say kharij hai agar yeh kay hota to theek tha kiyon kay keh ki harkat aadhay lafz kay barabar hai aur kay ki harkat poray lafz kay barabar hai mayra mashwara yoon hai
mujhay maloom hai aey dil ye aahat
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NAZM
Apr 20, 2008 21:31:39 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 20, 2008 21:31:39 GMT 5
Neelofar Sahiba aap ki ywh ghaeb rehnay wali aadat achchi nahiN, kum az kum aik jumlay ya aik lafz ka jawab hi day diya karaiN.
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NAZM
Apr 23, 2008 16:38:38 GMT 5
Post by sunita on Apr 23, 2008 16:38:38 GMT 5
Atif sahab neelofer ghayab to nahin rehtiN agar aap dekhen to woh kal bhi aayiiN aur aaj bhi lekin bas kisi ko jawaab dena shaayad unhe.........
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NAZM
May 9, 2008 17:33:20 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on May 9, 2008 17:33:20 GMT 5
Yehi tau achhchhi aadat nahiN hai
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