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Post by neelofar on Apr 4, 2008 23:30:43 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Aik chehra jo khawab jaisa hai aks uss ka gulaab jaisaa hai
soz e douraaN ka zikr kya kijye saaz e jaanaN rabbab jaisa hai
ghum me bechainyaN bhot hi sahi sukh bhi mera azaab jaisa hai
uss ka kirdaar kh raha hai k woh na mokammal kitaab jaisa hai
aor sab to hain baab e zeest mere bas wohi intesaab jaisa hai
woh jo chupp ho to bolta hai bhot uss ka lhjaaa khitaab jaisa hai ----------------------------------
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Apr 5, 2008 0:02:09 GMT 5
Mukhtasar behr maiN is khoobsoorat ghazal par daad hazir hay Neelofer sahiba
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Post by naheedv on Apr 5, 2008 4:46:02 GMT 5
Neelofar,
shaayad aap kaa kalaam pehle paRh rakhaa hao magar yaad naheeN paRtaa hai. bahar kaif, aap ne achi ghazal kahi hai. daad paish karti hoon.
shukriya Naheed
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Post by neelofar on Apr 5, 2008 10:20:15 GMT 5
naheed g ! mujhe khud yaad nhi rehta....momkin hai ye ghazal phle sukhanwar per likh chuki honn.... bherhal bhot sukria aap ne pasand ki...............
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Post by Sukhanwar on Apr 6, 2008 2:05:44 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba achi ghazal hay yeh shair pasand aaya aur khaas taur par is k pehlay misray ka to jawab nahi
woh jo chupp ho to bolta hai bhot uss ka lhjaaa khitaab jaisa hai
thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 6, 2008 12:46:58 GMT 5
Neelofar! Aik bahut umda aur khoobsoorat ghazal hai aap ki. KhaaS taur per yeh sher
aor sab to hain baab e zeest mere bas wohi intesaab jaisa hai
Meri taraf say daad qabool kijiay.
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