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Post by Ghazalsara on Jul 14, 2007 22:02:43 GMT 5
by Haneef Tareen,Saudiarabia
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Post by shahkaar on Jul 14, 2007 23:16:55 GMT 5
naveed saheb
aaj ke halaat ke aap ne haqeeqat pasandaana akkasi ki hay, mein aap ke khayalat se ittefaq kerta hoon, aur khushi ki baat hay keh aap ne dil ki baat zabaan per laa ker ham jaisay bay zabanoon(yani kehnay likhnay mein peechay reh janay waloon) ke dil baat bhi keh di hay.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 15, 2007 0:30:06 GMT 5
aap ki Ghazal parh kar ahsaas hota hay keh aaj ka sha,ir waqa,ee tareekh bhi likh raha hay yeh ghazal parh kar kal ko jab is ghazal kay khayalaat par baat ho gi lazeman aaj kay haalaat bhi zair e bahs aaiNgay bohat khoob Naveed sahib
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 15, 2007 10:44:37 GMT 5
achi ghazal share ki aap ny thanx razi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 15, 2007 21:07:16 GMT 5
Nauveed sahab masla ye hay ke kisi khabar ya khabroN ko arkan e afaeel par lay anay say kia shairi ban jati hay is ghazal kay tanazur mein ye ap say aik sawal hay umeed hay rehnumae karein gay
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Post by khalid on Jul 16, 2007 7:14:57 GMT 5
That,s better haneef sb!
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Post by Ghazalsara on Jul 18, 2007 5:22:09 GMT 5
janab rafi,janab razi,janab shaksar,janab khalid! ghazal par tawajjo par mamnoon hoon.Haneef Tareen ,Sau ki ye ghazal pasand karnay ka shukria..aqeel sahib,aap agar ghazal ki wusat k tamannai hain to mojodah halat ko ghazlanay k zaroor qail hon gay.aap khud ko halat say kiasay alahda rakh saktay hain.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 18:01:52 GMT 5
Naveed Bhai achhchhi ghazal hai. Issay bhi asasa main hona chahiay.
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:30:28 GMT 5
Bahut hi achi Gazal ke liye daad kahna kafi nahin, par kya kahoon isi soch mein Bahut Khoob tab tak Devi
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